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TriteBristle — Heartstrings ch2/p21 - An hour later

Published: 2012-10-23 21:54:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 90872; Favourites: 885; Downloads: 568
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Description There, they ended up in bed. Happy?

What? You wanted a kiss? This early? Nah. >:3
*Unlocked achievement: Lip-block!*

Don't worry, we'll get to that part sooner or later. Surely I won't keep it till the very end, will I? >:3

Nope, I hate it when a love story ends with the protagonists getting together, since the whole adventure just starts then!
So knowing my imagination, we might get to see them nursing their grandchildren.

Still, Lyra seems to be a bit embarrassed, I wonder why. :3




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Comments: 418

TriteBristle In reply to ??? [2012-10-28 19:36:22 +0000 UTC]

"Clit-block" jokes are way further in the storyline. :3

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Dukedraken In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-29 18:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. I see "clam-jam" is actually a thing though, if you check youtube xP (Thing from Supernews)
And while clit-clock is technically accurate as it's the "most important part" so to speak, a large part is being neglected in said statement. And I am trailing off here xP

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MrSpartin In reply to ??? [2012-10-27 18:58:56 +0000 UTC]

The gayness has been doubled?

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Chrismilesprower In reply to ??? [2012-10-27 14:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha

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Icarus1434 In reply to ??? [2012-10-27 06:21:31 +0000 UTC]

i really like this, but i feel like i would like it more if the grammar was more cohesive. Anyway, i get the point of the comic and i smiled so thanks for that!

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cormy1 [2012-10-27 02:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Trivial solution? Odd word choice...
Does the solution not matter?

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TriteBristle In reply to cormy1 [2012-10-27 21:39:31 +0000 UTC]

'Trivial' as evident, obvious. BonBon has a scientific mindset, this is supposed to be showing that a bit. :3

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cormy1 In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-28 22:06:26 +0000 UTC]

? I can't find anywhere that says that trivial can be used that way.

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TriteBristle In reply to cormy1 [2012-10-28 22:22:06 +0000 UTC]

We use it like that at my university in calculus class. :3

"5. Mathematics
 a. Of, relating to, or being the solution of an equation in which every variable is equal to zero.
 b. Of, relating to, or being the simplest possible case; self-evident."

Source: [link]

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cormy1 In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-29 03:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Lol, last possible definition XD I'll keep this in mind!

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angelofrombelow In reply to ??? [2012-10-27 01:22:18 +0000 UTC]

This comic has the Bon Bon seal of approval.

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KillKatt [2012-10-27 00:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Well played Bon Bon, Well fuc*ing played XD

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BarthoBalchi In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 23:33:14 +0000 UTC]

So ADORABLE XD

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W0nderbolts In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 22:37:03 +0000 UTC]

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LeonardLou In reply to W0nderbolts [2012-10-27 00:27:28 +0000 UTC]

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Moonshadowpony209 In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 21:50:59 +0000 UTC]

So much win.

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Absulus In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 21:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh I've read enough manga to know where.....

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Ebrony940 In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 20:22:06 +0000 UTC]

hehehe.... funny

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Dakathi666 In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 19:31:47 +0000 UTC]

AH! Classic shipping!

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midnightfox1 In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 17:33:37 +0000 UTC]

i love this comic so much

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Jeriih In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 17:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Bon Bon Wins!

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ZChuck In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 17:13:54 +0000 UTC]

Takei describes the last panel best.

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IdleChat [2012-10-26 15:52:54 +0000 UTC]

awesome comic!

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RiokennG3 [2012-10-26 15:51:06 +0000 UTC]

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JAVAgamer In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 14:25:01 +0000 UTC]

I think Bon Bon wanted this to happen'. /)o3o(\

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Starbat In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 13:43:03 +0000 UTC]

That's too cute.

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OliverLacota In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 13:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Lyra's face in the last panel is perfect XD

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Facade-The-Witch In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 13:02:28 +0000 UTC]

"OH! Just kiss me you fool!!!"

