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Umberoff β WRINGLOCKE: Chapter 20 (full size in desc)
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Published: 2016-12-12 00:39:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 3057; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 13
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edit: howdy, dA has been having sizing issues lately and shrinking longer images, which means this old page is now near illegible. thanks dA!!!! for now you can see it at it's proper size in sta.sh here sta.sh/08byig29b66 until the issue is resolved
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congratulations! you evolved into someone less suited for cold weather!
this page is suuuuuuuper long but I didn't feel like there was any comfortable place to split it without breaking the flow, so, hope you enjoy this giant chunk of Dumb Teens
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Hmm... I suck at faces IRL, so could someone maybe point out exactly what changed when the starter-dude evolved?
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Just the clothing changed during evolution! Face-wise basically nothing changed.
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Oh, good. >_< I couldn't tell anything different to the face and was sure I was missing the obvious. *blush*
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Beautiful, icy lighting to match the stark, unflinching words. Brutal, hurtful but needed.
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goddd I love everything about this page. The lighting is so harsh and adds so much to the tension of the scene, we see how these different characters cope (or don't) and just how much their personalities can clash, heck Leon even evolved and made me even MORE SAD somehow
Loving how the story is developing~!
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Oh wow, I love everything about this page. The posing, the expressions, the lighting, the tension, it's all so good! Makes me wonder just how the heck they're gonna resolve all the issues between themselves.
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Ahhh well thank you very much! These pages really were worrying the hell out of me, but I'm glad it all seems to be coming across well ;w;
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wait you had him around LEVEL 30 at that gym?! Isn't the 3rd gym's main pokemon only level 21?
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OHHH no no, definitely not. He's evolving into croconaw here, not feraligatr, haha. I actually have a general guideline to not level up over a gym leader's ace, so no overleveling here :V
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Ohhhh, my mistake. Must of been an annoying rule, miltank is such a tank tbh i usually over leveled to bet her easier XD
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I'm so happy he's finally standing up for himself. Β ;-; Β The conversation/ explosions here was very much wanted and very well written-- good job.
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Welllll he tried standing up for himself at least, which at least is something even if it did lead to, uh, escalations :V
But thank you very much!!
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The emotion in this is beautiful. Her anger, and his paralysis, it's absolutely beautifully written, and drawn.
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Ahhh thank you very much!! I've been worrying about these pages for months, so I really do appreciate it ;w;
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Can they not change clothing? Amazing chapter by the way. Love the way you handled the colors!
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Haha, I mean, yeahhh they can change clothes if they wanna. Admittedly I kiiiiinda handwave the mechanics related to clothing stuff, since keeping a similar outfit is important to having them be recognizable as a gijinka, even if it doesn't make 100% sense :V It's basically a case of "this is how it is just because, don't think too hard about it", haha
Anyways, thank you very much!! :>
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Ah, yes...delicious, delicious team angst.
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YESSS the delicious angst, I love it.
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Amazing!
That was very satisfying to read, can't wait to see what happens next
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Ahhh thanks a bunch dude! ;0
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LOL actually, confession, he evolved right before the Whitney fight :V but y'know I figure it's more ~thematic~ if it happened here.
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Ooooh! Super cool to see an evolution! But dang, this was a heavy page OmO
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YEAH I've been waiting so long to finally get to an evolution :') But hehe, thank you!
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On the latest episode of people who don't know how to talk to each other... XD
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lol, hard to talk to each other reasonably when you're a bunch of emotionally scrambled teens ;V
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