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Description Here is an example of what I DO NOT WANT TO SEE.

There are several things wrong with this profile Picture.

She's a hybrid... no hybrids in my contest.
Looks like a cross between Blaze/Rouge/Amy/Sonia
She has Blaze/Amy/Faith's hair style
She also has Amy's boots
The color of her fur is inconstant and unrealistic looking (colors don't blend nor make sense for a Mobian).
Eyes are two different colors... Heterochromia iridium (two different-colored eyes within a single individual) and heterochromia iridis (a variety of color within a single iris) are relatively rare and result from increased or decreased pigmentation of the iris. If you don't know what that means then you shouldn't be using two different eye colors in the first place.
She's 14 yet her boobs are the size of Texas... be some what reasonable with proportions
Her outfit wouldn't work with riding... skirts don't make for Riders (nor do heels unless you know what you're doing)
the information provided in her likes and dislikes contradict each other (her liking of fighting but hating it)
Her personality is unstable and on the verge of multi-personality. Being overly loving/caring but hardcore with anger doesn't mix well.
Her profile provides history which I don't want (the thing about being an orphan and Eggman raising her).
She's wearing a Chaos Emerald around her neck... need I say more?
Too much power for one character, makes her unrelatable and too powerful
She can run faster than Sonic.... *peeved*
Is in love with too many contradictory official characters...
Her board is too powerful as well (I'm limiting the number of points that can be distributed to 14... making it 14/20)

There's a lot of other things but I think you guys understand the gist of what I DON'T WANT TO SEE



Specifically, this sheet has to do with Journal Entry


Horrible fan character/Artwork (c) Thomaier

*made in Alias Sketchbook Pro/Photoshop
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Comments: 328

RavenStrandestra [2011-07-13 03:01:50 +0000 UTC]

*belch* you just made me throw up blood!!! yuck I completely think this is the worst character EVER, good way of explaining it though I'll give you credit on that

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SonicFF In reply to RavenStrandestra [2011-07-13 06:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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JaySadistWolf In reply to ??? [2011-07-12 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Ew..... o-e So this is a perfect Mary-sue......... I could not imagine..... such a thing..... this reallys inspires me to make sure no OC of mine is like this right here.... thank you for putting this up!

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SonicFF In reply to JaySadistWolf [2011-07-12 03:31:53 +0000 UTC]

LoL you are so welcome

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JaySadistWolf In reply to SonicFF [2011-07-12 03:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Even if my OC is some mix of something.... It is not what I clearly seen today. This is the ultimate Mary-sue.

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SonicFF In reply to JaySadistWolf [2011-07-12 03:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Indeed (I just don't understand why it has to be a mix... I'm sure there are animals that have the qualities that fit the mixed part of fan characters fairly well).

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silver-lover-forever In reply to ??? [2011-07-10 07:32:49 +0000 UTC]

i dont quite understand what the "Extreme Gear Type, Dash, Limit, Power, and Curve" mean

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SonicFF In reply to silver-lover-forever [2011-07-10 07:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you don't understand it you don't need to fill it out.
It's not that important yet.

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silver-lover-forever In reply to SonicFF [2011-07-10 07:39:50 +0000 UTC]

I put something in anyway
if it's wrong I can fix it later
I'm going to submit my entry in a few minutes
even though the file is a JPEG I managed to use it on MS paint and I hope you like it

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OblivionAlbawk In reply to ??? [2011-07-09 13:26:22 +0000 UTC]

She's beautiful,although,one of my characters is an orphan she's not quite..*Looks back at picture and laughs* This is absolutely brilliant,I'm faving this and watching you.

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SonicFF In reply to OblivionAlbawk [2011-07-09 15:38:37 +0000 UTC]

LoL thank you ever so much

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kuroidia42 In reply to ??? [2011-07-08 03:17:56 +0000 UTC]

how come hybrids aren't allowed?

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SonicFF In reply to kuroidia42 [2011-07-08 03:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Because hybrids don't fit into the world I've created for my fan fiction. I'm not saying they're bad, I just won't have any in my comic though.

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kuroidia42 In reply to SonicFF [2011-07-08 04:37:42 +0000 UTC]

oh ok!

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Shadowfiance2 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 11:33:27 +0000 UTC]

"The color of her fur is inconstant and unrealistic looking (colors don't blend nor make sense for a Mobian)"
I...have a racoon...does that count?

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SonicFF In reply to Shadowfiance2 [2011-07-07 18:04:01 +0000 UTC]

The purpose for that is I don't want a character that's pink and then has rainbow hair or something... Hair doesn't "naturally" do that.

Anyway, a raccoon character or like a raccoon as a pet?

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Shadowfiance2 In reply to SonicFF [2011-07-07 19:44:59 +0000 UTC]

oh ok. raccoon character

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SonicFF In reply to Shadowfiance2 [2011-07-07 19:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, if you think the raccoon character fits within the guidelines I've set then go for it!

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Shadowfiance2 In reply to SonicFF [2011-07-07 19:55:59 +0000 UTC]

i have 2, the raccoon and his older sis, they're not the same species but they have that bro and sis relationship. and for skirts, can skourts work?(skirts with shorts under)

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SonicFF In reply to Shadowfiance2 [2011-07-07 21:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, skirts work.

