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Here, have a bunch of new faces. Believe me or not, all of them are show-canon characters. (I wouldn’t vouch for their canon names, but this is what the fim wiki gave to me.) Noteworthy appears a lot as background pony, Concerto and Symphony were playing in Sweet and Elite, Beauty Brass was playing alongside Tavi at the gala, and Ballad was seen running through the screen in Lesson Zero. Her CM is a lyre as well.

Also, the amount of Bon in the comic is dangerously low right now, this must be aided.
Why didn’t she have this flashback yet, you ask? Obviously, because she didn’t need it yet. Only Twinkleshine talked with her about her past, and she already knew about her “severe" amnesia, so she didn’t need to cover up her missing knowledge in basic pony things.

It took a while to come up with the looks of the HQ, and since I have no talent in interior design all I could come up with is what you see. (I used google's sketchUp to model it, then traced over the screenshots taken from certain angles). I'll upgrade it gradually.

(I wrote a bit more on the source of BB's and Symphony's personalities on the corresponding tumblr update.)

Next on Heartstrings:
It's time for some music!


As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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Comments: 224

TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 21:58:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I used some of those names and ponies in my fanfic!  AWESOME!  That makes me smile!  Not to mention how great this one is, with all the ponies, background events, and just how neat everypony is!


Also, I cannot believe no one's done this yet, but...


Fiddlesticks x Beauty Brass?


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genstian In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 21:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Last frame, "we are not amused" look.

Silly Lyra, get yourself a cover story!

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DarthTallis In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 21:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, dear. Looks like Symphony's about to slap a filly. :3 

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abzde In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 21:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Loving this comic so far! Each time I see a new strip pop up in my feed I can't wait to read it.

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Neko-me [2013-07-26 20:42:17 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore your comic! The story is interesting and occassionally adorable, the character designs and execution is perfect and the text placement is not irritating. Well done and I can't wait where this comic is going (hope we'll see more lyrabon cuteness).

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Larsen664 In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 20:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Yes YES ship all the ponies


I love Octavias expression in the last last panel. 

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WindyMountain5090 In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 20:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Every hint of romance has been between two mares. Perhaps its time for a mix up? Two colts or a colt/mare? Jus a sugestion. I swear I'm not complaining!!! I love the comic!!!!!!

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TriteBristle In reply to WindyMountain5090 [2013-07-26 20:38:36 +0000 UTC]

There will be at least one colt/mare and one colt/colt pairing, though latter one will have less screentime (an already married couple, my own "auxiliary" characters for a specific role in the story).

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Electuroo [2013-07-26 20:10:18 +0000 UTC]

loving the comic so far, ^^ it really fun to read

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uay778 [2013-07-26 19:58:13 +0000 UTC]

...hmmm what's goin on in the background with bb and fiddlesticks?

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broznik592 In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 19:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Fiddlesticks x Beauty Brass OTP

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foxesdemonica In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 18:49:46 +0000 UTC]

I think Symphony is jealous

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MillenniumFalsehood In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 18:35:36 +0000 UTC]

More awesome panels of awesomeness! And that little tidbit about them recognizing her name? Dadgum, you know how to hook 'em, doncha?

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Delphi-is-Script In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 18:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Looks like Beauty Brass has a crush on fiddles, ooh~

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AlexisDragonStorm In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 18:07:13 +0000 UTC]

noooooooooooooooo! just finished reading it all and now i must wait for update Dx

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Lex-the-Pikachu In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 17:12:46 +0000 UTC]

heh looks like Symphony isn't happy with Fiddlesticks and Brass 

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Ivory-Melody In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Love Fiddlestick´s look in panel 3 and 6.


She has a really cute front profile.

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ScytherScizor In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:50:54 +0000 UTC]

This is seriously funny, Noteworthy only appears once, I can sense a Beauty Brass and Fiddlesticks romance and Symphony and Fiddlesticks rivalry, anyway, Symphony seemed really unimpressed, and I'm quite surprised that Ballad would be used

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Your interior design looks intriguing. If there was a place like this for musicians near where I live, I'd play my violin more often.

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TriteBristle In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-07-26 17:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Fun fact: most rooms are octagon shaped. xD

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to TriteBristle [2013-07-26 17:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Th'art welcome! Most rooms in this building, MLP, or real life? I'm guessing this building.

