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TimeLordParadox β€” Yoshi-Mask animation in motion part 3

Published: 2016-04-11 10:00:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1215; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description Part 3 of this animation in motion. Detailed, it's still missing the spikes on the tail, but I'm thinking of getting rid of them as they're fiddly and aren't going to be used in the story anyway.

I understand now why we had to wait ages for the next season of Gravity Falls
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OctavKitty [2016-04-22 15:24:15 +0000 UTC]

Okay so, after months of slackness, here's a little critic :
Great work, congratulations for the drawings, it changes and makes one of your own style The jumpscare actually worked on me ^^' I laughed when Toad... I don't remember, wonders id Toadlop would bounce and Luigi's irritation makes me curious. Did you refer M & L SS when Axem Green wears Peach's dress like Luigi ?
There are some problems about the animation (not important though): Yoshi's eyes are missing, Axem Red and Pink fought in front of Axem Green but his sword is in front of them, Axem Black is flattened at 9:13 (after he transformed), his sword suddendly disappeared at 15:23 (was it on purpose ?) and the text bubbles sometimes hide the characters.

Oh, I just noticed something : in the 5th episode part 1, Theta says that he's colour blind (that's why he took Daisy) ; then how can he say that Green Thunder is green and that he wouldn't fight an ill man ?

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TimeLordParadox In reply to OctavKitty [2016-05-20 12:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Hi there, thanks for the critic you've made some interesting observations, some of which I'll have to correct when I re-lease chapter 12 as a full episode.

Some of those are animation problems such as Greens axe appearing in front of the fight, Green was supposed to be in front of the fight which is why I put his axe there, but I neglected to check where his feet where during his placement.

Mask/Yoshi's eyes being missing was actually intentional as I wanted Yoshi to 'evolve' the longer he wears the Mask and that's why he gets bigger and bigger. For his second form I wanted him to look like he's lost some perspective, in this case he sees everything, including Peaches castle as edible food and wants to eat it, and the best way to show loss of perspective is to reduce the pupils. His final transformation will have even more changes. In fact, in part 2 I might also lose the spikes on his tail as they're useless and just a pain to keep drawing.

As for Theta being colour blind I think that was a scripting mistake. Looking back at the script it was supposed to be Beta's line rather than Thetas and somewhere along the line they were mixed up. But lets see if I can creatively get myself out of this hole I've dug myself.

Colour blind people can't see colour, but they can see shades of grey that represent colour (TV producers sometimes use this to make a black and white picture coloured) Theta has a green shell while Alpha and Beta have red and blue, and to make sure Theta always gets the right shell Theta -or someone he knew- has trained his brain to recognise the shade that means green as its the only colour that's really important to him, and since Theta is the kind of Koopa who spends a lot of time in hospital recovering from an injury he's likely seen some ill Koopas change colour to 'green' one he matches to his shell. So when he sees Green Thunder he knows his face is green, but also thinks that it likely means he's sick.

So Theta knows the colour Green at least because its useful for him to find his own stuff, anything that's a different shade of grey he just knows isn't his.

But again, thanks for pointing out some errors I've made and I'll be correcting them in the full release of chapter 12 later.

Cheers

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OctavKitty In reply to TimeLordParadox [2016-05-28 17:48:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.Β Also this was a funny mistakeΒ Β 

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sonicluke [2016-04-16 01:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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OctavKitty [2016-04-15 18:45:26 +0000 UTC]

*GASP* great !

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Elvisfonz22 [2016-04-12 01:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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KratosGoji91 [2016-04-11 10:02:41 +0000 UTC]

WOW! AWesome!

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