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I don't know how I feel about the finished product... Oh well, what do you think? Ideas for improvement?I don't like foreshortening... ;__; It's such a pain sometimes.
Name: Aleon Yawoo
Age: 26
Sex: Female
Rank: Jedi Knight
Type: Sentenial
Homeplanet: Osarian (Similar to Earth)
Homeplanet info: Is in the same ring of planets as Naboo and does actually exist according to the plot lines of existing starwars merchandise.
Weilds: Duel light sabers.
Saber crystal: Yellow (Mined from her homeplanet)
Note: The braid at the back of the head, at the base of the neck, is an Osarian custom.
Breif story:
Aleon grew up on Osarian, a "rebel" princess of sorts, finding the racism on her planet disturbing as a child. When she was born, her father's servant (each member of the family has a servant of the "other" race on the planet of the opposite gender, "ownership" goes by birth when possible) had a son who was two years older than her, and he was then branded to belong to the 5th child of the Royal Family. Daeson, her servant, became her most valuable friend, and vice versa. Although having to keep his distance, else he be beaten or whipped, he tried to be as close with her as possible. On Aleon's 7th birthday, as is customary for the coming of age, she was given veto power to give one command that would be obeyed, even by the King, as long as it didn't include death or something that threatened his rule or family. Aleon ordered, after Daeson received several lashes because he talked back to an older servant in protection of his "master", she ordered that from that day forward he would be her advisor and would answer to only her and no one else would touch him. This infuriated the Royal Family, though it kept within the laws of the "wish", because Daeson's race was lesser and inferior, however, the law was obeyed... usually. She could not see the rule enforced, due to her rank in the Royal Family.
When Jedi, who were passing through, realized how high her midi-chlorian count was so high. Since she was royalty, she wasn't allowed to become a jedi, but she and Deason (who she ordered to follow her as he would probably be put to death without her there) stowed away on the Jedi's ship. After her begging and the counsel's disputes, she was allowed to become a Jedi... and then they tested Daeson's midi-chlorian count was equally as high -- So they finally would become complete equals as Jedi and the royal family did not learn where the missing princess went until Aleon and Daeson became knights.
Though Jedi are never to "love" the two friends hold a dangerous connection for Jedi in their friendship -- they almost need each other, however, the connection and familiarity with one another's minds also proves useful. A truly double edged sword.
Older works:
I think I've really improved since these.... : )
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Comments: 13
Eihort [2012-05-10 06:05:40 +0000 UTC]
One thing that I just started doing that really helped me out a lot was using free Daz Studio 4 as reference for the anatomy. It *really* helps with things like foreshortening and the Genesis figure is versatile enough for almost anything.
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ThirdEcho In reply to Eihort [2012-05-14 00:11:47 +0000 UTC]
e___e; I'd have to learn to use the program though, eh? I don't have time for that.
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Eihort In reply to ThirdEcho [2012-05-14 04:35:20 +0000 UTC]
It's actually really not that hard at all. You can literally drag-drop to arrange the figures or just drag-drop the few included poses. I might do a quick video tutorial at some point.
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Anonyhm [2012-04-09 04:26:53 +0000 UTC]
really nice work! Perspective can be a little tricky sometimes, and it gets better the more you do it.
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AbbyCatWolff [2012-04-08 21:05:21 +0000 UTC]
This is very awesome! I really like the lightsaber effects!
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LaelP [2012-04-08 20:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Generally the final product is awesome. She should have her butt a little lower, though, because now her (her left) thigh seems a little too short.
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