And cool

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noelani4 In reply to ??? [2011-07-02 02:32:30 +0000 UTC]

when i first looked at this, the first thing i noticed was the board. i really didn't like it!

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SonicFF In reply to noelani4 [2011-07-02 02:38:53 +0000 UTC]

LoL that's good to know

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Fargosis16 In reply to ??? [2011-07-01 02:14:14 +0000 UTC]

she is so the long lost sister of espio fangirl recolor!

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SonicFF In reply to Fargosis16 [2011-07-01 03:42:33 +0000 UTC]

what?

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Fargosis16 In reply to SonicFF [2011-07-01 13:02:58 +0000 UTC]

nvm

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AshletteRosaldo In reply to ??? [2011-06-28 03:30:46 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe I'm saying this but, she doesn't seem MARY SUE enough.

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SonicFF In reply to AshletteRosaldo [2011-06-28 04:23:24 +0000 UTC]

I know, she needs to be 1/2 god, 1/2 demon, 1/2 angel, 1/2 ghost.... is that enough halfs?

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AshletteRosaldo In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-28 05:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Try part. And her breasts should be more around the size of Alaska, the ACTUAL biggest state in America. XD Adn I think what's really missing is incorrect spelling and texting grammar. XD I'm just used to that more. Kagami Kawaiine is a Mary Sue vocaloid making fun of other mary sue/gary stu vocaloids. BEST VOCALOID EVAR! or something around that spelling is a vid on youtube introducing her and her unoriginal backstory. Check it out. XD I just love her, she's so funny.

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SonicFF In reply to AshletteRosaldo [2011-06-28 05:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, I know but Alaska is too unrealistic... Texas is just right

LoL vocaloid evar? haha

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AshletteRosaldo In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-28 05:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Yup. We all love her cuz she's so funny even tho she isn't trying to be. sango made her. (I forgot the numbers after her name, but I think a 3 is involved.) She hates on Miku in EVERY ONE OF HER COVERS!!! XD
Miku suk a$$u~
XD vocaloid.wikia.com shows the actual vocaloids, and her voice is a very screwed up one of Gackpoid Kamui's. XD

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SonicFF In reply to AshletteRosaldo [2011-06-28 05:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness gracious, extreme people make me happy

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AshletteRosaldo In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-28 06:15:12 +0000 UTC]

Ditto. XD I just love that part...MIKU SUK A$SU~~~!!!

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MohAlQassemi In reply to ??? [2011-06-27 22:46:57 +0000 UTC]

How can she be as tall as me irl? O-o My god she's a freak!

I think I avoided every single one of those negatory mistakes.

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SonicFF In reply to MohAlQassemi [2011-06-27 22:56:27 +0000 UTC]

LoL good job

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to ??? [2011-06-27 09:29:33 +0000 UTC]

i have a question. My character Risky the tiger has bangs like Amy but the rest of her looks nothing like any of the other characters. And I mean it's actually very common like tails has bangs like that so....ugh let me just get to my point or this will go on FOREV XD my character has bangs like Amy's and i was just wondering if that would be ok because that's the only thing about her that resembles any of the characters they don't even point in the same direction they are just the same size so would that be allowed?

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SonicFF In reply to Freedom-the-batxD [2011-06-27 10:33:58 +0000 UTC]

I would have to see her, but it sounds fine.

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-27 11:24:07 +0000 UTC]

okie dokie, i will draw a quickie, but I don't have a scanner....oh well i will figure something out XDDD

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SonicFF In reply to Freedom-the-batxD [2011-06-27 11:36:18 +0000 UTC]

You can take a picture of it with a camera or a phone.

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-27 11:40:40 +0000 UTC]

I know but i just don't know how good it would turn out, y'know like the quality, I'm pretty sure it would look just fine...sure I'll do that XD

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SonicFF In reply to Freedom-the-batxD [2011-06-27 11:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay dokay

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-27 12:02:40 +0000 UTC]

oh and I was wondering since you want to see her I am just gonna do a quick pic of her for you to see so do you want it colored?

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SonicFF In reply to Freedom-the-batxD [2011-06-27 12:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Eventually I would like to know the colors

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-28 04:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Alright I will just color it

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to Freedom-the-batxD [2011-06-27 09:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh I forgot one more thing. She does not have the same amount of bangs as Amy she has 4 bang thing-a-ma-bobs XDDD

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Freedom-the-batxD In reply to Freedom-the-batxD [2011-06-27 09:38:27 +0000 UTC]

And I just looked at a drawing of her from a while back...and apparently they are not the same size XD I am really stupid XDDD

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BlazeTheCatFan1995 In reply to ??? [2011-06-25 12:47:05 +0000 UTC]

My eyes are bleeding by just looking at her lol

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SonicFF In reply to BlazeTheCatFan1995 [2011-06-25 21:06:41 +0000 UTC]

LoL that's what bad fan characters do

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animekat12 In reply to ??? [2011-06-24 08:52:35 +0000 UTC]

oh gawd, i can't breathe.... laughing so hard XDDDDDDDDDDD

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SonicFF In reply to animekat12 [2011-06-24 08:53:26 +0000 UTC]

LoL sorry for incapacitating your lungs

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animekat12 In reply to SonicFF [2011-06-24 09:06:15 +0000 UTC]

its oki XD

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