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Published: 2020-05-01 00:50:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 36854; Favourites: 254; Downloads: 0
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Sometimes all it takes is one little remark to completely change how you view something... even yourself.
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Nes got some more fanart this week! Thank you, foxcipher !
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Seeing him being hugged by his father in the background made me cry.
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The three left panels are rather relatable for me on rare occasions, which makes it all the more painful...
His mother does have a point, though, too...
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This is a great page without a doubt; great job man.
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The way you use a character's ears to convey emotion has always been one of my favorite things about your art, you truly have an amazing talent for it. This panel just proves that to me once again, great job <3
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Why do I feel like Shadow is about to show up in the diner? I mean...Nes looked like he was surprised about something in that final panel.
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He sure has some feelings to work through.
Could that last armour-piercing question be a turning point in conversation...?
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"Hello I'm John QuiΓ±ones and this is What would you do?"
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Indeed, it is all part of being human, so to speak, here.......
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Oh dang. Your comic refuses to stop with the punches!Β
Good for Nes for having the maturity to apologize like that, and his mom does raise a good point.Β
I have a critique for the panel with the mom too, though: I think the yellow/orange is too intense, too bright. It's kinda distracting and little hard on the eyes. For a moment like this, I think you need something more subtle.Β
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I'll have to disagree! Mom is meant to be taking a backseat in that panel, while Nes is stuck in his head. When his Mom says her dialogue, that's when the memory kind of punches Nes right there. It's a visual representation of Nes's perspective. Giving Mom the focus would hurt it a bit.
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Huh. Knowing that makes me change my assessment. Although I did notice the change you made, and it's definitely for the better.
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I didn't even notice that there was something to see in that background until I saw this comment. Maybe get the text bubble a little further out of the way?
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I've made it a little more obvious!
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Nobody is perfect. That is something we can all relate to.
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Way to go Mom
I was already thinking along these lines on the last page. I mean it wasn't like the "truth" was that his father was a lazy alcoholic. He was still a boxer, probably a good boxer...that just wasn't undefeated. If anything this should be consolation for Nes as now that he's lost his last match he doesn't fall short of his father's expectations. It's an added bonus that his opponent was willing to reconcile with him.
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Yeah I was debating with myself on that. If I get more complaints I'll unblur it a little more, or make it a bit less faded. I wanted it to seem like a distant memory from 12-ish years ago, and not distract too much. Maybe I went too far, haha.
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This comic is so expressive with the emotions! This is amazing!
I feel really bad for Nes. He's tried to live up to a lot only to find out his father isn't as perfect as he thought he was. Of course he still loves his father, hence his grieving, but it must be hard for him. Also good to see him apologise for his outburst.
Nes is such an amazingly well-written character. I love him so much lol. That first panel as well is intense. That facial expression of grief for his father, and regret to what he had just said... it's so strong.
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Even if he wasnβt who you thought he was, it doesnβt change how you feel about him, Nes.
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