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SpellboundCanvas β€” Inmate Rarity Remake

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Published: 2015-09-09 20:00:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 10143; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 23
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Description An alternate ending to Suited for for Success where Rarity's design's were so terrible, she was arrested for fashion crimes and was punished with ironically, another fasion crime

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DarkZ67 [2025-08-11 23:06:19 +0000 UTC]

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nadroj345678 [2024-09-04 14:56:43 +0000 UTC]

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thelordhimself [2015-09-09 20:50:44 +0000 UTC]

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alright, let's get started

the "lock" on their horns is a smart idea, noone wants a magic-user roam freely in a prison

derpy as guard, oh well... we all know what she will say when they all escape because of a "mistake" e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>

the look on rarity's face, I can almost see her jumping onto a couch and cry

the overall idea not bad, but here are some things you might change:

the way the dress of vinyl looks like: the left leg of her is kinda "blown up", and on the right one I am missing the border between leg and body

the barbwire could be a bit more periodic

maybe try to make both background and characters with the same artstyle, that would be more "pleasing" for the eye

but this is all just nitpicking, overall its a nice work. and as I am a beginner myself, I'm not sure if I'm even qualified to write a critique, but you requested one, and I rarely see critiques on artwork of people who don't have thousands of watchers. also, friendship is magic, sharing is caring, I hope you are not disappointed with this critique

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sharknadoiscool [2018-10-27 21:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Was she arrested by the fashion police

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prometheushunter2 In reply to sharknadoiscool [2019-02-18 10:40:38 +0000 UTC]

The β€œfashist” police

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rautamiekka [2018-10-12 20:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Forget the strict laws, Derpy as an officer in a jail is about as wrong as it gets ...

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KageKamen In reply to rautamiekka [2019-11-23 19:34:18 +0000 UTC]

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TheoWinters [2018-07-23 06:26:16 +0000 UTC]

I find it more likely she would end up in jail for assaulting royalty due to what she did to Blue Blood at the Galla. Even if it's BS charges I could see him pulling strings to make sure it happened as a bit of petty revenge.

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gregterry480 [2016-11-08 17:20:38 +0000 UTC]

How long does a pony get in the slammer for "fashion crime"?

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KageKamen In reply to gregterry480 [2019-11-23 19:33:27 +0000 UTC]

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FacelessSoles [2016-11-08 08:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Damn, Equestria has some harsh laws.

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Fuzzcut [2016-11-07 21:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I like: What the heck?

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Fuzzcut [2016-09-20 05:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Her outfit, uh R1T6HY? I have no clue what that means. Righty?

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SpellboundCanvas In reply to Fuzzcut [2016-09-20 07:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Bitchy

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Fuzzcut In reply to SpellboundCanvas [2016-09-21 04:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Got it, thanks

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Fandom-Crockpot [2016-09-05 13:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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ZanyOnePip [2016-05-23 20:14:08 +0000 UTC]

(Insert alicorn princess OC here): I officially pardon my favorite dressmaker

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SpellboundCanvas In reply to ZanyOnePip [2016-05-24 00:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Celestia: Pardon denied you do not have the proper authority to release inmates from Canterlot Royal Prison!

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ZanyOnePip In reply to SpellboundCanvas [2016-05-24 18:12:47 +0000 UTC]

(Insert alicorn princess OC here): But without Rarity, who is gonna tailor and make dresses? You can't wear Applejacks horse manure shovelin' boots to the Gala.

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Fuzzcut In reply to ZanyOnePip [2016-09-30 01:59:32 +0000 UTC]

She's not the only tailor in Equrstera or Ponyville. They'll make do with others

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ZanyOnePip In reply to SpellboundCanvas [2016-05-24 00:10:35 +0000 UTC]

(hey are you taking request for prisoner ponies?)

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SpellboundCanvas In reply to ZanyOnePip [2016-05-24 00:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Not right now. I'm still working on 6 requests from MLP forums, and after that I'll be working a two part comic request. You can give me your request now but keep in mind it will be queued for sometime.

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ZanyOnePip In reply to SpellboundCanvas [2016-05-24 00:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Celestia locked up (in Sombra's dungeon) and Treehugger locked up (the fandom depicts her as a stoner, so it's easy to see that happen).

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DukeyDukeyDoo [2015-12-14 21:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Must've been arrested by the Fashion Police.Β 

Acting all dramatic about it won't help you this time, Rarity.

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YesImDeadpool [2015-09-10 17:23:30 +0000 UTC]

I thought she was waiting for revenge on Pinkie Pie for getting her in jail. XD

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MeganekkoPlymouth241 [2015-09-09 20:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Orange is the new black, Rarity! (See what I did there? )

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