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If you're following this series in order, click here next . For more information on the entire series, read the "'Demon's Due' Defined" journal entry here [link] or the "'Demon's Due' Plus" journal entry here [link] .***********************************************************
Seeing another of the menacing horrors daring to try and secure a rope on her left arm, Valerin surges into action. Rising upward, she grasps the small creature in her hand and prepares to crush his skull with her weapon. The mob of gremlins surges into action as well, darting in around her with small knives that cut straps, and with ropes to secure anything they can get in a noose.
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Here's the revised version of this one: [link]
I'll post the link to these in the original chain of links through Rats later on.
Enjoy!
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Such a great prize she will make if we can subdue her
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I'm so glad to see you reworking these. I love the whole series and I am in awe of your talent.[link]
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i definitely like her facial here in the update... she definitely wants to kick some gremlin ass
but as we know her efforts will be in vain...
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This one isn't as bad as the previous re-revisions, but I get a feeling her face is a bit too bright compared to the rest of the image. It almost looks like it's glowing in the dark.
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You are posting these re-redo's in a completely nonsensical order. You know that, right?
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I don't know...it can go either way.... I'm rootin' for the little guys. heh heh
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By, if those little creatures don't restrain her quikly, tha mace is going to do some serious damage to them....
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Fantastic sneer.
Just a shame they've already got a loop around her mace... otherwise that little guy in her left hand would be in so much trouble.
Then I remembered where these little guys come from and... ewwwwwww!
That said, I do love the rat-rider on the right and industrious chap peeling away the back of her armour... more fantastic imagery!
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She's got a good sneer going there. I'm kind of torn over which version I prefer.
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wait....faved the original set, so if I fave your new set- why don't I just put all your stuff in my faves already dammit!
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Brilliant work...great skill. Is this hand-drawn graphite pencil?
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Very good! 
INTERESTING TRIVIA: This is the exact moment the gremlin just to the right of center was given the nickname He Who Bites Greaves. Gremlin nicknames are a big deal in Gremlin culture, and He Who Bites Greaves is a much better than his previous nickname, He Whose Loincloth Collection All Have Brown Skidmarks Not as Fashion Statements. I should explain that things don't often translate well between the Gremlin and Fantasy-English languages. For example, He Who Bites Greaves, when spoken in Gremlin, sounds like "Gus" in Fantasy-English. Also of trivial interest, He Who Bites Greaves ("Gus"), was one of the few survivors of The Great Feline Massacre and went on to father a mighty clan of Gremlins as Stud Muffin Who Bites Greaves The First.
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loved the originals...and you somehow are improving them!!! wonderful...
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Definitely more feeling in this version than the previous. I'm catching a little more "Ewww!" in the set of her lips and the wrinkle of her nose. I like that she looks grossed-out rather than mad! At first I thought her features looked a little soft for a tough-as-nails warrior babe, but the more I look at it, the more sense it makes in context with the expression. Nicely done once again!
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Yes, the model has a good sneer face that I hope to use with the Albert sequence a little bit.
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