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Published: 2011-01-25 07:09:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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So I sat down to write a chapter of "Scratch" (my KuwabaraxOC fic for those who ignored it because it's about Kuwabara the Unloved) and realized that I had NOT written Tora right. Her personality was all wrong, and so I re-planned the entire story from the ground up. I can now safely say that I'm relatively more certain as to what needs to be done to rectify the situation, and now I know why I haven't updated the story in so long--it's because I posted it before the main OC was mature enough in my head to be born.Very soon you'll be seeing a bunch of deleted, re-hashed, and re-posted chapters. Be on the lookout.
Also--this picture illustrates a scene from the revamped Scratch. Not one that happens right away, of course, but still. You'll see. And it's not actually a sexy scene at all. It involves being covered in paint. Schweet...
Also--YAY FOR A LITTLE-DRAWN OC GETTING THE SPOTLIGHT.
Also--she's not sexy, she's animalistic and FREEEEEEE.
Also--last one I promise, but I looked at a bunch of cat pictures and did the whole upper-inner-eyelid-slants-down-dramatically thing to try to make her seem more catlike. I dunno. I tried.
Ahem. I based her pose on a cat's crawl as best I could.
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Comments: 35
Shame that this story is not complete but great picture
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Working on it, I swear!
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Hehehe well i hope so
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I cannot WAIT for that. I like very well composed KuwaxOC fics and there just aren't enough out there - this one so far has been perfect!! I hope to see those updates soon!
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You're so welcome!
I wish I could hug her right now. She seems so...huggable!
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Only if she's in the mood, though! Like a real kitty, she might scratch you if she's not wanting to be petted. ^^
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Well, it makes sense. I'm mostly a dog person, anyway. xD I'll just stick to watching her. ^o^ --Stares--
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I'm allergic to cats. -_-; But I guess since this character can turn into one, we'd never be friends? lol!
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Well, I'd be glad to take her off your hands. --Huggles Tora-- She's a nice kitty.
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MINE! Lol, I love writing her story... though I should probably post another chapter soon... urk! I've neglected her too much!
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Then I shall work more ASAP!
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Yay! Please do. I want more Tora-chan. ^^
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Yay, Tora-chan! Kittyness! Yay! I am so deprived! [sniff] My mo's allergic for real... By the way, I'm yonet-chan
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gosh i really like 'scratch' ! i love tora! i really hope you write more on this story.. i don't know i almost like this one better than future talk.. hmm but its kinda of a close 2nd ...
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I will definitely update Scratch soon! I just need to work out a few kinks before posting new content. I'm really happy to hear you like it!
Also, I popped on over to your gallery because I'm a wee bit of a creeper like that, and you have some gorgeous photographs posted! 
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Does your posting this mean you're feeling better? Yaaay! And that revamp of Scratched sounds pretty awesome, by the way.
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I loved Scratch, I'm glad you decided to continue it.
Kuwabara needs some more love!
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Love the pose! It's nice seeing Tora finally getting some much-needed attention. I've always wished you'd write/draw more for her, so I can say absolutely nothing bad about this picture.
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NEED. UPDATE. FOR. SCRATCH. HBLEEEEEEEH.
Ahem. Anyway.
I love Tora's pose; very good on the anatomy! I would only suggest making her right foot a bit smaller for the whole proportion issue. But I love it :3
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Yay, Tora! Can't wait to see more of/redone Scratch; I absolutely love it. Kuwa doesn't get enough love on FFN, I'm glad to see a fave author of mine appreciate him. I think you got the pose down right: shoulders and hips angled, little half-smirk, not all four appendages just flat on the ground. I can safely say I've seen my cat do this. Very well done.
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I don't have cats, personally, so I google-imaged them and watched a bunch of youtube videos. -_- I felt like a cat stalker! Ha! Aaaaanyway, I'm glad you like SCratch and I'll begin work on the revamped version very soon!
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Oh, and meant to say this too, the stripes are perfect. If I remember correctly, she's a tabby, right?
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She is indeed a tabby! 
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Cool! I can't wait to read more. (ya know, I probably say that to you a lot.)
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Great job! I really like how you drew her. And, believe it or not, I actually like Scratch.
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YAYYYYYYYY! XD I don't like Scratch. Not right now, anyway. It needs MAJOR WORK, YO. But thank you. ^^ Made me very happy.
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You did a great job with her eyes and pose!! I also like the cat mouth. I'm not familiar with the character, but I might read her story when you post the revamped version.
Also, kind of random but did you happen to see an old YYH parody video called, "Teen Guy Squad"? I'm curious because I noticed you put "Kuwabara the Unloved." I'm aware that poor Kuwabara doesn't get much love from the YYH fans, and "Unloved" might be a common title for him, but "Unloved" is something they emphasized in "Teen Guy Squad." However, if you haven't seen it, then it's a video I would recommend. It's an old video from a few years ago, but it's an amusing parody of the guys.
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I haven't seen it, but I tried looking it up on youtube after you mentioned it and the video won't play! Very weird indeed. But yeah, Kuwabara the Unloved seems to fit him, the poor boy.
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Well I like it! It looks like a cat! Here Kitty Kitty Kitty! Here Tora Tora Tora!
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That was my goal and now I am happy. YAY!
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Yay! Well she totally looks cool! YAY! Happy Graph!
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