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Next-[link] (or go to the Wolved comic section in my gallery)
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The page two!!
Cave drawings are murder.
But I had fun! Not much to say otherwise, if you have any questions about this page, feel free to ask!
Also, COMMENTS ARE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED!!!
All material (c) Quinci 2011. Do not redistribute, trace, or copy in any form or way.
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Comments: 51

Wolved In reply to ??? [2011-06-20 01:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And yeah I see by your other comments there's a lot of things I've missed.

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wolfsquare In reply to Wolved [2011-06-20 02:01:11 +0000 UTC]

sorry, just one more spelling error i noticed on p. 2: "vengence" should be "vengeance."
grammatically, the page is pretty much correct. the only problem is the second-to-last (or penultimate, which is a fun word to use) sentence. i think it would flow better if it read, "If I fail, God only knows what could happen to myself and all other wolves; my failure could mean the extinction of us all!" but that's just my suggestion. oh, and i was assuming that kado is a wolf, too. is that right?

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Wolved In reply to wolfsquare [2011-06-20 02:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Kado is a wolf. (happens to be the airsoul) And yes, that is a better way to phrase the sentence. 8D

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wolfsquare In reply to Wolved [2011-06-20 03:45:30 +0000 UTC]

ok cool. i guess you'll explain the term "airsoul" later, right?
oh, btw parentheses need to come before periods (cuz that's just the way it is).

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Wolved In reply to wolfsquare [2011-06-20 04:07:33 +0000 UTC]

Yep. And really? Dang, I've learned several things already from you.

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wolfsquare In reply to Wolved [2011-06-21 16:58:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks! i'm here to help. if you have any questions, just ask.

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Wolved In reply to wolfsquare [2011-06-21 17:00:32 +0000 UTC]

ok.

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razorflame45 [2011-04-30 01:59:12 +0000 UTC]

is this it so far?

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Wolved In reply to razorflame45 [2011-04-30 22:26:58 +0000 UTC]

No
There are five pages, sorry about forgetting the next link...
They are in my gallery.

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razorflame45 In reply to Wolved [2011-05-01 01:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Ok XD

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Wolved In reply to razorflame45 [2011-05-01 01:23:13 +0000 UTC]

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razorflame45 In reply to Wolved [2011-05-01 20:31:20 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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Destynee33 [2011-03-26 21:24:49 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!!! 8D

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Wolved In reply to Destynee33 [2011-03-27 04:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! I'm very glad you like it!

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Destynee33 In reply to Wolved [2011-03-27 17:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Mm yes, I really like the cave painting style! xD

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Wolved In reply to Destynee33 [2011-03-28 15:02:11 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Kuwaizair [2011-03-25 20:39:38 +0000 UTC]

chicken. haha

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Wolved In reply to Kuwaizair [2011-03-25 20:41:13 +0000 UTC]

XD
It's original, chickens are underrated.

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Kuwaizair In reply to Wolved [2011-03-25 21:07:08 +0000 UTC]

I wanted to try to sneek things into mine. but mine, I put to much on my plate. but I won't push my comic with false promices (like an animated series slated to air in 2013)

but I'm hitting functional pitfalls with, drawing mechanics.

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Wolved In reply to Kuwaizair [2011-03-25 21:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. lol, it takes practice to know how to put things like that into comics and get the right effect.

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Kuwaizair In reply to Wolved [2011-03-25 21:53:43 +0000 UTC]

[link]

my current roadblock

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Wolved In reply to Kuwaizair [2011-03-25 23:47:16 +0000 UTC]

^^
Great drawings! XD

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me-Liisa [2011-03-21 20:21:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh goshh, poor spirit wolf. x_x The story is already so interesting, I can't wait to see page 3!

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Wolved In reply to me-Liisa [2011-03-21 21:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!!!
Haha, if he didn't die, there would be no story! Besides, he still plays a character after he dies, since he comes back as a spirit.

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me-Liisa In reply to Wolved [2011-03-21 21:39:41 +0000 UTC]

I already understood that. x3 Very exiting!

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Wolved In reply to me-Liisa [2011-03-21 22:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Oops!
Well at least that tells me that the comic is good at explaining itself. x3

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Dyxo [2011-03-21 01:15:27 +0000 UTC]

Your really good at cliffhangers, aren't you?

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Wolved In reply to Dyxo [2011-03-21 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]

I try.
THANKYOU.

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Dyxo In reply to Wolved [2011-03-21 02:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

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Bri8234 [2011-03-20 23:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Incredible LOVE it

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Wolved In reply to Bri8234 [2011-03-21 02:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

I love that plz account...

