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Description Second generation because I'm gonna be designing William's parents and Linda's mom and posting that as well. Not planning on designing Jin's parents just because they don't really show up, but eh, I might as well tbh since they're important to his growth as a person. Anyway their parents will be the first generation, Cassie and Lucy being the third, and the kids they have being the fourth. And then I guess Hattie would be the 5th. Probably not how that stuff works, but I'll just do it to make things easier for me. I'm gonna have a lot of generations. owo;

Originally I was just going to have the headshots but I thought that wasn't enough, I wanted to convey more of their personalities through the little settei head shots. I'm pleased with the outcome on those, though the colored ones are kind of meh for me. I never noticed until now, but all three of them have moles in different places. I'm gonna list their story now, heheh.

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William Carter was born to Gerald and Francine Carter. He moved to a small town primarily made up of Pure Amestrians when he was 6 years old in order for his parents to run an underground brothel. They managed to keep it a secret from the police for about ten years before they were taken away. They were never seen again, but they left behind a large sum of money for their only son to live off of until he could find a steady source of income. William never found out about where the money came from and what his parents did until much later in his life.

After his parents were taken away, William became more aggressive than his usual caring self and frequently got into fights in order to try to take out his anger at the world and found himself misunderstood by everyone. That is, except for Jin, who would often be the one who would patch him up after a fight. Jin was the reason why William started learning healing alchemy so that he could heal those around him instead of hurt them. In return for his constant understanding and kindness, William made him a red ribbon to hold his hair in. William found himself feeling different around Jin than anyone else, and little did he know that Jin felt the same way. Jin, however, upon coming to terms with these feelings fled to Xing out of fear in order to subdue these (what he had been raised to think of as "unnatural") feelings. He had hoped to make his parents proud by avoiding this conflict with them and his culture, but found himself alienated anyway.

William, back at home, was devastated. Jin had left nothing except for his ribbon, which pretty much told William that he would be gone forever. Linda, who had been both of their friends for just as long, was there for William and found herself understanding him more now that they had both lost someone special to them both. Her father had left her and her mother, Irene, before, so for a time she resented Jin for both making her relive those memories and for all but destroying William's confidence in himself.

Meanwhile, everyone around Wililam and Linda was getting married and having children, so them getting married seemed logical even though William is in love with Jin and Linda is asexual and aromantic. They didn't know what their sexualities really meant since no one else was like them, and they didn't know that friend love wasn't the same as sexual attraction, so when Lucy was born everything was fine. It was a societal norm for them to have kids, so they did.

By the time Cassie was born, they both knew something was wrong. It had been 6 years since they were first married and they knew they weren't as happy as they could be. William needed something that Linda didn't really want to provide, and because of that they became more distant. Soon after Linda recovered from giving birth, she left in order to travel around Amestris to find herself, causing William to mentally collapse all over again. 

Jin, having been in Xing for years at this point, realizes that he truly loves William and can't live a happy life without him. He comes back to his home town to find both William and Linda gone, but since everyone knows everyone in the town he is able to find William in Central City. They reunite, confess their feelings for each other, and decide to live together and to be a family. William even gives him back his ribbon that he had been keeping the whole time he was gone, hoping he would come back. Jin helps William raise his two daughters, often times forgetting that they aren't even his own children. 

Then Belle comes in. It's 1904 and it's been around 10 years since William and Jin have seen the little beansprout they knew when they were teenagers. They're years apart but they lived in the same town, and in that town everyone knew each other. They reunited and Sybelle became close again, Belle often helping them in terms of providing feedback for how to take care of two growing girls since the proud papas weren't well versed in that sort of thing.

And then, just like that, she leaves. With even less of an explanation than Linda. But just like last time William puts his girls before himself, even though on the inside he doesn't know what he's going to do and by this point has a very real fear of abandonment. Besides, he has Jin with him this time.

Years later in around 1912, Linda returns to Central. She reunites with the newly formed family, and promises that even though she will keep traveling, she'll try her best to be a part of her daughters' lives and will always love them. She does indeed keep her word, and visits the Carter household often. Soon after everyone is together again they move to Dublith, where Cassie's story really begins.

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SO! Now you can understand why I'm excited to introduce Jin! He's super important in the Carter Family's story now, so yay! I present to you (who Cassie refers to as) Papa, Mama, and Baba (Baba meaning "Father" in Chinese)! I have to say I loved giving Linda an actual story and William someone to cuddle with at night. This makes all three of them so much more likeable and gives a proper reason as to why William and Linda split up in the first place. 

