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Interesting. I’ve never seen the movie so I’m not sure how much of parts like this are different but I’m assuming it’s very different.
This is very intriguing as always
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Oh very good work I do wonder what will happen now as its getting good better than that shit film.
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Y'know... I was rewatching it the other day, and it wasn't as bad as I remember, it was pretty good. I think it mostly depends on will you accept Naruto is with Hinata or not.
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Not to me I mean there is still a lot wrong with it.
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Well for one Naruto learning Shadow clones before he knew them from the way that he looks Naruto is about 6 maybe 7, hard to tell with anime but he looks younger than when we saw him first time in the manga which is still a flaw.
The next is Naruto not knowing what love is and I mean at all who thinks its compaired to his love for Ramen, now this is the guy who could understand anyone feeling as Naruto changed a lot of people like Zabuza and Gaara as well, now that is just stupid and a bad way to make it so Hinata can win him cause Naruto is a dumb shit that know nothing sorry no he even asked Kushina how she and Minato fell in love someone who didn't know what love was would never ask that.
Kishi treatment of Sakura by saying she would be a bad women if she moved on from Sasuke is BS, now my mum was treated like shit by my dad so, add to it that Naruto was using Sakura which my sister own former boyfriend did as well that is just sick and wrong in so many ways.
there is a lot more as well just ask the others who are reading it on the many problems with the film as well the only good thing it has is the anamation but that is SP wanting to make Hinata look good cause let's face it they have made it a fact that they love her far more than the other females in the show.
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Wondering how the story is going to unfold here from the orginal. Doing a great job so far.
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Thank you, glad you like it
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You make a very great job copying kishimoto's style..i think kishi will be so proud of you,tokai,even though he didn't make narusaku a canon..
so how much chapter do you think you're up to complete all this whole doujin?
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Many thanks for your words ^^
I don't know for sure. Probably about five chapters.
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Why does he have eyes, if I Remember right he didn't have eyes and he took Hanabi and if this flashback right this was in the cave, though I could be wrong cause I only watched that piece of shit once and refuse to re-watch it.
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In the movie, a puppet Toneri met with Hinata in the cave. The real Toneri already had Hanabi's eyes.
I'm going to change some parts of the story regarding how Toneri got the eyes, I don't really like how this matter is handled in the movie.
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OK I only watched hunk of shit once so I don't remember that much of it.
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In the movie it was a puppet that she was talking to and then he summoned a projection of the original. And yes the movie was bad. I am a fan of Naru/Hina and even I can see the B.S. story it had. Also a Naru/Saku fan as well.
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Ok so it's a puppet that has the eyes.
Thank you you're a rare fan that can call bullshit on that movie even being an nh fan. I find that movie would have been better if hinata and hanabi's roles where switched thus putting Naruto in a mentor role to hanabi and getting rid of that dumb love story that barely had any love in it and the riviarly thing with ns wouldn't even happen.
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Also I like to write, so I try to understand different points of view in stories. The only I don't understand fully is SasuHina. And thinking on it SasuSaku doesn't make a ton of sense, but oh well.
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SasuHina, in my mind, is as pure of a crack ship as they come. Its not supposed to make sense since the two of them never even shared a single line of dialogue in the whole manga. But that makes it great for shipping since it is a blank canvas for fans to have fun with.
When I write SasuHina I like to think that Sasuke had a secret crush on Hinata, since she was the only girl in his class who didn't annoy him with her crush. So he develops a crush on her instead. He tries to woo her, but his old tactic of flirting by leaning up against something doesn't work on a girl who doesn't already have a crush on him. This is new territory, he has to actually flirt with Hinata and summon up the courage to ask her out. Only to find that she likes the Dobe, which ticks Sasuke off. He could be jealous of Naruto who is jealous of Sasuke. Because Sakura likes Sasuke and Hinata likes Naruto, but both guys want the other girl.
Digging a little deeper, I can imagine Sasuke seeing his mother in Hinata the same way I as a NaruSaku shipper see Kushina in Sakura. Sasuke grew up in a fairly conservative clan, I think it would be fair to say. His mother was likewise very kind and gentle and wouldn't go off the rails like Sakura or Kushina would. In short, she would behave like Hinata, a prim and proper girl raised in a noble house. She can also be stern when she needs to be.
Another aspect I like is the idea of Hinata approaching Sasuke. Say that with Naruto and Sakura getting together, Hinata is dejected and notices one day that Sasuke is all alone. With his teammates dating, they have less time for him. So Hinata, being the kind girl that she is, determined to be like Naruto, decides to befriend Sasuke to make him cheer up now that he is back in the Leaf for good. This of course leads to her falling for him and vice versa. You could even force Hinata to become more assertive so that Sasuke takes her seriously.
In the end, its a kind of delicious irony that the one girl who never had a crush on Sasuke gets with him. One of the very last pairings you ever saw coming.
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Cool. I like the idea. To me the who marries who thing really didn't take place until after the war, cause of the pace of the story. And if NaruSaku did happen I could see what you said play out. Also I don't know if I like the whole comparing Sakura to Kushina. On a surface level they are similar, but besides their temper that is about it. Now you could say that Hinata and Susake's mother are similar in temperment and up bringing but that is about it. SasuSaku is a strech for me cause of the history and what happens in the story should make that ship sink. But it is cannon so....
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Well just because its canon doesn't mean it makes sense. At least not to me. They could have had Naruto marry Tenten and the NaruTen shippers would have been happy, but everyone would agree their lack of interactions leads everyone to conclude that they would never get together.
