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Published: 2003-11-25 05:10:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 138
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A poem written a while ago, but submitted fore the poetry contest on DeviantArt. I hope it's understandable. You really have to read into it to capture that emotion that's in there.. embedded deep in the shallow surface of the poem.[ Full view to see please ]
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a very good poem, but you may be must write this too
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Thanks for leaving a comment, but I'm.. not sure I quite understood that last part.
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This one looks like a winner to me! It is a beautiful poem, i agrees with that other person! You must be very very educated and artistic at the same incredible time. I wouldn't be able to write anything like this for a million years, my vocabulary extensive or not as it is now is of no use if I can't put anything together in the right flow to sum up to the right meanings. I like the last verse, it's my favorite for some reason.
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such a beautiful poem - th eflow the diction - everything is great.
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Thank you!
Originally, I had planned to organize the stanxas in a circle like the directions of the compass, but then it would be difficult to read it in order.
Thanks for the comment!
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