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Doozigitis — Usurp 04
Published: 2010-12-25 21:20:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 6045; Favourites: 134; Downloads: 32
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EDIT: You might be wondering why Sozin knows Aang's name. I strayed from canon a bit because I felt it would make for a more entertaining comic. More about this will be explained in later pages.
Pencil, paper, Corel painter X, Photoshop 6.
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Wow...... Really shows off Sozin's twisted personality.
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Your style is amazing...and I love the colours you used.
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That last line is BAMF. XD
Awesome artwork, by the way. I have more reason to fangirl about AtlA. MWAHAHA. HA. HAHA.
Yeah.
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Hmm, I suppose if the narrator was omniscient, it wouldn't matter that they refer to the air avatar as 'Aang'
But
I still think it would be better to leave him unnamed, 'cause it reads like Sozin knows who the air avatar is.
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Only problem I have with this is that Aang wasn't known to be the Avatar yet, everyone just knew the Avatar was an Airbender.
But than again you may be straying from the canon on purpose since it's a fan comic. >_<;
But it is a really nice comic and art style though. : )
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I did stray from canon in some parts(i.e. Sozin knowing about Aang; Azulon's age). Accuracy is nice, but something I'm willing to fudge if I think it'll make a more entertaining comic. It'll be explained in the next few scenes.
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wait a second.. water tribe? Aang is an airbender so would it be the air nations not watertribes?
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he's saying that if the water tribes are destroyed, then after he wipes out the air nomads, the avatar would have nobody to reincarnate into.
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he trying to kill the next in line so the cycle never moves forward and is permanently dead
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Ah k that makes more sense.
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No, it would be the air nomads 
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i was being lazy but either way air nomads
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May want to change that section so he doesn't actually know the name of the next Avatar yet. The narrator may seem to be omniscient, but he's still telling it from Sozin's point of view, meaning he should almost certainly merely refer to him as "the next Avatar" as opposed to "Avatar Aang." At the start of the war, I'm not certain even Aang knew he was the Avatar yet...
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Last panel gave me shivers. D: Hope you will be uploading more soon. :3
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I'm intrigued. I hope you find the inspiration to finish this!
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Hmmm... so this is either non-canon, or Sozin/Azulon failed in their mission.
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Your colors are extraordinary! Just...they blend so well and look so beautiful!
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I thought of that too! Why didn't he kill the all the water tribe people first? I know Aang was still young and easy to kill, but he managed to evade him anyway.
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An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure!
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wow...his fingers. and his finger nails. They're artistically awesome. O_O!
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That last panel just exudes evil plan with that smile. Nice job
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Wow, he's got some crazy fingers!
I really like it so far^^
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so the fire nation knows about aang?
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Whoa, wait, he already knows the name of the next Avatar? HoShi-
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Errr... I think that's a narrator speaking in this whole page. He's reffering to Sozin in third person (probably a omniscient narrator, so he knows all the story, including Aang's name). Sozin himself does'nt know the name.
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That evil grin reminds me of that "just as planned" face from Deathnote
Btw Doozi I'm really proud of you for actually keeping up with a progressive on task upload schedule.
Merry Christmas indeed
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I'm aiming to stick to a "one-a-week" schedule. :3
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Doesn't hurt that you have a couple pages in reserve just in case that sneaky "procrastination" jumps up eh?
Otherwise, wonderfully well done, yet again.
Can't wait to see the later, more action-y panels. I'm just waiting for the ever-present "Dooz screaming mouth" thing XD
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k i'll even take once a month. >.>
just not a whole year D:
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