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Published: 2014-12-27 15:05:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 65432; Favourites: 544; Downloads: 264
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"You're stolen my first kiss!!!"Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 469
DerpyBronyman In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:15:24 +0000 UTC]
Hot an and spicy marshmallows nice one. Who started marshmallow rarity.
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nekotigerfire In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:10:44 +0000 UTC]
this is what ya get mister don't mess with women.
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sierra5043 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:10:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice job, dude! Now run....Run far, faaaaaar away.
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xPD369 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:51:12 +0000 UTC]
welp he's Fucked
you better run xD
RRRUUNNN 4444 UUURRR LIFFFEEE
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pikafan004 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:48:09 +0000 UTC]
I can only see this as passionate rage.
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Sdall122 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Alternate Dawn is in deep (insert obscene poop related swear word here)...Good job Dawn
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Drayle88 In reply to nikuchanprime [2014-12-27 18:14:51 +0000 UTC]
props for completing the line
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AdventurePonyBTP In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:46:40 +0000 UTC]
You just screwed up big time man.
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Blue-Moon-Arts64 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:44:32 +0000 UTC]
If I was him I'd start running.
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94Tomekm In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:42:02 +0000 UTC]
GOOOOOOOOOO sparity blow him to tartarus XD
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Jamiboi In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Time to enact the age of tactic of RUNNING LIKE THE WIND!
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PonyRIG In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:30:52 +0000 UTC]
so it wasn't a daydream of hers, but this is much better, he just don't give a shit about emotions, he is pure logical.
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ashbluebear In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:22:15 +0000 UTC]
Run. Run like you've never run before. She will kill you.
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Sarchiappone In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:19:10 +0000 UTC]
Poor Alter...
that was the stupidest way to leave this world (or at last this plane of existence XPP)
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danielkolmom In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:18:17 +0000 UTC]
Woops! The First Kiss Ruined XD
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CrimsonColt7 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:17:50 +0000 UTC]
and then Sparity use Fire Breath to BBQ his plot !!!!!
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Mariangela28 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Well, obversations... one, that is one heck of a tongue that Alter possesses there.
Two. There is an old saying, very much coming from either a creepy young child or another being. Said saying is "You shouldn't have done that."
Third... bets, anyone? We got a nice 1v1 fight brewing here, dragon pony hybrid vs alicorn prince. Place your bets, place your bets, then wait for the action to unfold.
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nikuchanprime In reply to Mariangela28 [2014-12-27 17:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Hell hath no fury like a dragon-pony hybrid who was essentially violated by the son of your mother's alicorn Princess best friend.
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MagicaITrevor In reply to Mariangela28 [2014-12-27 16:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Not tongue. Palate. The Palate is what allows you to differentiate distinct tastes. The tongue only processes spicy, sour, etc, but it's the Palate that allos your brain to differentiate how two spicy things are different, what they are, etc. It's how you tell the difference between chicken and beef, for example, or iceburg lettuce from spinach, etc.
Also, my bet is on Sparity, since I have seen no wings on Dusk, and Sparity has her mother's rage and her father's strength. Dusky-boy is dead.
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vavacung In reply to Mariangela28 [2014-12-27 16:39:11 +0000 UTC]
We have no Alicorn prince here. Just regular Unicorn prince.
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poisonflame616 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:08:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm guessing Alter is going to be a corpse before the next 'To Love God To Love Moral' page is uploaded
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Gorehound49 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:07:23 +0000 UTC]
Wonder what kind of insurance policy royalty has?... well whatever it is, Alt here had better hope that said insurance covers "getting mauled by an angry half-dragon". Cause whether or not it does, very soon there will be blood!
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Jon-rex666 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:05:02 +0000 UTC]
i hope for you she don't breath fire
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March4Fun In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 16:02:25 +0000 UTC]
You see that face? That is not a face I ever want to seye a girl make, especially when she's looking at me.
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Santana642 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 15:56:39 +0000 UTC]
Saw her face in the first page xD she liked it hehehehehe
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TheUltimateGravoid In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 15:55:18 +0000 UTC]
Alter, when i look at her Eyes and her teeth, i guess you are going to die into the next 10 minutes...
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Mariangela28 In reply to TheUltimateGravoid [2014-12-27 16:07:14 +0000 UTC]
Ten minutes, if he is lucky. Unicorn with dragon powers. Angry unicorn with dragon powers.
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TheUltimateGravoid In reply to Mariangela28 [2014-12-27 16:09:11 +0000 UTC]
Ok, you r right, 4-5minutes
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Tdbreslawski In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 15:53:51 +0000 UTC]
oh dude you are so fucking screwed......
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LSDInkvizitor In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 15:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Kiss stealer is still better fate than waifu stealer
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amberflicker In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 15:49:40 +0000 UTC]
If you value your continued existence, I suggest you run. Probably won't be long until she gets you, but if you like delaying the inevitable...
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marinus18 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 15:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Sparity really seems like a filly here still, she never seems like a young mare. After all she already is 20.
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Hakiromazuto In reply to marinus18 [2014-12-27 19:00:42 +0000 UTC]
Don't forget for the most part she has only been around her mom and dad, since they stay on the move so much. Therefore her experience with others isn't to great, which makes her more innocent than childish.
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marinus18 In reply to Hakiromazuto [2014-12-27 19:01:21 +0000 UTC]
that would only make her even more mature. she's only with adults.
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IDM4 In reply to marinus18 [2014-12-27 16:32:33 +0000 UTC]
well since she's part dragon, I'd expect her to grow more slowly than an average pony
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