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Published: 2016-01-17 13:16:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 6779; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 36
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That's right, a DOUBLE PAGE, son!
This was a pretty big moment - finally getting to that sweet, sweet evil-twin action (wow, that sounded WAY less naughty in my head, honest
) plus the format tweaked a little to look more like a page, (the overall art-style's being adjusted just a tad, too).But it's not just for commemoration; whenever there's a story or action beat that'd be a disservice to cram on one page I'll do a double again. Thanks for reading, see you next week
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loving the designs. NOT inez looks like rag doll crossed with a minion. very andriod. NOT jackie looks like jackie if she became an angst teens.
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The designs for their evil-twins are fantastic!
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I can't readΒ it. The words are too small. Can you post the dialogue in a comment?
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Weird, you should be able to expand it to full by clicking on it - or try clicking the 'download' button, if need be.
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So we meet the evil dopplegangers...at least two of them!
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Yeah, there'll be plenty more.
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Okay; Enid and Mackenzie? They're both creepy as all get out but in a way that totally works (who knew Girlish Pigtails could be creepy?) and Fatherboard is even more so even though we haven't met him yet. And it looks like I called what happened to Matt; as Inez would say "This is not good. This is not good at all." Jackie is not going to be happy when she finds out what's happened to her friends.
On another note, I think I can say with confidence you're the first person to give Inez purple eyes in a fanwork. Matt with green and Jackie with brown are almost a given (not that I mind; the colors suit them well) but Inez is almost always blue-eyed in the fanworks I've examined. Purple eyes suit her really well though and not just because purple is her signature color; this is especially true with the style you use for this fandom.
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I'm glad to know their characterization hits the mark
Thanks for the well thought-out commenting, as always
This story has been knocking around in my head for so long that the potential 'impact' of some of the moments has long been lost to me, but it's great to see them having the effect I'd
want - I just hope Fatherborg and the other upcoming doppelgangers live up to the apparent 'hype'
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You're welcome.
Considering what I've seen so far, mostly definitely. I'm eager to find out what the rest of the counterparts to the characters we know and love are like as well as who's on which side. I'm especially curious about Slider since there's a Fanon idea of making him a traitor in his first episode in an AU story so I'm curious to see where in the spectrum you place his Interverse counterpart.
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No kidding pigtails can be creepy; sometimes they're intimidating.
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Eeep! Harley Quinn, the single scariest and yet not character in Gotham (Joker freaks the heck out of me; and I once managed to get into his head by accident. I...was less than thrilled.).
Ironically though, I'm getting an odd vibe that by the end of all of this, we'll have Sympathy for Devils for the Intersquad. Given Mackenzie and Enid's dialogue and how banged up Enid is, I highly doubt they came to Interspace voluntarily. I mean there's an implication that Mackenzie genuinely believed Enid wants this pair of strange interlopers (they don't seem to know about Jackie yet; thank goodness!) executed and it's all but stated there's always a chance that Fatherborg will decide the Intersquad is no longer needed. Granted, that sympathy won't excuse what they've been doing but I'd like to find out how kids who up to a certain point in the past were identical to the Cybersquad (given the way Inez managed to accidentally bluff her way through those bots, it appears that she and Enid are genetically identical and we can assume the same holds true for the other pairs) turned into this...and whatever Pratt is like (and can I say that is a REALLY unfortunate name, no matter what it's short for; no offense, Vederick); even though it's not really the Cybersquad, it kinda hurts to see their counterparts behaving in a fashion that indicates that if it suited their needs, they'd turn on each other in a heartbeat.
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Well, at least they aren't sadistic enough to off their counterparts.
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Yeah, that's always nice
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