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Published: 2018-12-02 17:56:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 7038; Favourites: 104; Downloads: 7
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Mendertale Part I, page 027
...Here we are...
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Mendertale and all related, original characters by Taleea (me)
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Comments: 16
GamerSelkie [2018-12-23 13:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Poor guy... At least he has his machine to talk to ^^'
Really beautiful shading and details. Really brings the machine to life. :3
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Taleea In reply to GamerSelkie [2018-12-24 13:49:41 +0000 UTC]
aww, thankies :3
Yeah, I've considered this shading-style will be helping to improve the pages. It looked a bit too mushy in chapter 1. This is more crisp. XD
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TaramiNiru [2018-12-03 09:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Got to say, your shading has improved, a lot neater and better. Great job on the comic, as always.
Btw, about the word "reveive" in the 1st panel, it should be "receive"
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Taleea In reply to TaramiNiru [2018-12-03 19:59:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. ^^ This is also one of the reasons I do the pencil-art for an entire chapter before I do the inks and shades. I like to look through the previous chapter and see what I can do better, because it feels off for me then.
And yes, I've noticed and corrected it already.
You see, usually I type '10-finger-blind' most of the time, but am not very good at spotting my own typos instantely to be honest. Normally I take a longer breaks (several hours, usually) away from the screen once the editting for the pages is done. Then I try to look over it for typos and such when I have a relaxed brain and eyes again, but that doesn't always works.
So, thank you for the notice, my friend. I really appreciate the help.
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TaramiNiru In reply to Taleea [2018-12-04 09:55:41 +0000 UTC]
You’re welcome
Any time you need typos correction, I’ll be here ^^
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Taleea In reply to TaramiNiru [2018-12-04 22:03:36 +0000 UTC]
That would be great. Feel free to point these out whenever you spot them and want to let me know. I really appreciate this.
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AzulLightBulb [2018-12-02 19:14:34 +0000 UTC]
You crank these out like they’re nothing (but of course they are something, and it’s something good). Good work!
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Taleea In reply to AzulLightBulb [2018-12-02 20:26:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much ^^ But actually it's not that I'm that fast.
What I do is, that I draw all of the pencil-art for the entire chapter before I start inking and shading. So between single chapters are always longer breaks. This helps me to avoid plott-holes and other story-related mistakes, especially when it comes to details.
Of course I have a script written down, but this way of working helps me a lot.
Yet, once I'm finished with the pencil-art, the inking and shading is more or less quickly done. Of course, it depends how much is on every page, so some are done faster other slower.
But yes, that's why it can happen that I am able to post 3 or more pages with a comic-update.
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AzulLightBulb In reply to Taleea [2018-12-02 21:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that’s a lot of work. Im surprised you managed that by yourself!
It would take me a day just to make one detailed panel, wonderful work!
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Taleea In reply to AzulLightBulb [2018-12-03 20:39:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, but it's really not that special.
What helps me a great deal is that I also work in a creative job. So I have a bit of experience when it comes to meeting deadlines and efficent way of working. But that's really it, honestly. I'm just a bit of a workaholic, but nothing special or above anyone. There are tons of artists younger and much better than me.
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AzulLightBulb In reply to Taleea [2018-12-03 23:05:12 +0000 UTC]
Dont beat yourself up just because you think are less adept then other artists, your work IS awesome. For sure, many people out there think that your art is great, I am proof of that. I hope this didn’t sound aggressive, I just want you to know that are already a good artist!
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Taleea In reply to AzulLightBulb [2018-12-04 22:13:13 +0000 UTC]
awww, Thank you. And not, it didn't sound aggressive at all.
I mean, I know I am not that bad. I do have a bit of experience, alright.
Yet I don't really like to claim, I'm 'a good/ great artist', since I don't want to appeare arrogant or broastful.
Actually I'm aware of my skills (which I always strive to improve the best I can, but still...), yet I don't like showing off, that's all.
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AzulLightBulb In reply to Taleea [2018-12-04 23:25:54 +0000 UTC]
I feel the same way, not wanting to appear prideful. Acknowledging your own skills is an important thing, and it’s nice to see that you do! ^U^
Good luck on your future works, and may your skills ever improve!
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VoidColor-Sans [2018-12-02 18:05:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow, more Mendertale, yes, been waiting for this, the new shading style style is a lot cleaner and more fleshed out, it is great when a creator improves their art style and techniques and storytelling and writing and all that good stuff, cant wait for more, I know there is already a next page, I mean after that. I just wanted to point out one thing, shouldnt this be page 02 not 03 since the next page is 03, as it is now u have 2 page 03s, just wanted to point it out so u can perhaps update it later, so no one will be confused. Anyways, stay awesome I love this comic and AU, i like how it is focusing on Gaster and his 2 sons, the skele-brothers and him trying to reunite with them, plus I actually like a lot of the oc characters, cant wait for more, but dont rush.
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Taleea In reply to VoidColor-Sans [2018-12-02 20:30:46 +0000 UTC]
Hey, thank you for the notice.
Fortunately it was only in the title, but I've already corrected it and updated the link.
And yes, the good doctor will be the 'hub of the wheel' so to speak... he really is my favourite UT-character and I've planed BIG with Mendertale in context of story-lenght.
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