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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
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tokai2000: Immitates Kishimoto's style to a tee for free.
Mikeo Ikemoto: Gets paid to completely butcher the look of Naruto.
What kind of world do we live in when when FAN ART is better than the official product? Taking story out of it, THIS looks professional. Boruto doesn't even look like good fan-art.
I'm enjoying reading this. I don't know what you have planned exactly, but some suggestions if you're open to them:
1) Give Sakura a good boss battle. This is probably one of many things that led to her downfall in canon. She deserves to genuinely kick ass one more time
2) Try to develop characters beyond their romantic interests as well.
3) Make the battle ninja-esque
4) No breathing on the moon. Too many flashbacks of Superman IV
5) Don't jam EVERY character into the story. Just tell a good story with the characters that have a reasonable role
6) Give Hinata some redemption as well. She was just a side character that I think no one was supposed to care about, but the whole mess in the fandom put her front and center at the last minute with no build up that caused me to genuinely hate the character for derailing the series. But I'm willing to at least give her a good fight, a decent role and move on from there.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it ^^
And thanks for your suggestions.
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Definitely, Tokai has some serious talent! Even more so than the current mangaka of the Burrito series.
I agree with your points except for the last one. The last two movies and next generations glorifies Hinata enough as is. She could definitely gets some focus (maybe take over her clan as an heir should) but not to the extent the studio does.
I don't hate the girl personally but she was a side character for 90% of the manga and in the end she gets the special treatment. Still mind boggling.
I'd rather see more Naruto and Sakura mostly, maybe "some" Shiakamru, Sai, hell even Sasuke and Taka for a change!
But again, beautiful work and love the direction of the story so far!
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OMG!! Your art is amazing! <3 I like the changes you are making n.n
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Thank you very much ^^
Glad you like it
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Beautiful art as always! But seriously, are you the REAL Kishimoto that was abducted back in 2009 and replaced with the clone we see today?
It must be so!
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Many thanks for your comment ^^ I'm glad you like it.
P.S: I'd love to be him XD
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Also hope to see something from Sakura soon and I'm kinda curious what happened with Hinata and Toneri.
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They'll reappear in the next chapter.
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Been following this for almost the whole, this is really great, keep it up
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Did you mean to reply to me? Or was it an accident?
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No it was just a comment, my phone screen is wonky, must have accidentily replied
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Ok. It's fine. I was just wondering
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This is awesome. Naruto loves his Rasengan variations. Great work as always. Your art is a really big part of why I enjoy this because it feels so authentic
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if you would publish mangas, I think I would buy all of them!
Your arts are absolutely superb! I think Kishimoto would be so touched and proud to see this
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Thank you very much for your comment ^^
Happy you like it.
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Same here! His artistic drawings is so similar to Kishimoto! Hell! I even dare to say that it's slightly better than LadyGT (another artist that I love a lot) for how similar it is to Kishi drawings.
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Dude, you have some serious talent. I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future!
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Thank you
Glad you like it.
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Really looking forward to the next chapter. Are you a part of the Heaven and Earth website by any chance?
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Thanks ^^
Nop, I'm not a member.
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Dude, you should totally join! We have a thread that's specifically dedicated to your art. People there would FLIP if you joined.
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Love to hear that. I'm really happy you guys like it ^^
Thanks for telling me to join but I'm a bit busy these days and I don't know if I could remain active inside the community.
Anyways, many thanks
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Well, that's a shame. We'd love to have you. The site has lost most of its members due to the..*ahem* ending of the original manga, so new members are always welcome to help keep the site alive.
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good job..its good to see naruto finally awake with his rasenshuriken..I cant wait to see what actually happened to sakura and also hinata..
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Thank you
The girls will reappear in the next chapter.
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oh this was very good I know it shall be heating up that is for sure so keep it up.
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I'm sorry, did he just make a Rasenshuriken all on his own without a Shadow Clone to focus on the Chakra Nature?
I am both impressed and wanna cry fanboy foul if only because last I checked he couldn't do that.
As for the rest of the comic, god damn. Dos angles and dat pose. I feel like I'm back reading Naruto.
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Thank you, glad you like it
In the movie he uses the rasenshuriken without the shadow clones. I'm not completely sure but I think he can do the technique without the clones help from the moment he gained control over the nine tails.
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Good way to end the chapter hope to see Sakura dreaming next.
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Thanks 
She will appear in the next chapter.
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This is so much better than that piece of shit movie granted not everything can be fixed but this feels more like a naruto story as opposed to what we actually got. I'm curious how you do this and hinata going with toneri and the rivalry thing that assassinated narusaku.
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