I CAN'T WAIT TO DRAW SOME WILLJIN ART GUYS. THEY'RE SO GAY AND THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH AND IT MAKES ME HAPPY.

Also I have some rough design concepts for Gerald, Francine and Irene so I hope to finish those up and post them! I love elaborating on Cassie's family like this, it makes me feel more happy and it gives her a lot more context in terms of how she was raised. Even though Linda came back, she still left, and as much as she hates to admit it she didn't fully forgive Linda or Belle until later. 

OKAY I'M DONE DUMPING FEELS ON YOU GUYS...FOR NOW...I'm gonna go draw more things now.

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Fullmetal Alchemist © Hiromu Arakawa
Gerald, Francine and William Carter, Irene and Linda Marlowe, and Jin Lai © Miss-Mary-Grace
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Comments: 30

ANPCreations [2016-08-15 17:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I just noticed William at 16 looks like Sokka from ATLAB--

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sunnymimis In reply to ANPCreations [2016-08-17 00:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Aaaa yeah, he probs does big time ;v; I'll have to change his design a bit, I was hoping to make him not look like him and just give him a shaved head but his darker skin makes the resemblance more obvious so

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YagiMatsu [2016-07-10 15:33:14 +0000 UTC]

It's so interesting to see the other FMA OCs of yours at different ages! I have to say that all of them are absolutely adorable when they're younger. <3
But my favorite out of all of these has to be William at 16 years old. He looks so much different than he does now! I can totally see some Cassie expressions in his 16-year old face, which killed me. XD
Also, Willjin sounds like such a cute ship!! <333 I shall ship it now

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sunnymimis In reply to YagiMatsu [2016-07-14 23:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! C: It's so much fun to explore Cassie's origins, heck I'm even going to draw her grandparents too sometime! Which is really nice because I'm a sucker for characters with really fleshed out families.
Hahaha, he was so angsty back then. DO YOU REALLY?? Man I didn't even plan that, DAY MADE<33
GOOOOOD, this is going to be a big ship for me. +v+ I already adore gay couples and biracial couples on their own, but put them together and I'm infinitely happy. =w=b

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YagiMatsu In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-15 00:54:05 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Same here.
That reminds me! I need to do one of Samuel and Rin, Chiui's parents. They're my OTP/baes <33333
YAY <3333

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sunnymimis In reply to YagiMatsu [2016-07-15 19:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo, do it! I'm sure it'll be awesome!!

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YagiMatsu In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-16 02:14:27 +0000 UTC]

<33333

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thaliangel [2016-07-06 12:35:52 +0000 UTC]

I love how Linda's little hair curl under her ear sticks around, through and through. It's a lovely little detail in her design!
Is Jin a HOMUNCULUS OR STH bc the man looks so YOUNG for 40 (it may be those Xingese genes <'D)

Your story for these chillins flows well and makes sense, especially given the cultures of FMA. Though your William x Garfiel ideas intrigue me because Garfiel gets so little fan love, I feel much more invested in what you've laid out here for William and Jin owob I look forward to seeing what you'll draw of them!

ALSO BELLE LOVIN' IT

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sunnymimis In reply to thaliangel [2016-07-06 17:22:04 +0000 UTC]

It grooooows o^o Thanks, I liked adding it in the most.
L O L  NAH I JUST CAN'T DRAW OLDER MEN, teach me pls (we don't need to wreck William further by making him not human)

GOOOOD, I'm so glad it all makes sense. TvT I figured it helps give Linda more of a reason for leaving, and gives William more love. I'm tempted to have Jin help raise Cassie from the beginning, just because it makes more sense chronologically and fits Jin's character more (like I'm pretty sure he'd come running once he heard about Linda leaving bc CHILLINS NEED TO BE RAISED)

Y E S BELLE. >W< If I do shift Jin's return earlier, she'll probably just be there to help out since they'd probably be clueless when it comes to raising girls. X'D

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thaliangel In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-08 13:12:07 +0000 UTC]

owob it's always a blast to have those little enduring easter eggs in chara designs!
just draw Dr. Knox a dozen times and you will learn the secrets srsly tho, I've only learned how to draw aging by drawing old characters <'D

:U he isn't gonna leave his bae to raise those bbies all by his lonesome, that's for sure!!! In all srsness, if you think that makes the most sense of events and characters, then go for it!