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Ginkatniss [2011-03-20 15:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Woo creepy skull but I like where the concept of the story is going so far! How long till next page you think?

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Wolved In reply to Ginkatniss [2011-03-20 16:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Eh, they seem to come out on the weekends! So, I'll try to get the next one out by then, to.
Thankyou though! By the way, that's actually Kado's skull.

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Ginkatniss In reply to Wolved [2011-03-20 17:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Weekend updates sound awesome to me gives me a little more to look forward to during the week

But oh? Creepy The story line just got better

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Wolved In reply to Ginkatniss [2011-03-20 17:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yus. Wolved is a complicated thing.
I'm so happy you look forward to it!

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GreyBushido [2011-03-20 04:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, your story has an interesting concept! I like the gloomy feeling of the story, & you set the stage pretty well! And your cave drawings are great

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Wolved In reply to GreyBushido [2011-03-20 05:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well thankyou! Yeah, I'm trying to keep an interesting concept, I want this story to go big!

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Dajhira-Jo [2011-03-20 02:31:42 +0000 UTC]

DAT SKULL DER

IS AWESOME

I LIKE EVERYTHING HERE YO.

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Wolved In reply to Dajhira-Jo [2011-03-20 05:12:22 +0000 UTC]

thankyou Dajhira!

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nekonotaishou [2011-03-20 00:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Lovely storytelling the voice of the character's narration really works well, and is a welcome relief from the usual ambiguous narrator that many comics start with. I look forward to more of this C:

P.S. You might want to include 'previous page', 'next page', and 'first page' links in the artist comments of your pages, makes it easier to follow.

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Wolved In reply to nekonotaishou [2011-03-20 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! Yes, I'm striving to make Wolved something amazing, and different in many ways from others' comics.
OH!
I forgot about the links! I'll do that now!
Thankyou for reminding me!

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KMC-Birdsong [2011-03-19 23:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, WOW, this page is INCREDIBLE. I feel like I can reach in and pull out the skull and touch it and walk around the room... The whole atmosphere is so well created here, I'm just in awe.

I LOVE the unique lighting in this, and the cave drawings, and the smudge on the cave drawings really adds to the atmosphere. THIS IS SO EPIIIICCCC. I really feel prepared for the story now, like I could just walk into the story and not be confused about anything. I FEEL ALL KNOWLEDGED. 8DD

.../runs away to stare and comment and roll in happiness some more over the other picture you put up cB

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Wolved In reply to KMC-Birdsong [2011-03-19 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]



THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I NEEDED TO ACHEIVE!!!
I need to mention the birds as well, but that'll come later. c8
YES. This is the knowledge we all can remember, unlike school knowledge! XD
THANKYOU!!!

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KMC-Birdsong In reply to Wolved [2011-03-19 23:49:14 +0000 UTC]

OYUS I loved how you snuck in dat dere birdie dere. I wanted to point to that cave painting and be all "LOOKIE IS REGZU", but I also dun wanna jump to conclusions. DUNT GIVE ANYTHING AWAY.

IKR, if only they taught school knowledge in comics, lol. xDD

NO PROB. 8D

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Wolved In reply to KMC-Birdsong [2011-03-19 23:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well conclusions can be right! I would say spoilers about it, but there are others here. <.< >.> o_o
Yeah, that would be the one class I could survive. SERIOUSLY, I can't remember anything about school, (though it sometimes comes back only at important tests) but can practicly MEMORIZE the EXACT words about making comics or articles about cartoons and anime on wikepedia. XDD

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KMC-Birdsong In reply to Wolved [2011-03-20 00:23:14 +0000 UTC]

ODANG xD Oh, well, I shall wait patiently, like a good audience member...

/SENDS A NOTE

OYUS I KNOW stupid schools >> Not everybody learns with HOMEWORK... actually, I don't really know anybody that does. xDD I learn with graphical and amusing interpretations, not walls of words, thanks. 8D

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Wolved In reply to KMC-Birdsong [2011-03-20 00:29:24 +0000 UTC]

XD yus. Huh? You need to know a small spoiler? Note me.

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RunnerInTheDay [2011-03-19 22:51:02 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!!!!!!!! page two of wolved finaly came out! and its awesome!

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Wolved In reply to RunnerInTheDay [2011-03-19 23:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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RunnerInTheDay In reply to Wolved [2011-03-19 23:14:12 +0000 UTC]

welcome.

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