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Published: 2011-06-20 11:54:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 12157; Favourites: 121; Downloads: 25
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Here is an example of what I DO NOT WANT TO SEE.There are several things wrong with this profile Picture.
She's a hybrid... no hybrids in my contest. Looks like a cross between Blaze/Rouge/Amy/Sonia She has Blaze/Amy/Faith's hair style She also has Amy's boots The color of her fur is inconstant and unrealistic looking (colors don't blend nor make sense for a Mobian). Eyes are two different colors... Heterochromia iridium (two different-colored eyes within a single individual) and heterochromia iridis (a variety of color within a single iris) are relatively rare and result from increased or decreased pigmentation of the iris. If you don't know what that means then you shouldn't be using two different eye colors in the first place. She's 14 yet her boobs are the size of Texas... be some what reasonable with proportions Her outfit wouldn't work with riding... skirts don't make for Riders (nor do heels unless you know what you're doing) the information provided in her likes and dislikes contradict each other (her liking of fighting but hating it) Her personality is unstable and on the verge of multi-personality. Being overly loving/caring but hardcore with anger doesn't mix well. Her profile provides history which I don't want (the thing about being an orphan and Eggman raising her). She's wearing a Chaos Emerald around her neck... need I say more? Too much power for one character, makes her unrelatable and too powerful She can run faster than Sonic.... *peeved* Is in love with too many contradictory official characters... Her board is too powerful as well (I'm limiting the number of points that can be distributed to 14... making it 14/20)There's a lot of other things but I think you guys understand the gist of what I DON'T WANT TO SEE
Specifically, this sheet has to do with Journal Entry
Horrible fan character/Artwork (c) Thomaier
*made in Alias Sketchbook Pro/Photoshop
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Comments: 328
the chachter looks better than the profile
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Mm. Kinda reminds me of my fancharacter who has been awarded "Well Balanced OC" not too long ago. She was created by Eggman to infiltrate Mobius with her cute looks and backstab them. She was teached to do good. I don't know why I'm mentioning her. It's just that it seems characters created by Eggman can still be good.
Every character needs alot of effort and time to be good. Example, Edwina started off as a dumb Tails recolor with tits. Now she is nearly sucessful and has a tiny fanbase (who aren't trolls, right Sonichu?)
Don't give up on your character if he or she is a Mary Sue. Work on them! Spend time with design and story/personality/whatever and you'll soon have a well balanced OC as well.
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I agree, if you work on characters they can develop more.
However, I pasted this together in about... 10 seconds... so a lot of work was done to make it sound contradictory and unattractive for a character.
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Yeah. Exactly. And don't you dare recolor over Sonic X screenshots.
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L-O-L. 
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man do I hate this girl just lookin at her and I really doubt she can be the best extreme gear rider if she just started last week and she seems WAAAY to cutsey and won't all that power be too overwhelming for her? you did a good job she's horrible you really went all out to make her bad. lol
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no prob if allowed I'm not afraid to show hate for a character (meaning if they were meant to be hated like that)
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I'd say, as to her personality, her likes and dislikes, this is not contradicting, this is more of swinging between moods and having twin personalities, which you would commonly find in people born under the Gemini sign. Depending on her birth date, if she fell under Gemini, then she could have these switching personalities.
Aside from a few rough edges, she seems okay to me.
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You really think that?
Oh well, to each their own.
I think it's an absolute dreadful character for... "normal" reasons.
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I LOVE how her board looks like it would shatter if she stepped on it XD
(or is it made of fairy dust?)
love classic examples of bad characters, and you really nailed it. yes I would deffinantly say that is what you DO NOT want to see XD!
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Lol thank you
Yes her board does look like it'll shatter.
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Team Typhoon (which the members are full)
Team Babylon (need two more members)
and two other teams that I have not named yet
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ok.. and the pic is officaly done.. one sec nead to right the team
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Great, I saw it...
Feel free to submit a second entry.
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i did, and i think i forgot to say that hes eleven
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thanks... im gonan draw other things that most humans dont no of..
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There's more then one extream gear type?
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What are they? Also what is the "Limet"?
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The Lineart?
It's the line you use to make the art.
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No for the bord it says Dash, Limit, Power, and Curve. What do you mean limit?
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Oh, I mean that there's a limit for how long the dash can last.
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oh. And the types of extream gear?
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Got it! I'll post mye entery in a few minets. I hope you like it.
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she is sooooooo NOT cute she sucks
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Dude, that hair is giving me a friggin seizure
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Man, I'm kinda tempted to sign up for this, but the way things are going with the friggin mary-sue n shiznit like that, I'm not entirely sure. Besides.... I've never played a Riders game before so I have no clue what limit n stuff mean.
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I'd welcome any entries.
I was just giving an example what I do not want to see in the contest--the comic labeled "SonicFF Contest" is all about what I do want to see though.
and you don't need to know about the Riders stuff to enter, I can help with that if you're worried about it
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Hehe, awesome... Possibly expect something from Blue the Otter... or Turtle... Can't decide
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uh oh i did my charachter on paint damn! do we have to draw it like this?
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Not To Sound Dumb But,
Are There Any Exceptions For Hybrids?
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There are not... can't you choose between animals?
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Ok...Thanks For Telling Me
Its Just That I Was Using A Hybrid That I've Had For A While...
I Can Use Another Character Though
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