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tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 12:31:42 +0000 UTC]

That was a great seen well done.

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StarryOak In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 11:54:56 +0000 UTC]

so, does this end in tootsie flute?

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TriteBristle In reply to StarryOak [2012-10-26 13:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Maybe yes, maybe not. :3

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StarryOak In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 13:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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Odd-Ranger In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 11:32:37 +0000 UTC]

This can only end in a re-enactment of a scene from 'Planes, Trains and Automobiles'.

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rphb In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 09:53:20 +0000 UTC]

Now it's on Equestria daily, congrats

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TriteBristle In reply to rphb [2012-10-26 13:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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rphb In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 13:59:18 +0000 UTC]

It is the first time I have seen your comic there, you must be proud

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TriteBristle In reply to rphb [2012-10-26 14:24:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm certainly glad that more people like my stuff.
Though I don't really care about fame, even if there was only one person who keeps waiting eagerly for the next page it would still worth to make. :3

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rphb In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 14:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Good.
Personally I have a hard time believing in my own works, despite the fact that I actually have several favs, and watchers over at FIMFiction.

By the way, a question. How hard is it to make these kind of vector based comics?

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TriteBristle In reply to rphb [2012-10-26 15:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Depends on the person I guess. Needs quite a bit of experience, which you can get along the way. Also, since I have to work from what I can see in the show, I had to watch the through again, taking thousands upon thousands of screenshots, just to get a few poses that can be used in the particular scenario I came up with. I'd say the hardest thing is to figure out the camera angles, poses etc that would work well in the given scenes. The fact that I'm making the story as just a series of emotions, actions and dialogs doesn't help much (my imagination works poorly when it comes to facial expressions, names, etc, but at least the former ones can be derived from the emotions).

For artists who can imagine and draw poses, I'd say it's quite simple. Anyone can do vectors, it's just putting down a few anchor points and adjusting the handles. Easily learnable.

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rphb In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 16:08:18 +0000 UTC]

You are using screenshots, I would have immagined that you used vector sights like [link]

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TriteBristle In reply to rphb [2012-10-26 16:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Nope, all the vectors in the comic are made by me, except most of the cutie marks (I only recently made and "own" version of Lyra's and BonBon's cutie marks), which are mainly from the wiki. And wherever the background looks nice and detailed, it's a screenshot from the show. :3

Although I'll have to learn how to draw backgrounds sooner or later, for now I'm happy if I only have to make some walls. Making all the outside backgrounds for now would take ages for me, and the readers need their dose of the comic. :3

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rphb In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 16:51:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay, I kind of noticed that it was vectors for the whole comic feels like a synchronized cartoon, you know. It is basically okay, but there are some small things that don't quite fit. Not to criticize or anything, but the all drawn version like PixelKitties or CSImadmax just feels more real. Also I am a big fan of these two.

I am a big fan of these two, PixelKitties are freekisly good at imitating the show, and while CSImadmax penmanship are a little more her own, it is still wonderfully detailed and sharp, and the humour she can press into her comic are uncanny.

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TriteBristle In reply to rphb [2012-10-26 17:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Because they are experienced, talented artists.

I'm not an artist (not by my definition). And neither I am experienced, I started making this only recently, still learning it. I haven't looked at any tutorials (apart from the magic aura), so I learned it from basically try-and-error.

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rphb In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 19:39:30 +0000 UTC]

I still like your comics, that's why I'm watching you (okay that sounded creepy)

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TriteBristle In reply to rphb [2012-10-26 19:45:37 +0000 UTC]

I know, and I appreciate your interest in my modest lil' comic.

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rphb In reply to TriteBristle [2012-10-26 21:11:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ICEgiveUp In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 09:46:00 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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kajisora In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 09:41:25 +0000 UTC]

And Lyra woke up....Horny

I regret nothing!

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TriteBristle In reply to kajisora [2012-10-26 14:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Unicorns are always horny! o.O
Something must be in the water in Equestria...

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TheMAM In reply to ??? [2012-10-26 08:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Expected a kiss there.

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