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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
Naruto The Last (c) Masashi Kishimoto. Studio Pierrot
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Crimson-Kaizer [2019-12-20 00:51:42 +0000 UTC]

"Hello. Have you heard of our goddess, Lady Kaguya?"

"...Unfortunately, yes." 

"Ahh. My deepest apologizes." 

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TheDarkpokeone [2018-05-11 23:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Man I do I just love this it just gets better and better.

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tokai2000 In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2018-05-17 22:59:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Danny2456OpTic [2018-04-24 10:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice work. Keep it up.  

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tokai2000 In reply to Danny2456OpTic [2018-05-11 20:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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JamesCassidy420 [2018-04-23 16:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Man, your art just keeps getting better and better and still love how you know the characters.

Alot of people love to ask me, especially the pro-enders, "do you think you know these characters better than Kishimoto?" And I always say, matter of factly, YES. I DO know these characters better because I wasn't willing to sacrifice everything good and bad that made up the characters go to waste because I wanted a certain pairing to happen. I am/was a NaruSaku fan, but not because I like the characters together or I was biased to one character or another. It was because the story just fit them better. They were perfect. They had problems and strengths. They understood each other if even only subconciously. Hinata just didn't. Not to say that she couldn't, but she just didn't or was unwillingly to. All she cared about was being noticed and even that she needed help with.

I am sad that Hinata's popularity took control of the series instead of letting the story flow naturally. Was Hinata not getting with Naruto the end of the world? Wouldn't it have been better if Hinata learned a valuable lesson in what true love means in that it is about the other person and not your own desires? Naruto knew that when he was willing to sacrifice his happiness for the sake of Sakura's. We knew he was willing to let Sakura be happy with Sasuke, but she isn't happy with him and Naruto is not happy with Hinata and yet, they still lie to themselves in the story. Kishimoto knows this. We know this.

I think my favorite part of your doujinshi so far is just the chapters with Sakura and Ino. Two girls, two best friends, one of which knew better. Having Ino express how Sakura has changed felt real. More natual than "Oh look Sakura is all of a sudden Hinata's best friend and forces Naruto to notice Hinata."

(Actual quote from the canon movie)
Sakura: "Why don't you ask if you can walk Hinata home tonight?"
Naruto: "Why?"

And that scene just about sums it up. "Why" indeed?

Thank you for keeping the characters pure. Not even Hinata deserved the fate she got in the end. Meanwhile, everyone else just paints and pictures their fantasy of how great SS and NH is and then tells other people that they are not true fans because they don't accept the canon ending meanwhile their "idea" of the pairings is far from the truth that Kishimoto and the Boruto manga expresses. Especially when it comes to SS. They always depict them so happy together when in the story Sasuke is NEVER around and Sakura is miserable 99% of the time. When you even have their supposedly own kid "Salad" (still think it is Karin's kid) express how she doesn't believe her parents are married...there is something wrong. Especially when they have control over the series and this is how they depict them.

I know this was a long post and mostly just me ranting, but I had such passion for the Naruto series as most others and the ending just betrayed us. I know you probably feel similar to the way I do as well.

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Crimson-Kaizer In reply to JamesCassidy420 [2018-05-11 21:00:23 +0000 UTC]

This post perfectly depicts the main failing of both the ending and the Last: the character we see in them are not the same ones we've gotten to know over the years. 

Kishimoto sacrificed character for popularity and that is a damn shame. 

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tokai2000 In reply to JamesCassidy420 [2018-05-11 20:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your post, it may be long but worth reading. I'm really happy you like the doujin

I totally agree with you. The ending feels out of place in comparison with the rest of the story probably as you said because of the popularity of some characters like Hinata.

PS Sorry I've taken so long to reply.

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hechen804 [2018-04-22 16:59:24 +0000 UTC]

if you could,hurry up,please,keep on doing it!

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tokai2000 In reply to hechen804 [2018-04-22 23:13:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you like it ^^

I'll try to update more often 

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Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2018-04-17 11:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Good job..keep it up..

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tokai2000 In reply to Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2018-04-22 23:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LadyTyrell9 [2018-04-17 06:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to read the next page.
Hang in there!  <3

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tokai2000 In reply to LadyTyrell9 [2018-04-22 23:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks ^^

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samuraipanda85 [2018-04-17 00:17:09 +0000 UTC]

That sign...is that Sasuke's fancy Sharingan? Mygeto something?

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tokai2000 In reply to samuraipanda85 [2018-04-22 23:24:22 +0000 UTC]

It's the tenseigan, the tensei-eye shikamaru mentions in the previous page. The crest of a clan of ninjas that used to live in this city.

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samuraipanda85 In reply to tokai2000 [2018-04-23 04:37:56 +0000 UTC]

I see.

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yusuke96 [2018-04-16 20:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Man, I envy how well understand this series inner mechanisms from the story, characters, abilities, and even right down to the art work. You are basically Deviantart Kishimoto at this point, but with a life outside of this work so you don't burn yourself out like him.

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tokai2000 In reply to yusuke96 [2018-04-22 23:33:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it and I'm really happy to receive so positive feedback.

Thank you very much

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samuraipanda85 In reply to yusuke96 [2018-04-17 00:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Seriously. How do we know he isn't actually Kishimoto trying to make up for past sins but can't officially because the studio owns Naruto now.

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CrazyWolf76 [2018-04-16 16:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Love how precise, you are in drawing these comics, you are very talented

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tokai2000 In reply to CrazyWolf76 [2018-04-22 23:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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BigBDawg001 [2018-04-16 16:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Now I wonder who this guy is!

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TheIllusiveMan90 [2018-04-16 15:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice work.  

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tokai2000 In reply to TheIllusiveMan90 [2018-04-22 23:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TheIllusiveMan90 In reply to tokai2000 [2018-04-23 03:43:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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