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EDIT::: Cleaned the image up a bit. Better?I figured that since Dani, my OC, is being featured in the lovely gallery of fanfiction-dot-art (thanks so much, guys!!! I shall give you a shameless plug! [link] ) as this month’s featured character, I should actually explain who this character is. XD
Am I an idiot for not realizing this sooner? Probably. Well, yes. But that’s not what we’re here to discuss!
And now it’s time for a list of character factoids! (*drum roll, please?!*) I know they’ve been done to death, but I figure it’s the quickest way to introduce her. ^^
Name: Dani
Age: 20
Height/Weight: Short and bony
Hair and Eyes: Brown
Skin Tone: Pale
Story: “Future Talk,” in the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom.
And… that’s it. There’s really not much to Dani by way of appearances since she’s basically a plain, normal looking young woman. She’s got a crooked nose (made so when someone attacked her and broke it) that’s slightly upturned, small lips, and huge eyes that dominate most of her face; she’s been told she looks like a petulant child more than once. She also has hair to rival a lion’s mane, and because it tends to get in her face she pulls it aside in low pigtails approximately 82.74% of the time. And no, I don’t know if that number is actually correct. Let’s just pretend it is.
Most of that stuff, however, people overlook all that in favor of her most outstanding feature, which just happens to be her left leg. Why? From the knee down, you see, it’s deformed—her leg has been that way since birth and there’s not much of a way to fix it other than amputation and a prosthetic. Dani must use a cane to get around since putting much weight on that leg is excruciating.
As you probably guessed, her status as a cripple, when paired with her small stature, delicate appearance, and waifish demeanor, usually garners pity from people who first meet her. “Oh that poor dear with the Bambi eyes,” most think. “She looks like a crippled little porcelain doll! I must carry her up and down stairs because she will surely break if left to fend for herself!”
To that sentiment, Dani typically replies with a growl, possibly a few curse words, and more than a few dirty looks.
Dani hates being babied. SHE HATES IT. She tends to get snappish with people who baby her (I.E.: EVERYONE upon first meeting), and this usually results in people thinking she’s either stuck up, unfriendly, or a bitch (although a surprising percentage of them actually pity her even more, suspecting that’s she’s just jaded and lonely and that she needs even MORE babying to get better, which only makes the situation worse). However, as soon as they back off she becomes happy, companionable, and sweet. She’s intensely loyal to her close friends, though she only has one such friend (named Lauren, but that’s a story for another day).
Dani has many emotional walls, mostly because she has to have thick skin to withstand the well-intentioned but ill-received comments, assistance offers, and pitying looks of passersby. She’s only ever let these walls down to a few people, namely Lauren (and, over the course of Future Talk, Hiei and Koenma). If she talks about her handicap with you, it’s a sign she thinks of you as a friend. However, unless you get to be on the friendship level of someone like Lauren, you’ll never catch Dani totally exposed.
Playing off of that: Dani can be infuriatingly contradictory of herself. One day she’s nice and companionable, and the next she acts like you’ve never been friends, ever. This isn’t because she hates you, but rather because she noticed that her walls had come down, “UH-OH!”, and then she threw them back up as a safety measure. That reaction is the reason why she’s never been in a lasting relationship, and it’s why she’s only ever had one close friend.
Dani, contrary to her own opinion of herself, doesn’t smile much. In fact, she scowls pretty much all of the time (but her scowl is the scowl of a frustrated puppy, so it’s not like it’s menacing at all). Strangely, though, her face has often been called an open book considering her tendency to blush without control when someone she likes talks to her, twitch her lips when she’s knocked off-balance, and open her eyes as wide as they can go when she’s feeling exposed, embarrassed, or hopeful in a scared sort of way (like, say, when someone might be about to kiss her). Even weirder, though, is that she’s a pretty good liar when it comes down to it, and she doesn’t feel too bad about lying, either, because she usually does it to protect someone or the common good.
Basically, Dani’s unaware that she’s more than capable of being a bitch, but still, she means well… most of the time.
Wow, I’m not making her sound like a very nice person, am I? Let me just defend her for a second (as her creator/mother, I don’t think I CAN’T do this) by saying that she’s a real sweetie when you get to the point that she feels she can be honest about herself with you. In “Future Talk,” especially, she has more than a few secrets to keep.
Dani is a driven person who likes setting goals and meeting them. To that end, she can be TOTALLY OBLIVIOUS of others because she’s so 100% focused on her task. This happens in “Future Talk” a lot, when a certain demon starts to like her and she stubbornly refuses to see his actions for what they really stand for…
I also want to mention that Dani isn’t the most reliable of narrators. Sometimes she glosses over the things she doesn’t want to see but NEEDS to see, so if you read her story, try seeing past the things she says to get to the subtext underneath. She also tends to paint her picture of herself a little differently than the one I wrote out here, but… well, who’s more right: her or me? I feel like she writes her own story, to be honest, and that I’m nothing more than a scribe taking it all onto the page.
