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Published: 2017-06-25 04:50:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 532; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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My lines are definitely wobbly, my foundation is not as strong as it was before, I blame not drawing for a while but it is more of my new system of drawing. I am glad my shading is faster and easier to implement, so silver lining~Related content
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I know, I'm glad she turned out that way~
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I know, they are the best~
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Wow! This looks nice! I love the colors and the technique that you used in this piece! You even placed the bright areas just right too!
Also, the hair is nice as well! I like how the ends are sharp. It makes him look very creepy and that's awesome!
Now for the improvement part: While what I mentioned above is nice, you might want to consider making some outlines match the color of the blue eyes instead of using
straight black. It would help the eyes blend and stand out much better! For the smile and nose, you should considerΒ thinnerΒ outlines to make them stand out as well!
Try not to use thicker outlines when you are working on the face of a character. Also one last thing, you might want to consider showing some of her neck a bit so that it
doesn't look like the head is coming off though I do love the suit that she's wearing.
Final grading of this piece: I give this piece an A because of the originality of the artwork, with those things I pointed out could help you on your next pieces as I look forward to seeing
more of what you have in store! The colors of the piece match really well and I was glad to point out things about this work!
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Thanks for the critique, though that dress does cover her whole neck~Β Spirits [A]
My next picture should improve incrementally as I adjust to the new tablet~
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You're welcome! ^w^
I was glad to give tips and a grade for your work!
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And you passed with A++
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Nah, I was pretty sloppy with the jaw and eyes~
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Ya, my eyes are brutal on me too, not just towards other artists~ XD
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Well don't be to hard on yourself. XD
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This ain't some sharingan, I can't turn off what my eyes actively catch~ XP
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Hahaha love the joke^^.
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Ya, critiquing myself is just part of the process~Β XP
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Yeah it is the curse of being a artist. XD
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hey friend, i'm from project comment!
first of all: WOW THOSE TEXTURES~! i'm wicked in love with how the gem, skin, and crown came out. nice job! the different brushes used really make each element stand out, but also help the piece work together cohesively. i also think the rendering of the hair is really wonderful.
that being said, i would consider applying similar structures to your linework. now, on one hand, i think the smooth, crisp lines in this piece help make the different textures elsewhere in the piece stand out. however, i think maybe a different brush or colored linework may also help strengthen the piece a bit. the biggest area that i notice this in is the irises! you might consider using a dark blue line around the eyes, as opposed to straight-up black.
the cropping on this piece is also nice. it's pretty even on both sides, and there's some room between the top of the crown and the top edge of the piece! great job centering the character.
overall, nice job!
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Thanks for the critique~
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I know, I like them that big~ XD
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