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Adler's Prelude - ForgivenessI know I said Over Protective part 2 was the conclusion, but I got this idea and I think it really redeems Ashien. It takes place a couple of days after the events in the park. I really feel this is a nice touching end to that whole arc. Nice touch for Mother's Day as well.
Here we have Ash reading and Adler happy playing with his blocks.
Ash is looking at what happened, and she blames herself. She is completely heartbroken, but when she's at her lowest she feels this light tap on her cheek. Adler is too young to know what is really going on, but there he is trying to soothe her. She feels like he's forgiven her and that is just what she needed. She goes from completely depressed, and questioning her ability as a mother to overjoyed.
I do regret not doing the comic about Adler's first word before I did this. It would of given me a nice touch to the end. Still I think it works.
I know Ashien's shirt is open. If you read her character sheet I do mention she is a nudist. She doesn't like clothes very much, and she hates tight binding clothes. I just can't draw her nude sitting around the house without giving these pages a mature rating. FYI- That's iced herbal tea in her glass. His sippy-cup is close by with apple juice.
I love Adler in the second panel. He's just built something with his blocks, and he's so proud. The skull on Adler's shirt was inspired by the Becky skull in Pani Poni Dash.
Hardest panel to draw was the seventh panel. It was tricky, because she kept looking more angry then sad. I do love her reaction in the eighth panel. She was in such despair that she didn't notice him walking over.
There is one question that is never answered. "Has that cat landed yet?"
Hope you enjoy and I look forward to your comments.
Ashien, Adler © Kristoffer Remmell
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Comments: 89
psychedashell [2012-01-14 13:37:51 +0000 UTC]
Negima.
I'd be betting that book is wholy responsible for teaching that woman how to handle a young boy. No wonder she hits the extreme notes.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to psychedashell [2013-05-07 04:57:49 +0000 UTC]
She doesn't take any parenting guides from NEGIMA. She's just an out there person who never thought she'd be a mother.
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King-Reaver [2010-09-11 05:51:41 +0000 UTC]
=O....shes....wearing...leg clothing ?!?!?! and negima
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FoxxFireArt In reply to King-Reaver [2010-10-30 14:07:37 +0000 UTC]
Ash isn't really feeling like herself here. She does enjoy Negima!.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to pirostyle [2009-05-22 10:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, Ash is a nudist. I actually should of had her bottomless in this scene, but I can just reason that it's a little too cool for her, and she doesn't really like being cold. So she put on pants that day.
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pirostyle In reply to FoxxFireArt [2009-05-22 21:18:03 +0000 UTC]
even though, no wonder she's a mom
I would kill for a girlfriend like her
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FoxxFireArt In reply to pirostyle [2009-05-22 21:44:24 +0000 UTC]
She's a wild woman, but everything is second to her when it comes to Adler. Only thing she really wants to do is spend time with him and play.
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pirostyle In reply to FoxxFireArt [2009-05-22 22:10:28 +0000 UTC]
man... you can only imagine what it was like for the husband
lucky son of a....
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FoxxFireArt In reply to pirostyle [2009-05-22 22:54:56 +0000 UTC]
Never got married. He died before she even knew she was pregnant.
He was the closet man she ever came to consider marrying. She not really the type to become someone's girlfriend.
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pirostyle In reply to FoxxFireArt [2009-05-23 01:26:03 +0000 UTC]
huh...
OBJECTION!!!
Mr.foxx... you claim that she's not the type to be someone's girlfriend... but there's a contradiction in your statement!!
...or have you forgotten about her child?
[[just kidding, animazement is having a phoenix wright musical this year, it really made us think... ]]
but... why get pregnant if they werent boy/girlfriend?
or were they both just wild sex adicts?
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FoxxFireArt In reply to pirostyle [2009-05-23 06:56:12 +0000 UTC]
OBJECTION!!!
You know you don't need to be married to have children. Adler's father wasn't a sex addict. His mother is. They weren't trying to get pregnant. Adler's father is the first man she really fell in love with that she would get involved with him seriously.
Adler's father just died saving Ashien before either of them knew she was pregnant.
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pirostyle In reply to FoxxFireArt [2009-05-24 09:58:45 +0000 UTC]
ohhh
its hot when the girl is the sex adict
still, its all much hotter when a girl gets pregnant when its in anime...
reallife.. not so much
still, I like it
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FoxxFireArt In reply to pirostyle [2009-05-24 20:02:35 +0000 UTC]
Ash is a sex addict, but she's much more interested in being a mother to her son. All her personal vices take a back seat to his upbringing.
Her past activities will be making for some funny moments when it comes to the time she was picking Adler's name.
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draco713 [2008-09-12 19:58:10 +0000 UTC]
Yes, fear the Tickle Monster...
I used to be terrified of that when I was little! Now if anyone tries that whole Tickle Monster thing (like, a certain little cousin) they usually wish they hadn't.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to draco713 [2008-09-12 21:25:39 +0000 UTC]
He was getting tickled and kissed.