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TriteBristle In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-07-26 17:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Yep, in this building.

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to TriteBristle [2013-07-26 19:23:25 +0000 UTC]

I see. Well, that's what worlds of artifice are for: making that which should be.

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Nodoga In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Can it be that all the members are OC´s from some peoples? Because I´m pretty shure that I heard about Noteworthy in a fan fic before.

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Phoenix0117 In reply to Nodoga [2013-07-26 16:49:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure they just used Noteworthy, he IS actually canon

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to Nodoga [2013-07-26 16:44:27 +0000 UTC]

No, Noteworthy is a genuine background pony. Originally, he had the fan name Blues, but that got changed when an official toy called him "Noteworthy". I think most of the musician ponies in this strip are legit background characters who have appeared as musicians on the show, which is why they don't get seen as much as other background ponies. I may be wrong. Please don't trample me underhoof if I am.

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TriteBristle In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-07-26 17:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Yep, as I wrote in the description, all of them are canon ponies. :3

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to TriteBristle [2013-07-26 19:24:04 +0000 UTC]

That I now have read, and the fact that you're using them is awesome.

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Nodoga In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-07-26 16:49:35 +0000 UTC]

LoL, never saw one of them before in the shoe or just don´t noticed them. Well then, I´m going to call them the "real" background ponies.

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to Nodoga [2013-07-26 16:52:03 +0000 UTC]

As opposed to the OCs? Because I don't think Trite has used any OCs so far. That's what makes this comic so awesome.

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FiMvisible In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:16:24 +0000 UTC]

You are crafting a whole world filled with background ponies, and it even makes sense! I love you.

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Websurger In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:10:27 +0000 UTC]

I love how symphony gets annoyed with the conversation in the background and walks away.

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Kapuchu1 In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Beauty Brass has a crush on Fiddlesticks. 


Don't! Deny it!


I mean, come one, look at that blush when she's talking with Fiddle :3

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pyr0cat In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 16:08:39 +0000 UTC]

Freaking out over unusual things?
TF2 commuity in a nutshell

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TriteBristle In reply to pyr0cat [2013-07-26 16:17:12 +0000 UTC]

There's also a hat on this page! :3

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Lucky424 [2013-07-26 16:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Symphony seems to know something......


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Guthixoftehjudges [2013-07-26 16:03:53 +0000 UTC]

"shall you decide to join" should be "should you decide to join."

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TriteBristle In reply to Guthixoftehjudges [2013-07-26 16:10:34 +0000 UTC]

It's grammatically correct and sounds fancier than "should". So I keep it that way, but thank you for the suggestion.

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DarkMageDragon [2013-07-26 16:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Better hope Dolphin Dream doesn't get a wiff of Fiddles and Beauty looking all blush at each other!

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NicolasDominique [2013-07-26 15:59:02 +0000 UTC]

MUSICKS! FINALLY!


Also, Symphony is not amused xD

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caballero-nocturno In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 15:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Bonbon: do not tell anyone about what happens to you.

Lyra: Ok.

later that day

Lyra: My name is Lyra and I suffer from amnesia

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Desperate-Demise [2013-07-26 15:53:20 +0000 UTC]

Damn it Symphony! Move you're head! We cant see the REAL show!

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Dgs-Krieger [2013-07-26 15:50:37 +0000 UTC]

I think it was time...

To face the music.

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

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mrBronyDash In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 15:47:34 +0000 UTC]

What did fiddlesticks say ?

I want to know ._.

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Luchocas In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 15:40:52 +0000 UTC]

I like what's happening in the back between Fiddles and Brass :3

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DavidCurser In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 15:39:53 +0000 UTC]

Did I do something wrong?

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sonic-GT In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 15:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Symphony's looking a bit serious. Wonder what she'll have to say..o.o

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KestrelElk [2013-07-26 15:36:15 +0000 UTC]

One edit:
First panel - "Members who they need a place" - Remove "they"

(If you'd rather I post these to you in notes in future just let me know)

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TriteBristle In reply to KestrelElk [2013-07-26 16:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Fixed, thank you..

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KestrelElk In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 15:34:45 +0000 UTC]

I love the look of the HQ, it's a great first concept.
Also whatever is going on between Beauty Brass and Fiddles - I approve.

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