As for Kushina and Sakura, I can't really dig deep into their similar personalities right now. But I would like to point out that they both have the same first pump, "you got this" pose. So I'm going to stand by my assumption that they were meant to be similar.
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Well... If it happened after everything settled down after the war then sure. Jmod or something like that on here wrote some really good NaruTenten fanfics. Also I feel sorry for Tenten after the war. She has to put up Sith Lee and Gai with no help. Also the man she loved is dead so she has to put on a brave face around the others who now have families and she doesn't. Unless she married Lee of course.
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I don't think she did love Neji. I'm neutral on their pairing. But I think she did marry Lee and had Metal Lee.
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I like to think Lee adopted Metal and he and Tenten raised him. Them being married I don't know. Either way is cool though.
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So then where are Might Guy and Rock Lee's real parents if none of them are related to Metal Lee? How many bowl cut people exist in this world yet never seem to raise their kids?
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Umm. Rock Lee I think is an orphan. Not sure on that.
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He is an orphan. Its just weird that his son would be an orphan too.
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Just an idea I had. Not sure Metal Lee's origins.
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I thought it was confirmed that he was Lee and Tenten's son?
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I think I heard that as well, no confirmation on it. I think the last episode of Boruto he might have call Lee Dad.
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I really think they would have.
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That would be an interesting idea. Hanabi looking to Naruto as a teacher of sorts. I like it. The love story part could come up as the reason Naruto is trying to rescue Hinata instead of the boot to the head genjutsu idea that was used. Make it more of her comes to that realisation on his own.
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Yes thank you about bringing up the genjustu thing in the movie. Considering we haven't seen hanabi since Naruto fought neji back in part 1 it would have been a good way to reintroduce her, and what they did with her was waste her. No Naruto would go save hinata cause she's his friend cause he didn't say he loved her til the genjsutu so if that's gone they don't get together. I agree with him coming to his own realization about by but it still doesn't work cause of the magna.
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True. It would have been cool to see Naruto and Hanabi in a more elder brother younger sister role. Kind of like him and Konohamura. The love story part should have been more organic and less smack to the head. So I take it your a NaruSaku fan? Which is totally cool.
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agreed but they brought it in too late and ruined the story. I see Naruto and hanabi getting along well. Yes i'm an ns fan and thank you for respecting my ship unlike most people. That and change naruto's design.
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See I just look at Naruto's change as he grew up and had to take on responabilities of being a leader and a father. I do see some of the old knucklehead popping up now and then. And being a father myself I had to grow up some. Plus would Sakura have softend some being with Naruto, can really see her smacking him in the head as his wife. Which was funny when they were young, but quickly grew old. I see Sakura as his wife getting this disapproving/annoyed look on her face and Naruto snapping into shape quickly. With Hinata it is more gentle nugges in the direction he needs to go. Just my oppinion.
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I just don't like him with short hair it just looks wrong. I see sakura keeping him line but sakura can be kind and gentle with Naruto. Hinata just cant' say no to Naruto and we see that in bolt.
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Ya. I wish Boruto's problem was not I want my dad, but that everyone's thinking that he would follow in Naruto's foot steps. If he wanted to be his own person it would be far better. I also don't think Bourto was not spoiled by just his mother, I think others had a hand in it as well. And how do you figure Hinata is a push over? I am sure she just doesn't bow to Naruto in everything.
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So far form what I've seen she does, if that was true bolt wouldn't be hating his and Naruto wouldn't always be at work and drinking. Has she ever been able to say no to Naruto? That sounds like what Naruto and sakura's son plot would be being his own person and their kids would understand why being hokage is important and Naruto would still be around cause sakura would make damn sure he would. If it was hanami's birthday Naruto would be at her party no matter what and if not sakura would drag him by the ear to the party regardless of what he was doning at the time.
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Ya. Those points are valid. Missing his daughter's birthday was BS. I don't really see the drinking thing, but that one time. I don't mind the Boruto manga or the anime. It is just something I watch it kind of mindlessly. I would love to see a retelling of the story but with changes that made sense. Also would love a NaruSaku story that has the popular NS kids in it. Most of the ones I have read either make up kids of their own or never make it that far. It would be great if Boruto would understand how important Naruto's job was, but it would be nice to see set aside time for his kids during the day. Also why the hell does he use shadow clones to do paper work? He could knock that out in half the time.
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I've asked that shadow clone thing so many times and we do see him use them to help with work so he has no reason to not be with his family only thing I can think of is that he really doesn't want to be near them cause he regrets being with hinata, or that's how I see it. And the weird thing himawari is ok with it umm no a little girl her age would be so hurt. I just find a narusaku kid named shinachiku would be interesting.
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Ya. I don't think she is ok with it, she just treasures the time she had with her father. Also if Naruto is stretched that far at his job, what the hell is Shikamaru doing? He gets to go home to his family and the Hokage doesn't? I understand that the story is told in a Japanese point of view of honor and duty to one's village and family, but how is that escapism? Why not write it the opposite of their view point. Naruto comes home at 5 in the evning and has dinner with his family and sleeps with his wife. Then gets up takes Bourto to school, then heads to the office.
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Exactly my point none of this makes any sense and that could work and make things better for naruto's family life. Plus shikamaru seems useless if Naruto is doing everything himself. That doesn't make sense shikamaru can go home but Naruto can't what the hell.
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