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Description The Crippled Hachette lay beneath its camouflaged netting.  Repair efforts were ongoing, while the temporarily stranded NATO forces on the terraformed moon of 54 Hydrae d dig in.  For the time being, their strategy of attacking directly had been eschewed in favor of sneak attacks aimed at capturing enemy personnel and equipment.

The "Shiks" captured from the riverside thus far hadn't been much help, but the effort had been far from fruitless.  The weapons had given Martel a chance to examine their impressive technology, and the commandeered Kasparov rations had proven wildly popular among the troops.  A plus, considering the Hachette's supply would be strained nearly to the limit before the cavalry came.

How are you, , all your food are belong to us.

Characters from left to right: Delon, Golana, Cote, Lace 609, and Martel.

   

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cullyferg2010 [2017-11-23 01:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Helluva a way to spend Thanksgiving!  Hope those Shiks have something close to turkey or ham.  Can skip the cranberry sauce.  And have a good one, Colonel!  And I'll keep my M16A2 with the M203 grenade launcher under the barrel, thank you.

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cococamo919 [2017-11-14 00:02:29 +0000 UTC]

a team of sexy beret women awesome great job

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Patriot1776 [2017-06-19 11:35:26 +0000 UTC]

Loving how the gal with the radio's carrying a FAMAS.  Even though the FAMAS is starting to fall out of favor, nobody told her! XDD  She loves hers and won't let her superiors confiscate it due to it being 'obsolete'. XDD  Meanwhile it looks like the gal second from the right, who's lighting the officer's cigarette, she's packing a full-length M16 and no scope?  Just iron sights for her as a sharpshooter? XDD

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TangledSyntax In reply to Patriot1776 [2017-06-22 18:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most of this unit carries the FA-MAS.  609 favors the M16 that she trained with originally.  One of these days I'll show Delon's Parker-hale M82 in more detail.

Seems outdated because it is.  Deliberate anachronisms are all over the place in this setting.

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Patriot1776 In reply to TangledSyntax [2017-06-22 18:54:45 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if there's room in this 'verse of yours for a unit either way behind on the times, or virtually every soldier is a crack shot, a unit full of sharpshooters, and they carry M1 Garands or M14's?  They are definitely NOT the unit to send into an urban zone and go house to house.  No, this would be a unit used to make roads impassible if the enemy's using unarmored or only lightly-armored vehicles thanks to the boys taking lethal pot shots at the driver of every vehicle that attempts to pass and then picking off whoever's still alive after the vehicle crashes.  If a supply convoy is all made up of unarmored or lightly armored vehicles, this unit would be perfect for crack-shooting the drivers and so eliminating supply chains, or taking out the control unit if the unarmored supply vehicles are autonomous.

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DreadHaven [2016-11-03 07:31:43 +0000 UTC]

rare to see canadian characters in people's art. the whole troupe looks badass o:

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TangledSyntax In reply to DreadHaven [2016-11-03 18:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Canada grows some of the best snipers in the world, so it seemed like a natural fit for Cote's top sharpshooter!

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cullyferg2010 [2016-10-23 17:04:46 +0000 UTC]

I've seen your other works of Shabazik's shiks, and how much detail you put into them.  A couple of questions:  Is Golana yelling into a radio?  At first I thought she had a cigar between her fingers.  And is Lace 609 lighting Cote's cigarette?

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TangledSyntax In reply to cullyferg2010 [2016-10-23 19:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes and yes.  And thank you!

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IronBrony1981 [2016-10-13 13:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Cool~!

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jssabotta [2016-10-02 22:28:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm hearing "Little Green Bag" by the George Baker Selection (as heard at the beginning of RESERVOIR DOGS)

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RemnantComic [2016-09-17 04:55:54 +0000 UTC]

Hot dizzly damn! This is a wonderful piece! So classic Hollywood action film "comin atcha" walking-towards-the-camera bravado. XD

And how helpful of Lace! But I think I like Martel the most. Something about that hair and her can't-fuck-with-this silhouette! XD

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cullyferg2010 In reply to RemnantComic [2017-11-23 01:43:23 +0000 UTC]

And while we're at it, Happy Thanksgiving to you, too, Tom!

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RemnantComic In reply to cullyferg2010 [2017-11-27 18:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yesss... give me A L L the happies...

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cullyferg2010 In reply to RemnantComic [2017-11-28 02:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Just don't get too many happy s that you make yourself sick!

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blacklion68 [2016-09-10 18:02:42 +0000 UTC]

NATO... Keeping the galaxy safe from pokemon go zombies. Join up now!   

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SilencedSentry [2016-09-07 07:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Such lovely uniforms, and the shading on them is incredible. Cote looks so bad-ass!

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fxboxing-fan [2016-09-06 22:49:19 +0000 UTC]

This one came out extremely well. Your coloring keeps getting better piece by piece. Can't really explain it, but the vibrancy seems to make the girls feel more solid... alive even.

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TangledSyntax In reply to fxboxing-fan [2016-09-07 06:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Composition is a hell of a thing, I've been so absorbed in advancing my character art that I'm only just coming back around to the basics.  It should just get better from here!

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fxboxing-fan In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 07:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Think nothin of it. Your character art keeps leveling up, and you seem to drag the other aspects along with it. I shall stay tuned.

