HOME | DD
SonicFF — Bad Profile Example
by-nc-nd
Published: 2011-06-20 11:54:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 12157; Favourites: 121; Downloads: 25
Redirect to original
Description
Here is an example of what I DO NOT WANT TO SEE.There are several things wrong with this profile Picture.
She's a hybrid... no hybrids in my contest. Looks like a cross between Blaze/Rouge/Amy/Sonia She has Blaze/Amy/Faith's hair style She also has Amy's boots The color of her fur is inconstant and unrealistic looking (colors don't blend nor make sense for a Mobian). Eyes are two different colors... Heterochromia iridium (two different-colored eyes within a single individual) and heterochromia iridis (a variety of color within a single iris) are relatively rare and result from increased or decreased pigmentation of the iris. If you don't know what that means then you shouldn't be using two different eye colors in the first place. She's 14 yet her boobs are the size of Texas... be some what reasonable with proportions Her outfit wouldn't work with riding... skirts don't make for Riders (nor do heels unless you know what you're doing) the information provided in her likes and dislikes contradict each other (her liking of fighting but hating it) Her personality is unstable and on the verge of multi-personality. Being overly loving/caring but hardcore with anger doesn't mix well. Her profile provides history which I don't want (the thing about being an orphan and Eggman raising her). She's wearing a Chaos Emerald around her neck... need I say more? Too much power for one character, makes her unrelatable and too powerful She can run faster than Sonic.... *peeved* Is in love with too many contradictory official characters... Her board is too powerful as well (I'm limiting the number of points that can be distributed to 14... making it 14/20)There's a lot of other things but I think you guys understand the gist of what I DON'T WANT TO SEE
Specifically, this sheet has to do with Journal Entry
Horrible fan character/Artwork (c) Thomaier
*made in Alias Sketchbook Pro/Photoshop
Related content
Comments: 328
I can't decide whose Mary-Sue is better, yours or ChaosCroc's [link]
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
OH, that is just awesome lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
CAN I HAVE HER PWEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
and she's waaaaay too tall. sonic himself is just 100 cm or a meter
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
just saying, also the attire part on Destiny's profile doesn't really explain much about the outfit
that's just what I think 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hedgehog and chipmonk combo
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
That's a hybrid... so it wouldn't work for my particular fan world (because they don't exist).
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Wow this chick is SHIT
Mary=Sue ALERT
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
wait..she likes fighting..and hates it too? well then..this is just weird :I awesome mary-sue btw! i like the examples of them because i only just learned what they are today ^^ *isn't being sarcastic*
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Aw, I see.
Well, I'm glad you know now.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's impossible for there to be a Mobian hybrid, anyway. They are either their mother's species or their father's species, with girls normally being their mother's species and boys normally being their father's species, with few exceptions.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
That's according to the Archie version of Mobians... I mean, I believe it too but the fans can do whatever they want with it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Wow.... 0________0 her boobs are ten times bigger then rouges.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's what the title says... bad profile example lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yeah, we got another Mary-Sue here XDDD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah, compared to her, Rouge doesn't HAVE boobs! Lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hahaha, I agree with you there.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
(Just so you know, Sakura means CHERRY blossom. ;3)
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh dang lol
my bad, not even a good translation
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's fine.
(I only know this because of a book series and my sister. XD)
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I know mary sue's suck but, what's wrong with being overpowered? Isn't that good? D: Wouldn't you rather be overpowered than under?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
When you're super powerful and no one can beat you, it makes the character seem unrealistic and unrelatable. People tend to like characters they can relate to, and if a character can overpower any obstacle (or solve any problem) you tend not to believe they're "real."
Does that make sense? It would also be a boring story because no matter what you'd know the character would win every time.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ah yes it does.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
When you say OCs do you mean "original characters" or "fan characters"
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
The only head scratcher I have with this is her colouration. Apart from her hair I don't see how bright pink fur is unacceptible, while pink fur (which I believe two Canon characters have) are okay?
Don't worry, I have no flurescent pink hedgehog hybrids XD
I have some kind of half plant alien that doesn't ride anything nor does he fight that much as he's a pacifist.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I didn't do the coloring too bad
I should have put neons.... but I was trying to point out how there's all these weird colors in her hair that doesn't really make sense for a mobian
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I see
That's fine. It was just something I was wondering about.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
<= Prev | | Next =>