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Griddles — Four Came Back pt2
Published: 2010-03-24 11:16:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 15147; Favourites: 196; Downloads: 175
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'Breannin looked up at her and to Barasia's surprise, her arm stretched outward at her. Breannin's lower lip trembled as she held her hand palm-out.Barasia shot her laservision at the arm.
She blew it off just below the elbow.
Bell gasped, her hands flying to her mouth. Every blink of her eyes drew tears and splashed them about her face, "She was... just trying to get up.... her arm....!"' '
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Not a happy day for the good guys.
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Bree and Barasia (c) me
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"Please...no more, Barasia, no more fi-GAAAAAAH!"
Love the Barasia's maniacal evil grin, though
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very cool. i'd love to more of your stories as comics
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Ooooh that's going to leave a mark...oh wait.
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Nice job. Sad, but while this is a rather minor detail, I thought Barasia had purple laser vision.
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Actually, I'm trying to make a darker purple (or violet to be exact) but it turns out to be blue. Stupid monitor. XP lol XD
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It didn't produce the right visual glare, so for this it became blue.
There will be some slight differences between the story and this visual.
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Ouch, that's a kill. 
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That's why they call it "gore" my friend.
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