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Bell didn't care anymore. She didn't care who was watching, she didn't care about the others, she didn't even care about herself. A deep void had opened inside her and swallowed every last ounce of feeling from her. She cried for Breannin. She cried for Jazzal. She cried for their torn and terminated relationship. And she cried for Barasia, and the hurt she had caused, and the lack of hope for her. "Breannin.." was all she said. She repeated the name, over and over, softly to herself."Oh, come on Bell," she said, her voice suddenly so sweet and innocent. "Don't cry. It's not the end of the world if you don't stop me." she paused a moment, grinning, "Oh wait, yes it is!" her giggle turned into a laugh, her laugh into a cackle, and her cackle into an echo as a column of light consumed her body and whisked it away.
Bell wasn't sure exactly when she stopped crying. She doubted that she ever did.
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And that's a wrap!
Thanks sooooo much to for these illustrations! You did great buddy!
Yes, for the diehard ones, there are some differences between this and Chapter 23. However, like any book-to-movie adaptation, there's always some changes and cutdowns. I am real happy with the final result, so there!
Hope you enjoyed! If you're new to my stuff and wonder what all this is about, go read my stories!!
Part 5 - [link]
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Comments: 68
watcher25 [2014-01-12 02:06:33 +0000 UTC]
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Ok, I would be, and am, ROYALLY pi33ed...
There is definitely hell to pay and with much, MUCH, interest
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Griddles In reply to ETheHedgehog [2011-03-05 07:30:34 +0000 UTC]
Yes, they're a family of them.
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omgomglolol [2011-01-03 21:32:53 +0000 UTC]
nooo why?!?! will some one built her and shell come back to life?!?!
anyways very well done!!
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Tigerheartless In reply to Griddles [2010-12-24 08:58:22 +0000 UTC]
dang it i wanted to see if bell tryed to kick her butt or doing that
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Strawberryica [2010-11-22 14:39:07 +0000 UTC]
Poor Breaninn...she died and is Barasia's FAULT if all suffer.But...Barasia is very cute i can't be upset on her...
Hey but Bell doesn't revenge on Barasia?
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Griddles In reply to Strawberryica [2010-11-22 21:13:32 +0000 UTC]
You should read the story.
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DeadlyPrincess988 [2010-11-14 04:07:35 +0000 UTC]
Griddles.. Please please please please Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease make some more stories like this?!!!!
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Griddles In reply to DeadlyPrincess988 [2010-11-14 05:41:10 +0000 UTC]
I'll definitely try to!
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BloodyCherryBerry [2010-09-26 18:02:22 +0000 UTC]
oooh i luv barasia! :3
awesome little comic!
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Youtomia [2010-08-16 11:40:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Those tear droplets are incredible! O_O
They look extremely realistic. O:
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NickMaster64 [2010-06-11 03:18:06 +0000 UTC]
and i bet this is the part where bell snaps and starts beating the heck out of barasia saying MURDERER over and over
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Griddles In reply to NickMaster64 [2010-06-11 03:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Nah. As you can see, Barasia got away.
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rockingthevote [2010-06-11 01:04:04 +0000 UTC]
lol Breannin is in love with a blue thing..........lol
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DizzyOfRedSpiral [2010-06-07 23:25:38 +0000 UTC]
everyone dies in yur stories!!!
are they just expendable or whaaat!?
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BB-K [2010-06-07 11:27:50 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like revenge is now or never. But begins with a little fanservice.
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TheonknownKLAW [2010-06-07 08:47:13 +0000 UTC]
i remember reading the chapter, but the comic adaptation is a slight bit more interesting.
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xMunjax [2010-06-07 06:39:45 +0000 UTC]
daww...poor bree..she was my fav character and now she's gone
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MexKappa [2010-06-07 00:10:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm impressed by how the tears look. And now for something completely different:
I see London, I see France...
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MexKappa In reply to Griddles [2010-06-07 03:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Now that you mention it, it seems to me she looks different than in the first part. Older, I think. AWSM Barasia's pose and face for doing that.
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Fluffypuppy77 [2010-06-07 00:05:08 +0000 UTC]
00
oooo theres a story with Belle!!
was there more far before this??...these 6?
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GypsyJadu24 [2010-06-06 21:34:05 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, those tears...very nice effect. They look like they actually fell onto the page.
And Barasia's smirk...ooh, how I hate that smirk! >8(
But still, nicely done. Great work!
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ricksteady [2010-06-06 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]
pobre Breannin....esa Barasia es mala...pero me encanta su actitud
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J-Dude [2010-06-06 21:08:49 +0000 UTC]
This was at least more accurate. Only took six tries to get the mood right...
Although I still heavily posit my disagreement that this needed to exist in comic form at all...
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Griddles In reply to J-Dude [2010-06-06 21:24:48 +0000 UTC]
There'll be other versions, I'm sure...
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