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Griddles — Four Came Back pt2
Published: 2010-03-24 11:16:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 15147; Favourites: 196; Downloads: 175
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'Breannin looked up at her and to Barasia's surprise, her arm stretched outward at her. Breannin's lower lip trembled as she held her hand palm-out.Barasia shot her laservision at the arm.
She blew it off just below the elbow.
Bell gasped, her hands flying to her mouth. Every blink of her eyes drew tears and splashed them about her face, "She was... just trying to get up.... her arm....!"' '
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Not a happy day for the good guys.
Part 1 - [link]
Part 3 - [link]
Bree and Barasia (c) me
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Comments: 64
poor little blue bird,ur friend has skillz
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Whew!! It's just a machine... Still.. IT"S WORST!!
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So is barasia the bad guy? I was thinking that bell was the bad guy at first but looking at this comic has given me second thought. I am sorry bell ,forgive me.
BTW Love the comic.
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Too annoying was she?
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I think you'll find a lot of people actually liked Bree a fair bit.
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I know, I meant the other characters in the story.
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How do you get that cool shiny effect with the laser? It looks awesome
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question, wasn't it supposed to be below the elbow? the arm should be cut in half, not almost destroyed leaving a hand, oh forget it, at least in the video it will be accurate, i never tough i'll say this but only the chapter where breannin dies is good enough for a 30 min ep.
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There will be some slight differences between the text and the pics.
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whatever grid, your friend is in charge of the pics, i'm in charge of the video, and i found some nice voices for all the chars, uh, i think i haven't got your name yet... i only know you by nick, well i know bleedman is Vinz(and i got that one after seeing a gif), but i dunno what's yours and Seiryuga... kinda bad informed...i am...i think doing things for complete strangers its my way of life, if you find it hard to tell me, its ok, maybe you can tell me on youtube via PM after the video is up, or not at all, after all i'm a complete stranger to you as well and i'm not your friend either, well then, c ya, i have to keep working on the video a bit more... the battle still needs some adjustments and i promised j-dude that he's going to be in the ending...
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poor breannin...but i LOVE barasia, love her expression :3
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Barasia looks.... weird in the last panel. Must be the lighting from her laservision.
Also, I thought her lasers were black, just like nearly every energy-based attack she uses.
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Just when I thought I had repressed that memory, you bring it up again.
*sob*
Griddles you bastard! *runs away like a little girl*
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Dawww... *pats you on the back*
Part 3 won't be any less difficult...
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Drifting salt in my wound are we!?
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Hey I remember that part! Barasia is so cruel. :/
But this is a good illustration for the picture,poor breannin...
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Funny yet epic how the first panel looks like it actually came from an anime. 
I remember actually crying at this part . . . I despised Barasia for a while afterwards. ;;__;;
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But ya can't hate her forever
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nooooooooooooooooooooo anyway is awesome
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OH HELL YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!111!!!!
I'm just carried away.
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I didn't know she's an android
I should probably read the stories to get up-to-date
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Too bad I don't have the time
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You might want to tag it for gore. Mild gore- maybe not.
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well, I'm thinking to add some blood for the next scene...
... a greasy blood that is. lol XD
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Ah, ah, good. Nothing like more battle blood for a scene. I just stumbled and thought I mention it. ^_^
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Doesn't gore imply blood and guts? I don't think this is the same...
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As her hand is being served and clearly visible, that's classified as gore despite the lack of blood and guts, This is just mild though, I figured I'd tip my hat for a tag. It might not need it, but this would follow under extreme violence, and since a body part was blasted off: gore.
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Tag it robo-guro and call it a day.
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