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draco713 In reply to FoxxFireArt [2008-09-12 21:37:52 +0000 UTC]
I figured as much. I just felt like tossing that info out there.
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IndridCold13 [2008-08-21 16:45:39 +0000 UTC]
AAAWW. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
now i cant stop thinking of Nis.
FoxxFireArt In reply to IndridCold13 [2008-08-21 19:51:19 +0000 UTC]
Ash screws up from times, but she really loves her baby.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to hoppopngo [2008-05-12 03:14:45 +0000 UTC]
It's not out for purchase. These are just a short story that is a prelude to the story I'm crafting.
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ToshirotheKnightWolf [2008-05-04 21:03:28 +0000 UTC]
/looking up a tree with a cat at its top/.
I don't think its comin down.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to ToshirotheKnightWolf [2008-05-04 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]
More like possible orbit.
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ToshirotheKnightWolf In reply to FoxxFireArt [2008-05-05 22:07:31 +0000 UTC]
O.o.......remind me not ta piss her off.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to ToshirotheKnightWolf [2008-05-06 00:29:18 +0000 UTC]
Would never be a wise idea.
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ToshirotheKnightWolf In reply to FoxxFireArt [2008-05-06 22:44:00 +0000 UTC]
i'd proibly lose my tail.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to gamegod93 [2008-03-04 18:18:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Always nice to know my art and get an emotional reaction.
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gamegod93 In reply to FoxxFireArt [2008-03-04 21:25:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome and that seems to be a goal for many artists
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evangelian007 [2008-01-19 18:17:19 +0000 UTC]
Hey! This is very good.I really love the Adler baby.Its so cute.And Ashien is really hot.And did you said that she is a nudist?!O_O
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FoxxFireArt In reply to evangelian007 [2008-01-20 18:02:49 +0000 UTC]
Yep, Ashien is a nudist. Even if she wears clothes in the morning she always sleeps in the nude.
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HybridYuki [2007-10-12 01:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh! so cute *swoon* ! i love the tickle monster bit!
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FoxxFireArt In reply to HybridYuki [2007-10-12 04:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. As you can tell Adler liked it as well.
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HybridYuki In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-10-12 04:55:11 +0000 UTC]
yeah you draw little kids so cute too. *envious*
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FoxxFireArt In reply to HybridYuki [2007-10-12 05:48:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I'm pretty new to drawing little children.
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HybridYuki In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-10-12 18:44:39 +0000 UTC]
for someone who is new at it, you sure have talent...no doubt
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FoxxFireArt In reply to Elemental-Magus [2007-08-21 18:07:05 +0000 UTC]
Yep, Ashien likes reading Negima.
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nakopesado2 [2007-08-06 19:17:15 +0000 UTC]
se be que eres bueno criticando tus dibujos pero intenta haserlos mas cortos la mayoria de las personas les bale un pepino si son de 5 renglones y tu los hases de libros
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FoxxFireArt In reply to nakopesado2 [2007-08-06 19:53:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for posting your comments. I only wish I could read it.
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Andarion [2007-06-29 13:32:26 +0000 UTC]
You mean that feral cat ?? 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hmm one little thingy I'd like to brag about. Cause... those tears she has on her cheeks looks more like they were some kind of gel that was fixed to her cheeks.
Oh I really like this one especially the way you were playing with backgrounds. In the fifth panel she seems crushed by what have happened she is simply depressed, not to mention that she looks as if she was feeling extremely guilty for what has happened, in the sixth it's only getting worse making her almost physical ill because of depression and in next one we have that bright yellow background as if the sun was raising bringing joy and happiness to everyone XD Great work.
Well if making her look more sad then angry in seventh panel was tricky then I think you made it, cause she looks really sad and very guilty. That shaking effect perfectly adds to her depressed mood as if her body was shaking in sobs
Yup Addie is a really cute monster (for me every child is a monster :-P)
Nevertheless really cute comic :-]
FoxxFireArt In reply to Andarion [2007-06-29 19:30:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that was something that was never seen. She pretty much punted the cat. Ash is a great fighter, but almost nothing rivals her skills with her legs. Her fighting style uses legs mostly.
Yeah, Ash feels crush as to what she let happen. She put him in that position and he got hurt. The color was to give a feeling of sudden change. She was so upset she didn't even notice Adler walk over.
In retrospect I should of drawn her without pants. She is a nudist and I haven't explored that much.
I think this one came out pretty well.
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Andarion In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-06-29 19:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Ash without pants O_o ?? You are playing with my naughty mind Comrade XD
Yeah I totally agree that it came out well. I really liked it.
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FoxxFireArt In reply to Andarion [2007-06-29 21:10:52 +0000 UTC]
The pantsless would of sold how she is a nudist. It doesn't sell how if she's a nudist home alone she would be dressed too much. Only person there is her infant son.
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DreamStarRei [2007-05-19 08:23:04 +0000 UTC]
You really have a great comic coming, I hope your thinking about publishing
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