Anywho, on to more fun stuff. Dani loves music! She’s a composer by nature and she loves singing, playing instruments, and just making music. She can play the guitar (acoustic and electric), the piano, the ukulele, and the harmonica very well, and she has rudimentary knowledge of most stringed instruments (such as violins, cellos, and the banjo, oddly enough). She doesn’t know much about playing wind instruments, though, because she dedicated most of her time to learning how to use her hands effectively. Possibly to make up for her bad feet? I dunno. Music is her one true passion in life, and she thinks about most people and situations in terms of songs. Music plays a huge role is “Future Talk,” mostly because Dani is the narrator and she can’t get away from her musically-wired brain.
Anyway, I can’t say much more without giving away the things that happen in “Future Talk”. I hope you like (or are at least intrigued) by Dani. She grows and changes as the story goes on, too, so yay for character development!
If you’d like to read more about Dani, her story is called “Future Talk” and it can be found here: [link]
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Comments: 43
izhazwingz [2013-03-27 10:59:41 +0000 UTC]
I love this fic, are you going to add more on fanfiction.net???
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Graphospasm In reply to izhazwingz [2013-04-09 18:52:33 +0000 UTC]
I plan on finishing it very soon; I'm finishing up college and am extremely busy at the moment. Hopefully I'll release more chapters soon!
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izhazwingz In reply to Graphospasm [2013-04-10 17:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Sweet, this story is so amazing me and my friends all can't wait. Good luck with your classes!
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Bunny-Link [2012-03-19 16:53:16 +0000 UTC]
How lovely!!!! I am currently reading Future Talk and on Chapter 37 --- extremely addicting!!! I will be heartbroken once I'm finished reading the story. You are such a great writer and artist!!!
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Graphospasm In reply to Bunny-Link [2012-03-19 17:47:46 +0000 UTC]
Well the story isn't over yet, so please don't let your heart break! Dani's story will be continued via cameos in my other stories, too, so even when FT ends we'll still get to see her.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words!
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xXMusic-MuseXx [2011-11-09 08:06:10 +0000 UTC]
This is a cute picture~
...Also, I can't wait for the next chapter... Chapter 77s cliffie? Nearly killed me. Yep.
Your fic had honestly been some of the best writing I've read in published novels or online.
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Graphospasm In reply to xXMusic-MuseXx [2011-11-09 22:27:51 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you! That's super sweet of you to say! I'll be starting the story back up ASAP!
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xXMusic-MuseXx In reply to Graphospasm [2011-11-17 18:52:17 +0000 UTC]
I read the next chapter... You are an eeevil writer Another cliffhanger of your nearly killed me, heh.
After weeks of nagging I've gotten my friend hooked on your fic too now! I now have someone to rave about the fic too
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Graphospasm In reply to xXMusic-MuseXx [2011-11-18 02:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Evil? MOI?
...yeah, I'll admit to that.
And gasp! You recruited someone to the dark side?!?!
(Lol, thanks so much for reading!!! You rock my socks!)
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xXMusic-MuseXx In reply to Graphospasm [2011-11-23 03:32:29 +0000 UTC]
I forgot to send you a link but I drew Dani
Kinda crappy but here~: [link]
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Graphospasm In reply to ThatPokemonFreak [2011-06-18 22:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Just some random Rosearts. I don't have very good markers, I'm afraid. -_-;
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ThatPokemonFreak In reply to Graphospasm [2011-06-18 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]
but you made it look so pro :<<
wish i could color like that!
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Graphospasm In reply to ThatPokemonFreak [2011-06-18 22:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Practice makes perfect, I should think. ^^
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Saiyuki-Rei [2011-06-11 11:15:30 +0000 UTC]
I love this picture, it looks amazing! And Future Talk is too!
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ThatPokemonFreak [2011-01-13 04:24:46 +0000 UTC]
This.
Is.
Beautiful.
I love the blues you used for her clothes; they suit her quiet well! She's very proportional and the clothes were drawn pretty well. I love colored pictures but I suck at coloring and tracing (hence the black and white sketches.)
Great description, too! I'd hate people being all like 'omg are you ok' and 'ill hold that for you cuz its so heavy' over me. Well, I do already. You know, chivalry and stuff. But with her, you just have to be more open and etc so she'll know you aren't like the pitiers. If that's a word.
All in all, she reminds me of a timid wild animal who's freaked out by strangers who try to be nice but actually hurt it and is only kind to the one who understands it.
