HOME | DD

traces-on-a-page — First Lesson - Frollo and Esmeralda

Published: 2013-03-10 15:07:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 19517; Favourites: 150; Downloads: 13
Redirect to original
Description "Would you use that knife on me?" Frollo asked drunkenly, his body still shaking with desire.

Esmeralda did not answer.

"Remember our agreement, Minister," she whispered.

"And if I do not?" he asked savagely.

"Then, you will not see me after today."

Frollo considered it for such a long time that even he wondered what his decision would be.

===

Excerpt from my standalone fanfic, Ten Lessons from a Gypsy's Kiss. [link]

If anyone reading this also happens to read my other long fanfic, 31 Rules, I promise the next chapter will be up in a day or two! Thank you for reading!!
Related content
Comments: 78

owleyes1213 [2013-07-01 07:09:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm looking at this and I was so shocked I didn't comment before. Love, love, love your shading! Did you use color pencil? Fresme will be the end of me

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to owleyes1213 [2013-07-02 03:10:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your wonderful comment as always! Yeah, I used color pencils, with a black ink pen for the outlines. Haha, Fresme will be the end of me too, I just wrote another fic based on the book version. And now I'm ded.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

owleyes1213 In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-07-03 17:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Ooo.. I'll have to check that out.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

RoBerTa-talia In reply to ??? [2013-05-10 20:14:01 +0000 UTC]

Aaaawwwww!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to RoBerTa-talia [2013-05-11 09:20:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fave!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

WolfJeanna [2013-05-07 19:19:16 +0000 UTC]

I love twists like this. Especially villains with beauties. ^_^

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to WolfJeanna [2013-05-08 14:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Glad you like this!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

WolfJeanna In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-05-08 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem I like certain twist between two characters. Even though they don't like each other.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to WolfJeanna [2013-05-09 11:23:35 +0000 UTC]

I think in this case though, it can perhaps be said that the villain does like the heroine.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

WolfJeanna In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-05-09 18:19:32 +0000 UTC]

True ^_^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

KAMwuzhere [2013-04-01 22:16:50 +0000 UTC]

Love the picture! and I read your fanfiction, and I ABSOLUTELY LOVEd that too!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to KAMwuzhere [2013-04-02 00:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much for your lovely comment!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

NXMcupcakelover In reply to ??? [2013-03-12 01:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Awwww that story was soo sweet

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to NXMcupcakelover [2013-03-12 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

NXMcupcakelover In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-03-12 01:57:50 +0000 UTC]

it was really good

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

HONDTangled In reply to ??? [2013-03-11 03:04:49 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to HONDTangled [2013-03-11 07:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment! I take it this means you like it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

HONDTangled In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-03-11 07:31:55 +0000 UTC]

yes it does you are welcome

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ChristineFrollophile In reply to ??? [2013-03-11 00:30:19 +0000 UTC]

This story was both sexy and also cute too. Poor Frollo, he so wanted more from that first kiss, Esme shouldn't have been too surprised by his actions.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to ChristineFrollophile [2013-03-11 01:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha she really shouldn't but she didn't realize how intense Frollo's feelings could be. thank you for your comment, means a lot.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChristineFrollophile In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-03-13 04:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Quite the surprise she got then huh, lol! It still was such a cute and sexy story, I find myself re-reading it more than once.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to ChristineFrollophile [2013-03-13 15:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwww... Thank you for saying that. Seems like you've been running this ship so long and so nicely and you make new fans feel so welcome. Thank you again!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChristineFrollophile In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-03-15 02:29:52 +0000 UTC]



I love how newer fans are embracing it with an open mind, as it should be approached. That's refreshing to see that.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Ibirus In reply to ??? [2013-03-10 22:38:00 +0000 UTC]

In Russian, I would say "Class!", which means great, super, wonderful, cool! Like it!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to Ibirus [2013-03-10 23:21:13 +0000 UTC]

You made me really happy with your great, super, wonderful, cool comment! Thank you!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

FroShaDar In reply to ??? [2013-03-10 22:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww, it was cute and cool at the same time!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

traces-on-a-page In reply to FroShaDar [2013-03-10 23:21:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FroShaDar In reply to traces-on-a-page [2013-03-11 00:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

👍: 0 ⏩: 0


<= Prev |