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Sebbaa [2016-09-06 22:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Is the second one from the left french foreign legion?

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TangledSyntax In reply to Sebbaa [2016-09-07 05:26:00 +0000 UTC]

Kinda similar.  They're a hand-picked special ops unit from all over NATO, operating under French command.  Primarily French-speaking and using a mixture of French, American, and Canadian equipment.

As for Golana specifically, her origins are somewhat mysterious.

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Daemoria [2016-09-06 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, tough ladies get their time to show off their stuff. Loving pretty much everything about this image, and the scale of the Hachette lander section is excellently conveyed here. I love seeing these massive artificial monuments to technology, framed against the people who buzz around the ground like ants.

I hope their reinforcements don't get delayed or re-routed for some reason. But who knows what can happen in the depths of space, it's a cold universe out there...

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TangledSyntax In reply to Daemoria [2016-09-07 06:45:47 +0000 UTC]

Your lessons and advice have been well-taken.  Jolly cooperation's boosted my stuff well beyond where it would have been working strictly solo!  I suspect these engineering marvels will continue to be represented better and better.

And I'm sure the reinforcements will be juuust fine.  Yep.  Totally dandy.  Nothing out of the ordinary at all.

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Alexx-C [2016-09-06 20:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice! What a cool crew!
I feel bad for the Shiks that are about to face them

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TangledSyntax In reply to Alexx-C [2016-09-07 06:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Poor Shiks getting their snacks stolen, haha.  Thanks!

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Alexx-C In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 15:32:33 +0000 UTC]

Now its personal!

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Niribur [2016-09-06 19:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Great work Khal! Second from the left my favorite.

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TangledSyntax In reply to Niribur [2016-09-07 06:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  Some time I'll flesh her character out a bit more on here, as with all the others.  Some interesting personalities and quirks among them.

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DeeKov [2016-09-06 19:10:02 +0000 UTC]

I love so much their uniform  

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TangledSyntax In reply to DeeKov [2016-09-07 06:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  It started out as sort of a mash-up of athletic uniforms and military load bearing equipment.  It seems to be getting more detailed as I go along, haha.

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DeeKov In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 07:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Yep. And I like that kind of outfit

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DBrentOGara [2016-09-06 18:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Looking awesome! Your art is improving all the time! I am loving the story as well! Poor Moustache... his girls are getting slaughtered out there!

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TangledSyntax In reply to DBrentOGara [2016-09-07 05:33:57 +0000 UTC]

And their tasty, tasty rations are being snatched like lunch money!

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DBrentOGara In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 05:54:33 +0000 UTC]

They are! I am reminded of the Battle of the Bulge during WWII when the 101'st airborne was cut off, and a few of the men decided to steal some German rations... apparently they were so bad that the men threw them away and declared themselves feeling sorry fo the Germans who had nothing else to eat!

I suppose the Shiks feel the same about the Kasparov forces... the shiks are being hunted down one by one in a vicious guerilla war against a dangerous foe with superior training (if technically inferior arms), but at least the Shiks have good food to eat!

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TangledSyntax In reply to DBrentOGara [2016-09-07 06:33:43 +0000 UTC]

I expect that a pantry raid is definitely in the cards!  NATO's appetite for delicious Shik food is insatiable.  They will not be halted by technological inferiority!

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DBrentOGara In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 13:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Is it bad that I initially read that as a "panty raid"???

Sounds like fun either way!

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Daemoria In reply to DBrentOGara [2016-09-07 14:55:15 +0000 UTC]

I read the exact same thing. I wonder if there is also a slumber party in the works, with pillow fights planned.

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DBrentOGara In reply to Daemoria [2016-09-07 19:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! Yes... I'd go for that!

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OhMyGoshItJosh [2016-09-06 18:57:04 +0000 UTC]

nice looking gals. 

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TangledSyntax In reply to OhMyGoshItJosh [2016-09-07 05:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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OhMyGoshItJosh In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 11:02:31 +0000 UTC]

welcome. ^^

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Walking-Maelstrom [2016-09-06 18:09:26 +0000 UTC]

I've said it before that your perspective improvement is very notable but as it stands your facial/anatomy features are climbing even more.

Delon evolved from cute to pretty in no time.

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TangledSyntax In reply to Walking-Maelstrom [2016-09-07 05:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Delon is definitely an underrepresented character.

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Walking-Maelstrom In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-08 13:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Too right...hope to see more of her and dealing with shiks in her tactical, ability to eat snacks while sniping without making a sound, manner.

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CardinalSynFan [2016-09-06 17:52:44 +0000 UTC]

Snu-snu squad, assemble! 

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Arnilo [2016-09-06 17:52:43 +0000 UTC]

I still say there should be some explosion there.

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TangledSyntax In reply to Arnilo [2016-09-07 05:26:52 +0000 UTC]

There may be such a thing as too cool, haha.

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Arnilo In reply to TangledSyntax [2016-09-07 16:43:38 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't have to be big explosion, just sayin'.

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Daemoria In reply to Arnilo [2016-09-08 12:37:02 +0000 UTC]

There are not enough sunglasses here to contain the awesomeness of any said explosion. It's best to not risk it, in this case.

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