ANYWAY great pic. ^^
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Graphospasm In reply to ThatPokemonFreak [2011-01-14 04:58:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm not too great at coloring, either, but I've started photocopying my work before coloring it so I don't mess it up completely. ^^ It works pretty well; too bad I didn't figure that method out before destroying a lot of my sketches with well-intentioned marker mayhem! XD
The wild-animal comparison is actually something that's going to get made later on, once Dani and Lauren interact and people observe how they complete each other. And even more of the wild-animal thing is that she only bonds with one (maybe two) people at a time.
Anywho, I'm really glad you like the drawing, and I'm happy the giant description made sense. XD I worked hard on both!
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ThatPokemonFreak In reply to Graphospasm [2011-01-15 02:57:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! What I'm NOT looking forward to are my midterms next week...T_T
And both your writing and drawing are so amazing! ~jealous~
xD
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AofRandD [2011-01-12 20:08:42 +0000 UTC]
*snickering* That was the longest Dani-rant ever...
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Graphospasm In reply to AofRandD [2011-01-12 20:46:30 +0000 UTC]
Hey, had to write it all down SOMEwhere, lol!
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AofRandD In reply to Graphospasm [2011-01-28 04:05:03 +0000 UTC]
Ano...I'm tryin' to do a sketch of Dani. Bare with me please if I mess it up. I was in a dark car with only the street light to help...
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DoilyRox [2011-01-11 18:45:00 +0000 UTC]
Super cute! The expression is so her And her broken nose just gives her something of an "awww" factor
Though, of course, she'd probably hate me for saying that
xD Great job graph!
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Graphospasm In reply to DoilyRox [2011-01-11 21:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, she'd glare and bite your ever lovin' head off. For someone so doll-like-looking, she sure is a mean little bitch. XD I say it with love, of course!
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colbub-etowa-ru [2010-12-27 13:31:01 +0000 UTC]
Mhmm, it has a Dani feel to it. Good job at capturing her... Dani-ness? @_@ Not sure how to say (haha, no foot to see yet again! Maybe try just to draw the foot?)
Really liked it! (how do you add emoticons? So new to this site man...)
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KiGaMin In reply to colbub-etowa-ru [2010-12-28 00:00:22 +0000 UTC]
To add emoticons, you can look at the "emoticons" page, just click on "Emoticons", it shows up when you write a comment, just under the... the ... case? XD And then you copy the "code" . For example, for the "hug" emoticon, write : hug :, without the spaces, like that: ...
Well, glad to have you there~ And thanks for joining the group! =3
I hope my explanation was a bit understandable... XD
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KiGaMin [2010-11-01 12:41:26 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to feature this drawing for the month of November, I think it's very pwetty~
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Graphospasm In reply to KiGaMin [2010-11-01 18:28:05 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks! I'm happy you like it. ^^
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Misuzu-PM [2010-10-26 07:23:48 +0000 UTC]
I can see that you're really improving! This is a great drawing.
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DarlingSM [2010-10-26 05:52:58 +0000 UTC]
Very nice <3 couldn't work up the nerve to draw the club-foot, eh?
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Graphospasm In reply to DarlingSM [2010-10-26 05:55:55 +0000 UTC]
What gave it away--one blocked foot or the kneesocks?
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DarlingSM In reply to Graphospasm [2010-11-20 02:42:16 +0000 UTC]
lol, you should totally try it. I think its that disability is what gives her the most strength.
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MangaPainterLOL [2010-10-26 01:09:48 +0000 UTC]
Blue
I really love the way that you draw your faces!!
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Graphospasm In reply to MangaPainterLOL [2010-10-26 01:12:31 +0000 UTC]
I tried to show her crooked nose (failed), but otherwise I'm pretty happy with it. ^^ Thanks!
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j-d-y-44 [2010-10-25 23:04:41 +0000 UTC]
I love it!!!!!!!!! I think it looks awesome! I love her hair and the way her cane is hooked around her arm!!!!!!!!! It jsut screams something Dani would do to me. Now I'm jsut waiting for a Hiei to come out and try and actually get her to dance or make her sing!!!!!!!!!
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Graphospasm In reply to j-d-y-44 [2010-10-25 23:07:21 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I should draw something between Hiei and Dani next. XD
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j-d-y-44 In reply to Graphospasm [2010-10-25 23:17:34 +0000 UTC]
Yes! I'd be a very happy reviewer/favoritier!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A-C-L [2010-10-25 23:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow! That is really nice. I love the vibrant blues you used. Also, I think the anatomy is good (the proportions look correct). And skirts are a pain to draw, but you did a good job.
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Graphospasm In reply to A-C-L [2010-10-25 23:05:43 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you. I was stressing over it before posting. ^^ I was just realizing that I had never actually drawn a stand-alone pic of Dani and felt I had to do something.
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