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Published: 2014-03-03 17:27:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 5153; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 441
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Denna, clad in the black leather of a trainer led Aetherea by a chain leash through the halls of the slave quarters. She was in a fury over what had been done to her friend. The drug enhanced training program of Prince Eugene’s slave trainers had taken less than forty-eight hours to turn Aetherea into a submissive compliant pleasure slave. Now the beautiful redhead followed Denna obediently through the halls, naturally adopting the hip rolling cat-like strut of the slave, her hands clasped behind her back and eyes cast down ward. At least, Denna reflected, Aetherea’s obedience made it easy to tell her what to do and ensured her silence as the two glided through the halls.
An hour later Denna led Aetherea into the stables where she had quartered her horse and equipment. Working quickly she changed from the slaver’s garb into more utilitarian leather armor. She dug into her bag and ordered Aetherea to change from her slave silks into a less obvious and more appropriate traveling kit. Aetherea’s submissive “Yes Mistress,” response both broke Denna’s heart and caused the fire of her black anger to burn brightly. She suppressed thoughts of revenge as premature and focused on preparing the horses for travel.
“I knew we would find the mice near the cheese,” a deep male voice boomed out of the semi-darkness of the quiet stable.
A horse grunted at the sound as Denna turned to see three black clad guardsmen of Prince Eugene’s fortress step through the door of the stable. They were all grinning in the lamp light as their eyes flicked over the two curvaceous women.
From the corner of her eye Denna saw Aetherea slide gracefully to her knees as her training programed her to do in the presence of any male. That small distraction was noted by the guard leader who used it to lunge at Denna with both arms in an attempt to quickly subdue her.
“Damn your heart to hell,” Denna muttered as she easily avoided the clumsy move and delivered a short hard punch to the side of the man’s head. The short jab, powered by her anger, dazed him and knocked him to his knees. She then spun to the horse behind her and deftly slid two razor sharp swords from their saddle mounted sheaths. The other two guards had long broadswords drawn in the second it took Denna to turn and face them. She barely had time to capture the downward stroke of the faster of the two on the cross hilt of her short sword held in her right hand. He raised a small buckler to guard against the expect counter thrust of Denna’s own light broadsword. But it didn’t come.
Instead of striking her attacker, Denna kicked him backward as she swiped the long viciously sharp broadsword in her left hand in a quick arc that caught the third guard completely unprepared. The slash passed over the top of his partly raised buckler and cut easily through his neck and spine, neatly severing his head from his body. His partner looked on in shock as the head hit the floor of the stable followed momentarily by the slumping body.
Denna didn’t stop. Using the momentum of the slash, she continued to pivot to her left twisting the still gaping guard’s sword away from her body as she spun completely around and brought her broad word down in hammering cut from above into the guard’s shoulder. That blow was followed a second latter by the penetrating jab of the short sword under his leather armor and into his heart.
The second guard fell dead to the floor as Denna turned to eye the still dazed guard leader struggling to get up. She would let him retrieve his sword before she sent him to meet the Gods. Her mind was already considering how she would make up the time this brief encounter had cost her when suddenly the back of her head exploded in a flash of white hot agony that knocked her to her knees and caused her to drop both her swords. Trying to ignore the blinding pain she turned and through the veil of her hair glimpsed a fourth guard grinning widely as he raised his broadsword above her with both hands for the killing slash.
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This is a short (for me ) sexy adventure story of about 10-12 panels told mostly visually but with a paragraph or 2 of narrative.
Daz3d->Reality->Lux render with a genesis model.
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Comments: 27
TazLooking [2016-12-13 20:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Great scene!!!! She needs to shake off the cobwebs and take care of #4, else she is liable to die!!
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Troysters [2014-03-25 18:21:48 +0000 UTC]
DD... where's the next panel? I'm hanging in suspense! LOL Great work as always.
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Troysters [2014-03-26 15:41:03 +0000 UTC]
Soon Troy... a couple of things will be up tonight and then back to Denna and Aetherea!
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Troysters [2014-03-04 23:35:15 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful story... riviting and well detailed.. waiting with bated breath...
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Troysters [2014-03-05 14:39:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you are enjoying it Troy.. next part in a few days!
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Phyl-CGI [2014-03-05 14:38:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm very happy you are enjoying it Phil!
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irvingb [2014-03-04 15:07:32 +0000 UTC]
glimpsed a fourth guard grinning widely as he raised his broadsword above her with both hands for the killing slash...
Prediction: we're about to see Aetherea's slave brainwashing evaporate in about one-fiftieth of a second.
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to irvingb [2014-03-05 14:36:15 +0000 UTC]
hmmmmm.... interesting prediction.... it's all outlined already so we will see in a few days how close you got irving!
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paws4thot [2014-03-04 12:51:12 +0000 UTC]
Favourited for the realstic fight description, particularly the way the singleton has to concentrate on taking the attackers down fast and dirty, particularly when they don't "take numbers and form an orderly queue".
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to paws4thot [2014-03-05 14:37:41 +0000 UTC]
I think guard number three kind of thought he was waiting his turn --which unfortunately for him, came much earlier than he expected!
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sothellio [2014-03-04 03:23:41 +0000 UTC]
The battle often goes to the side that remembered to bring reinforcements.
Nice image and great description of the action.
Outnumbered and disarmed, Denna's in a spot of bother here. And even if she gets out of this one, Aetherea's training seem like it will make escaping difficult.
Looking forward to seeing what comes next for Denna and Aetherea. All sorts of ways to go from here.
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to sothellio [2014-03-05 14:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Battles are soooooo unpredictable!
Definitely all sorts of ways to go...but, since the story is already outlined I know which way we are going and thankfully have no decisions to make!
I'm glad you are enjoying it sothellio!
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sothellio In reply to donnaDomenitzo [2014-03-06 00:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh of course, but I've always found the wild speculation to be part of the fun.
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SimonJM [2014-03-03 22:33:08 +0000 UTC]
Kudos to guard number four ... he obviously failed to read the manual on how to 'properly' attack an opponent
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to SimonJM [2014-03-05 14:30:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah!!... lets complain to the Guard union.... I'm sure there is a rule that says they have to announce themselves with the appropriate snicker/sneer before attacking!
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SimonJM In reply to donnaDomenitzo [2014-03-05 18:01:11 +0000 UTC]
Something akin to the Evil Overlord Handbook www.eviloverlord.com/lists/ove… ?
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Linuscat07 [2014-03-03 20:00:52 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Awesome! (Hate to sound like a teenager but the render and story called for first reaction.).
I can tell you visualized every move in the fight in your head, seeing how it would play out in your mind's eye. A coherent action scene is much appreciated. Damn that fourth guard.
The description of Aetherea's programed slave behavior was also well thought out.
Superb render. Great serious looking swords and seen at interesting angles. The practical part of me would have put more protection on Denna but the male part of me is delighted with how she is clothed.
Simple and effective background and I like the lighting.
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Linuscat07 [2014-03-05 14:28:04 +0000 UTC]
Practical/realistic versus visual.... if it wasn't illustrated the choice would be easy... but since it is illustrated, no one is visiting DA to see nuns sword fight!
I'm very happy that you are enjoying it Linus...more to come soon!
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Bowski--Productions [2014-03-03 17:51:40 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story & great picture. Nice one!
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Bowski--Productions [2014-03-05 14:25:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much BP... I'm very happy you are enjoying it!
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to AzureVirgo [2014-03-05 14:25:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm happy you are enjoying it Azure!
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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Curia-DD [2014-03-05 14:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you DD... we need more!
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