Belle is a necessity :V we love her too much to leave her ouuuuuuuut (hnng now I wanna draw syble, blast it)

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sunnymimis In reply to thaliangel [2016-07-14 15:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Right?! ;v;
WE CAN HELP HIM DRY HIS TEARS that makes sense! I should try actually doing that pfft XD

>:U YOU ARE CORRECT WHEN U SAY THAT!! I'm glad it would make sense to change that then B)

FOR REAL THO!! She's beauty, she's grace, she will punch u in the face, ALSO DRAW SYBLE DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT B))))))))))))))))))))) *evil laughter*

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thaliangel In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-15 22:32:42 +0000 UTC]

for real, don't let the old man cry uwub practice makes… well, not perfect, but better for sure!

:v go get ur man jin

\owo/ all hail belle! shhhhh don't tempt me

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ANPCreations [2016-07-05 23:29:17 +0000 UTC]

I need to do this for my ocs kjhksjdsfsd

This is absolutely precious dear <3 I love it! And I love how it's headshots and then sketches next to it! Great work ~!

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sunnymimis In reply to ANPCreations [2016-07-06 00:15:28 +0000 UTC]

do it do the thing >:U

Thank you so much, M-chan! I'm glad you like it! >w<

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MadiiCake [2016-07-05 18:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Okay, first thing I noticed, William at 16 years old..... He reminds me of Sokka |D (Probably because of the hair |D). 

Anyway.... each individual design looks stunning! And I love the little subtle change of maturity in each of them, especially with William and Jin from their adolescent to their adult years (you can definitely see it in their faces). And, of course, you can see it in the eyes too, how they subtle shrink and narrow through age. It was definitely a nice detail to add ^u^ I also really like the little lineart/sketch extra of their personalities that you put off to the side of each of them ^u^ 

Aside from the drawing (which, as always is just GORGEOUS~! )... I love the little story, especially with William and Linda, it really gives more of an explanation as to why Linda left instead of just "she just got tired of her husband and needed separation ---> divorce". And, in that time period where anything but straight was unheard of, I can understand the frustration and confusion from it all. 

And.... a Xingese OC~!! >u< He' so adorable~ Though I am worried about that "side pony tail" hairstyle (since it's a curse, especially to the mothers, who have that style) xD Okay, yeah, that joke is overused.... in all seriousness though. I absolutely love his design! (Especially him as an eight-year-old! I wanna squeeze him! >u< ). And the pink ribbon story with William and Jin.... that's so beautiful!! ;A; Okay... screw shipping WilliamxGarfiel now... WILLxJIN!!

Please stop me.... I'm at the point of no return.... |D

Anyway... This is as lovely as always, dear~! ^u^

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sunnymimis In reply to MadiiCake [2016-07-06 00:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha yeah, I was influenced by Sokka for his hair since I wanted him to look less like a Naruto character (with his old hairstyle in my sketchdump) and more like an FMA character. Trust me, he's way more ripped than Sokka will ever be.

Waah, I'm glad their age progression makes sense! And that you read their story too, eee!! I wrote it at like 2 AM so I was worried it was full of mistakes or something, hahaha. 
I'm relieved to see that Linda's reasons for leaving are plausible, it makes me feel much better as well to know that the reason they're separated isn't as vague as it used to be. It makes me feel a lot better!

YES I've been meaning to make a Xingese OC, I can't wait to dress him out in pretty Xingese outfits he's going to be beautiful. TvT DON'T WORRY I WILL NEVER LET HIM DIE, NEVER EVER! That would just...boy I don't want to even think about what that would do to William. He's lost way too many people in his life already, he doesn't need to lose Jin too. u3u9

HEH yes, they are my new OTP. I can't wait to draw ALL the art of them together, because I'm at the point of no return too. 

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MadiiCake In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-06 00:53:03 +0000 UTC]

You should still dress him up in the Water Tribe clothes and give him a boomerang |D *SHOT* I wouldn't have noticed the Naruto-ish reference with the first design, but, still~ He looks pretty agressive and ready to punch someone who messes with him (or those he cares about).

