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Published: 2013-03-10 15:07:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 19515; Favourites: 150; Downloads: 13
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"Would you use that knife on me?" Frollo asked drunkenly, his body still shaking with desire.Esmeralda did not answer.
"Remember our agreement, Minister," she whispered.
"And if I do not?" he asked savagely.
"Then, you will not see me after today."
Frollo considered it for such a long time that even he wondered what his decision would be.
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Excerpt from my standalone fanfic, Ten Lessons from a Gypsy's Kiss. [link]
If anyone reading this also happens to read my other long fanfic, 31 Rules, I promise the next chapter will be up in a day or two! Thank you for reading!!
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Just... Just slightly mate.Β
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*silence*
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Both the artwork and the fan-fiction are pretty good, I like them both.
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I can't really say that I HATE the Fresme ship. I kind of hate Frollo and I don't ship them. However, some of the Fresme pics are a tad bit cute. I guess you could say I am simply indifferent towards Fresme.
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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaa XD I'm sorry that was me inhaling and laughing the chibi is cute and then the nicely detailed design at the end
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Thanks very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I just read the story, w @ that was beautiful.... and awesome...... and my pulse kinda exploded X3 over-all awesome
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Aw man thank you !!
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(if you meant man by boy I'm a girl just a slight FYI) No problem, none at all
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Oh no! I meant "Aw man" as a figure of speech, like "Oh my goodness" or "Aw shucks" or "Oh man". I'm so sorry if I offended, I didn't mean it that way, especially when I don't know you personally and don't know your gender. D:
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It's alright it's not the first time X'D it was actually kind of funny, really, but... do it again and you burn at the stake. >:3...... XD i can't keep a straight face.
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Aw shucks, thanks very much for your comment.
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Well, it's a good work 
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Aw shucks. Thanks so much!
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Well, one question, SHE gives him in exchange... No? Thanks
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In my fanfic (the link is in the description), it starts off with her agreeing to kiss him in exchange for stuff. But the stuff she asks for are stuff that make him see things from another point of view, and eventually make him a better person.
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Ah,I understand, but why she used the knife? She want to kill him? Oh sorry I ask too many question...
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No problem, thank you for your interest! She used the knife because he wasn't playing by the rules. He was only supposed to get a kiss, but then he tried to do more, so she had to stop him by using the knife.
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Oh, Thanks I will read it
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WOW!!! The hsitory is a DREAAM, VERY BEAUTIFULL, I want more...
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Well, yersteday I read your other workΒ www.fanfiction.net/s/9448295/1β¦ Beautifull!!!! well, I still have to read 31 chapters of your 3rd history ^^ very beautifull, really
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Oh, thanks so much for your lovely comments. If you have a chance to read 31 rules, do leave reviews over there. I looooove reviews.
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Well just one precision, "dom" is not a name of Claude, his name is just Claude Frollo, "dom" is a "Title given to certain religious, especially in the orders of the Benedictines, Carthusians and Trappists." =>Β Titre donnΓ© Γ certains religieux, en particulier dans les ordres des bΓ©nΓ©dictins, chartreux et trappistes.,Β www.cnrtl.fr/definition/dom , sorry if it's in french, i speak french ^^
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Ah... you speak French!! Great, I have very little French in me, lol. Thanks for the clarification.
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I will read all your fictions when you will posted the new
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hmm... I can see that. I've only watched the movie, so... it does seem kind of weird, but hey, I ship odd stuff too!
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That's why there's fandom.
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The chibis drawings are so cute! But I love that you put the traditional Fresme pairing at the bottom of the artwork.
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Thanks very much for your comment!
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You're very welcome, as it is well-deserved.
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I love this! Your writing is really good too. They're so cute as chibis! 
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Thank you so much!!
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Frollo: And what if I do?
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Hee yes, her rules, her call! Too bad Frollo!
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