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Griddles — Four Came Back pt5

Published: 2010-05-16 02:16:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 10686; Favourites: 116; Downloads: 84
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Description "Jazzal!" she called, as tears dripped from her eyes to the ground far below, "I... I'm sorry...."

Then an explosion shredded the sky.

The blast caught Jazzal and threw him backwards, slamming back into the ground from which he had took off from. The cloud of fire and light spread through the air as the rumble of the blast, so severe that it set off car alarms a good distance away, slowly died away, thundering into the distance. Nobody moved. Nobody spoke. They just stood there and stared at the impossible as it unfolded.


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A life has ended, all too soon...

Part 4 - [link]
Part 6 - [link]

Art by
Bell by
Gir by Jhonen Vasquez
Jazzal by myself and

Breannin and image owned by me.
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Comments: 31

Invader-Plukki [2012-09-27 14:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Is the girl with the blue hair ( Breannin right? ) your character?

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HachimitsuZero16 [2012-08-18 06:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Breannin nooooooooooooo!! T_T

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Strawberryica [2011-01-16 12:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Poor Breannin...

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DeadlyPrincess988 [2010-11-14 04:03:38 +0000 UTC]

Barasia!! I'm going to starnglr her!!! (if i'm a gynoid like her but 4x stronger!!)

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black-heart86 [2010-07-22 15:13:31 +0000 UTC]

who created barasia and breanin?

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Griddles In reply to black-heart86 [2010-07-22 22:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Me.

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black-heart86 In reply to Griddles [2010-07-23 12:49:47 +0000 UTC]

no, they're robots, right?
who criate them?

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KingGekko [2010-06-29 03:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Adds new meaning to 'Loli pop'.



*Awkward silence*

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PillowsnTofu [2010-06-07 00:59:07 +0000 UTC]

wow... thats...

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XxBambigirl22xX [2010-06-02 23:19:15 +0000 UTC]

I am sad!
Poor Bree

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YinReneeMoonveilYang [2010-05-23 19:56:29 +0000 UTC]

poor bree

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Demon-Lord-Maxine [2010-05-18 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Damn. Sucks to die like that.

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ricksteady [2010-05-18 02:34:48 +0000 UTC]

is a pity it was so beautiful ...

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Uubuo1997 [2010-05-17 17:24:07 +0000 UTC]

what did they fight about anyway?

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AngriestAngryArtist In reply to Uubuo1997 [2010-05-18 05:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Fried chicken...Colonel's recipe is good shit.

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Uubuo1997 In reply to AngriestAngryArtist [2010-05-18 21:31:33 +0000 UTC]

i understand, but one thing i sill didn't understand, WHO THE HELL WILL FIGHT OVER FRIED CHICKEN!?.....even if the recipe is good?

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Griddles In reply to Uubuo1997 [2010-05-18 00:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Ideals.

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J-Dude [2010-05-17 08:25:07 +0000 UTC]

It looks like Bell only JUST stood up off that bench...Wow, nice of you to clue in there. Is it some kind of running satirical joke about how NOBODY stepped up to do a damn thing to help here before this point? First thing we see, Bell is chilling at the picnic while Bree and Barasia are having a fist fight.

I have to wonder if J8D is having a laugh at everyone else' expense. Otherwise, he apparently has no concept of properly adapting written material.

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TheonknownKLAW [2010-05-16 18:17:26 +0000 UTC]

rain of fire, and robotic girl parts...

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Axel16 [2010-05-16 13:04:50 +0000 UTC]

It's raining sunshine, It's raining sunshine!
Axel 16
I feel sad now.

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KlalaskaXD [2010-05-16 08:00:13 +0000 UTC]

oƂƂ D;

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BB-K [2010-05-16 06:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Girl self-destructed. Unit lost!

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AngriestAngryArtist [2010-05-16 04:27:24 +0000 UTC]

someone wants that fried chicken badly.

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Bio-Nova [2010-05-16 03:16:10 +0000 UTC]

FIREWORKS!!!

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electronic-musix [2010-05-16 03:07:37 +0000 UTC]

nooo i loved her!

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ForbiddenLoveForever [2010-05-16 03:00:15 +0000 UTC]

*starts to sob into sleeve*

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BlazingBarrager [2010-05-16 02:38:29 +0000 UTC]

The hardest part of life only becomes more painful and gruesome whenever someone else ends it.

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Chamaguchi [2010-05-16 02:30:29 +0000 UTC]

TT^TT BREEEEEEEEEEE~ *dies*

I remembering silently crying when I read that chapter. u.u ;

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arcon3 [2010-05-16 02:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Such a tragic end.

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derickramzess [2010-05-16 02:20:55 +0000 UTC]

2nd NOOOOUUUUWWW!!!!!! D:

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StarValerian [2010-05-16 02:16:47 +0000 UTC]

:<

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