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SpellboundCanvas β Inmate Rarity Remake
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Published: 2015-09-09 20:00:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 10143; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 23
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An alternate ending to Suited for for Success where Rarity's design's were so terrible, she was arrested for fashion crimes and was punished with ironically, another fasion crimeOriginal:Inmate Rarity
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alright, let's get started
the "lock" on their horns is a smart idea, noone wants a magic-user roam freely in a prison
derpy as guard, oh well... we all know what she will say when they all escape because of a "mistake" e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
the look on rarity's face, I can almost see her jumping onto a couch and cry
the overall idea not bad, but here are some things you might change:
the way the dress of vinyl looks like: the left leg of her is kinda "blown up", and on the right one I am missing the border between leg and body
the barbwire could be a bit more periodic
maybe try to make both background and characters with the same artstyle, that would be more "pleasing" for the eye
but this is all just nitpicking, overall its a nice work. and as I am a beginner myself, I'm not sure if I'm even qualified to write a critique, but you requested one, and I rarely see critiques on artwork of people who don't have thousands of watchers. also, friendship is magic, sharing is caring, I hope you are not disappointed with this critique
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The βfashistβ police
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Forget the strict laws, Derpy as an officer in a jail is about as wrong as it gets ...
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I find it more likely she would end up in jail for assaulting royalty due to what she did to Blue Blood at the Galla. Even if it's BS charges I could see him pulling strings to make sure it happened as a bit of petty revenge.
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How long does a pony get in the slammer for "fashion crime"?
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Her outfit, uh R1T6HY? I have no clue what that means. Righty?
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(Insert alicorn princess OC here): I officially pardon my favorite dressmaker
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Celestia: Pardon denied you do not have the proper authority to release inmates from Canterlot Royal Prison!
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(Insert alicorn princess OC here): But without Rarity, who is gonna tailor and make dresses? You can't wear Applejacks horse manure shovelin' boots to the Gala.
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She's not the only tailor in Equrstera or Ponyville. They'll make do with others
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(hey are you taking request for prisoner ponies?)
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Not right now. I'm still working on 6 requests from MLP forums, and after that I'll be working a two part comic request. You can give me your request now but keep in mind it will be queued for sometime.
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Celestia locked up (in Sombra's dungeon) and Treehugger locked up (the fandom depicts her as a stoner, so it's easy to see that happen).
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Must've been arrested by the Fashion Police.Β
Acting all dramatic about it won't help you this time, Rarity.
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I thought she was waiting for revenge on Pinkie Pie for getting her in jail. XD
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Orange is the new black, Rarity! (See what I did there? 
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