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Whispers in the Darka Great Mouse Detective fanfictionChapter 04 | Caught
illustrations.: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14 ...
the chapters: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14 ...
(to be continued)
summary: AU - None believed that the hate-filled words of a little girl could still live on after more then 200 years, but when strange events start occurring in London the city's only hope of survival lies with one mouse ... and a rat?
... I will not say a word ... I know I failed ... I KNOW ...
I am not pleased with this one one bit, but considering the fact that I've been at this for only 27 minutes ... *epic fail* HOW is it that my FAVORITE chapter had such an AWFUL piece for an illustration?!
Well anyway, at least all's not compleatelylost. I was meaning to experiment a bit with shadows and see what kind of an effect I can create ... seems I found out. I'll remember to keep away from it next time.
... Anywho, since I didn't have the energy to draw a full illustration of "catching the bee", I settled for the "this is not good" moment
because I'm lazy Might scrap this one eventually and make something better some day, but for the moment ... don't kill me!
chapter six of Whsipers in the Dark is now up: [link] artwork and story (+ Thinker a.k.a. the bee) © Jessica P. (2010)
Basil of Baker Street/The Great Mouse Detective © Eve Titus/Disney
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Comments: 19
Actually, this one is pretty good. I like it. Its pretty.
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My name is Apartheid. Your hands will be taken. Your feet will be taken. Do not run. Do not hide.
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Oh, the bee is adorable! ^_^ That's Thinker, right?
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Yup, the bee is indeed named Thinker
(Basil gave it to her so the bee will remember to actually think before it acts
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Where are its legs? What happened to them? A boating accident? A Llama? A badger? A spider? Did it grow out of them? Was there a tragic accident involving a naked waleshman riding a flaming unicycle?
Once again I can't think of any reason why mouses are so okay with incects half their size scurrying about? And about the size of said incects: There was a butterly roughly the size of a dinnerplate in an earlier picture, then there was an unidentified species of a Rainbow Llama that was only the size of a baseball and now there's this; A bee half their size. So, either this bee is freaking huge by nature (and that'd bee a queen) or its because of Tsernobyl... or some such thing.
Hey... Wait... There's glitter in the air... WATCH OUT! EDWARD'S GOING TO GET YOU! HIDE! HIDE BEFORE HE GLITTERS YOU TO DEATH!
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llamas! llamas everywhere!!! and glitter ... glitter ... GLITTER?! AHHHHH!!! EDWARD (not the alchemist) IS HERE!!! Every man for himself! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!
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Awww! It's a cute bee!
I especially like the coloring of the piece!
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Thank you
I tend to experiment a lot ... seems it wasn't all for noth' XD
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That's a big bee! 
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Been craking my head open for days trying to figure out just HOW big a normal bee is compared to a mouse ... Now, if a bee should have - more or less - one to two cm, and a mouse has around six or seven ... Help XD
Can you at least gimme a hint? 
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Uhhhh...um...let's seeeee, now I can see your frustrations here. 
Here's a hint: Look at Basil's eyes and the direction they're pointed. What do you see?
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I most certainly need to think things threw then ... eventually ...
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Haha, same here for meeeee.
Oh, Holmes? Yeah, I figured he was very close by. 
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Maybe it would look cuter if it actually looked like a semi-realistic bee with big puppy eyes.
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Me trying 
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