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Published: 2014-12-27 15:05:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 65430; Favourites: 544; Downloads: 264
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"You're stolen my first kiss!!!"Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 469
Tyraka628 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:50:25 +0000 UTC]
Let me guess: Twilight's son is one of those worthless, womanizing wastes of flesh, food, and oxygen that spends his days in the basement, contributing nothing to the society than impregnating mares.
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kitsychan In reply to Tyraka628 [2014-12-27 19:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Or... he uses a kiss to tell ponies lineage, like say... Dr Who, he was "tasting".
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Tyraka628 In reply to kitsychan [2014-12-27 20:14:00 +0000 UTC]
I'll believe that when I see it for myself.
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ExMedal In reply to kitsychan [2014-12-27 19:11:52 +0000 UTC]
or hes like that girl in that anime and has never had any contact with anypony else and thinks he's popular
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InfiniteHeartStudios In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:44:30 +0000 UTC]
RUN FOR YOUR LIFE IF YOU KNOWS WHAT IS GOOD FOR YOU! YOU THINK YOU'RE BLAZING MUM IS BAD? ( )
YOU HAVNT SEENA ANYTHING!!!
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RageLokiCat In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I'm sorry I was so quick to jump to conclusions last time. On a side note, who's ready for nightmare-form Sparity?
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samykhadre In reply to RageLokiCat [2014-12-27 19:06:02 +0000 UTC]
Not a Night-mare a Nightdragon it's 20% more cooler and dangerous
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revan1801 In reply to RageLokiCat [2014-12-27 18:45:42 +0000 UTC]
Here here! Let the doom begin XD
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RageLokiCat In reply to revan1801 [2014-12-27 18:48:37 +0000 UTC]
It's funny because he's probably used to normal mares being angry at him but I doubt he's ever incurred the wrath of a half dragon nightmare. I bet she doesn't even leave a body.
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revan1801 In reply to RageLokiCat [2014-12-27 18:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Body? *looks around* What do you mean and wasn't there supposed to a castle here?
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RageLokiCat In reply to revan1801 [2014-12-27 18:51:10 +0000 UTC]
It's gonna be like Twilight vs Tirek all over again.
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RageLokiCat In reply to revan1801 [2014-12-27 19:18:17 +0000 UTC]
I wonder how many percent cooler Aerial Ace is, since she's pretty much the RD of crazy future.
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SlickDestro In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:40:22 +0000 UTC]
OH PISS RUN SHE CAN STILL BREATH FIRE!!!!!!!!!!
(still cool that he can tell what a pony is but he has to do it from a kiss which would make it akward expesially for my character. He is a four winged alicorn which can jump through dimensions at will)
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StreamSecret In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:36:52 +0000 UTC]
well, i guess his habit of kissing random mares should end very, very soon...
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silver90 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:35:59 +0000 UTC]
those are some big sharp fangs!!! im a little scared for what comes next!!!
cant w8 to he's face slamed into the crystal floor XD
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blah23z In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:32:04 +0000 UTC]
well he definitely deserves whatever is coming his way
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lgraciano In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:24:49 +0000 UTC]
Sheesh.... You know what... whip his little butt... this guy deserves it!
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SnowflakeThePony337 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:14:41 +0000 UTC]
your 20 and you havent had a first kiss.... sad, but i understand, youve been on the road your whole life...
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CinderScript In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 18:13:26 +0000 UTC]
And this is why you don't kiss the odd mare out of nowhere, she may turn out to be half dragon. Which will end poorly, as things involving angry dragons tend to.
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Derpalotderps In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:59:15 +0000 UTC]
Wait if he knows the taste of a pony doesn't that mean he kissed a dragon or a pony before?
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Shadowcatcherfox In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Twily's castle has plenty of door filled halls doesn't it? Time to play Yackity Sax.
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CrackedWhooves In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:55:03 +0000 UTC]
There goes twilight's chance of having grandchildren.......
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barduk4 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:51:50 +0000 UTC]
but i thought girls loved getting kissed by dreamy looking guys/ponies
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Wisky-08 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:51:13 +0000 UTC]
he's going to die likely be tackle and beaten
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ChromArtChill In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:45:46 +0000 UTC]
*facepalm* Did you really have to do that?! now I wonder what will Twilight think of this
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nikuchanprime In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:42:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh Dawn. You ARE your mother's son after all.
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marinus18 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:41:59 +0000 UTC]
wouldn't think Twilight's son would be like that.
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Scarlet-Mirages In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:38:22 +0000 UTC]
He's gon' die! But deserves it get him sparity!!
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Flameswirl In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:30:49 +0000 UTC]
uh oh. uh, Alter, you might want to run. you know the saying 'never meddle in the affairs of dragons, cause you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup'.
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Daiskida In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:27:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow....Really, he kisses someone to determine their species or something like that. Oh, please Sparity due us all a favor and murder this egotistical douchebag. Honestly, I'm so angry at this character, that I'd say only this video clip can sum up my thoughts of him www.youtube.com/watch?v=z9fnDw…
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GuyverLord In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:26:07 +0000 UTC]
There's no point in him running... He'll only die tired.
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MagicaITrevor In reply to GuyverLord [2014-12-27 17:37:47 +0000 UTC]
But at least he'd have lived for an extra minute or two, as well as provide entertainment for whoever they run past. Don't be so selfish. (Then again, he stole her first kiss, so we've already seen he's at least a little bit selfish...)
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SuperBigMac In reply to MagicaITrevor [2014-12-27 18:07:31 +0000 UTC]
Foe Alternate used Draining Kiss! Sparity's energy has been sapped!
Sparity uses RAGE! Sparity's rage continues to grow...
Foe Alternate used Charm! But it failed!
Sparity uses Dragon Rush! Critical Hit! Foe Alternate flinched!
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blacknight71 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:24:20 +0000 UTC]
Now he has done it..........and i am GONE!
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YinandYangHarmony In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:19:46 +0000 UTC]
Uh oh....ATTACK!!! *sits back and eat some popcorn*
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