2AM?? WHY ARE YOU UP SO LATE, WOMAN?! That is WAY passed your bedtime, young lady! >n< Okay xD In all seriousness though, the story was just so cute~ And it really helped elaborate on the parent's backstory, especially with William and Linda's. And, yeah, her reason for leaving is not only plausible, but it's original as well 

Speaking of Xingese OCs.... I really need to get around to drawing mine (and not just adding them to a sketchdump |D). Probably will get around to that after I clear up some stuff that has been piling up since the beginning of June... |D (Darn personal life... why do you always have to get in the way and throw me off schedule >n<).  But, gosh, he's so cute though~ >u< DON'T EVER LET HIM DIE! ;n; 

Doooo it >u< Flaunt the new OTP!

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sunnymimis In reply to MadiiCake [2016-07-07 04:53:49 +0000 UTC]

I actually thought about dressing him up like that, more importantly redrawing a scene with him and Princess Yue (except have Jin dressed as her since he has long enough hair XD). Idk why I haven't yet, I probably will one of these days. =w= Point is, he DEFINITELY WILL punch anyone that messes with him. Or just anyone. He's kind of a jerk like that but can you blame him with all he's gone through? I can

I KNOW I need to rest myself better, I'm gonna try to go to bed earlier this week so my sleep schedule isn't all messed up. :'D I'm glad you like their story though!

ooooh yes you do! I love Xingese characters, they're always so cool and unique. TvT But yes, clear up that other stuff first! I bet you'll feel much better with that stuff out of the way! 
I WON'T I WILL NEVER LET HIM DIE I would cry qHq

I'LL TRY TO HEHHH

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Envysgirl86 [2016-07-05 17:08:43 +0000 UTC]

they are so cute when they are little! I just want to hug them.

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sunnymimis In reply to Envysgirl86 [2016-07-06 00:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Hehe they were very fun to draw as children. >w< Thank you!

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Envysgirl86 In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-06 00:15:30 +0000 UTC]

No Problem Mary keep up the awesome work  

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MiriamP [2016-07-05 11:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Mary, the desings are so precious for all three, you can see Cassie in both of her parents better and it's so awesome, and also the story is so beautiful ;;w;; I'm happy to know more about them!!
WillJin heck yeah!! I need to draw them too ewe Also I love Jin design so much ♡ 

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sunnymimis In reply to MiriamP [2016-07-06 00:19:30 +0000 UTC]

omg really?? GOOD I'm so happy her genetics make more sense now!! >w<
AAAAAAAA YOU READ THE STORY, YES! Now you see why I have a mighty need to draw William and Jin together >+o
OMG I'd have to draw them in their outfits first, hehehe B) I'm gonna make Jin very pretty indeed <333 I'm so glad you like him, he probably has one of my favorite designs so far >w<

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Sharkynnaise [2016-07-05 05:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Well look at dat. :U. Beautiful age progression. Plus the story hurts. A lot.

Dude, William at 16. Looks like Darren. I swear. I am gonna cry.

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sunnymimis In reply to Sharkynnaise [2016-07-05 07:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Wah, thank you Savvy wow! ;w; I'm glad their age progressions seem natural!
Eheheh don't worry at least they catch a break and have had a happy ending by the time Cassie's story begins (funny how that works out). uwu9

AKSJFKASJ DUDE. I DIDN'T EVEN MEAN FOR HIM TO LOOK LIKE DARREN. THIS IS SCARY.

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Sharkynnaise In reply to sunnymimis [2016-07-05 07:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!!! ;3;/ It is!!!! HNNNGH. IT HURTS ME MAN.
True true... Right? Looks like kids partially fixed it. :U


I KNOW YOU DIDN'T. THIS IS SCARY. IS IT FATE? HNNNGH

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Super-Sailor-Star [2016-07-05 05:39:17 +0000 UTC]

I love the trio's story! Especially with William and Linda marrying even though they weren't really attracted to each other, it seems like something that would really happen given the time period FMA takes place in.

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sunnymimis In reply to Super-Sailor-Star [2016-07-05 05:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! I'm so happy you read it all! >w<9
I like to think the same thing! It's so fun to experiment with the kind of things that weren't necessarily elaborated on in the story, like I'm pretty sure no one really knew that asexuality or homosexuality was a thing (and if so it's really obvious, like with Garfiel) so it's interesting to use that to make a believable story for everyone.

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Videosphere [2016-07-05 05:13:13 +0000 UTC]

I love these characters  
William especially. Love how he's designed.

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sunnymimis In reply to Videosphere [2016-07-05 05:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, Nick!
I think William's my fave, too.

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