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Griddles — Four Came Back pt4

Published: 2010-04-22 11:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 11149; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 100
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Description 'She bent in to the girl, knowing that she would not hear the words she was about to say. But she caught a glimpse of a fleck of gold within her dress. Reaching it with her other hand, she pulled it out. It was a tiny golden heart, suspended on a chain. With a hint of curiosity, she flicked it open. She took a glance at the picture inside, a grin coming to her face. She closed it again, and stuffed it back into Breannin's dress. She bent in further, her lips beside the unconscious gynoid's ear. With a whisper, she told her, "You know.... I think he'll miss you....". Then, without so much as a giggle, she turned around and, using the arm buried in her stomach, hurled the girl into the sky, her hand ripping out of her stomach as she did.


Nobody else would be able to hear it except her. It was high-pitched, a soft beeping slowly growing faster. Breannin recognised the sound, and it sent a chill down her spine. But then a new revelation came to her: the sound came from within her...'


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Two more of these to go.


More from . Ain't he great? Pic, story and characters by me!

Part 3 - [link]
Part 5 - [link]

My net is over its limit so I'll upload a larger version when it clicks over.
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Comments: 33

HachimitsuZero16 [2012-08-18 06:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Barasia is a monster!!! Poor breannin!!

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Strawberryica [2011-01-16 12:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Breannin is hurt.She's gonna die.This picture looks very cool.

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XxBambigirl22xX [2010-06-02 23:16:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to look at the story
cause I don't understand.
Poor Bre *goes and sobs in the corner!*

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Demon-Lord-Maxine [2010-05-05 03:55:46 +0000 UTC]

*gasp*

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KlalaskaXD [2010-05-02 09:16:05 +0000 UTC]

błłłłłeeee poor Breannin T__T
p.s
GO , BARASIA, GO !! *_______*

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BloodyCherryBerry [2010-04-28 14:48:40 +0000 UTC]

so cool

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AOdinn [2010-04-28 00:29:19 +0000 UTC]

That scene *sob*

*sob*

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liplop-fire [2010-04-27 15:36:56 +0000 UTC]

poor breannin ...........

death barasia .... not breaninn

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Axel16 [2010-04-24 19:09:28 +0000 UTC]

The only thing worse than dieing is knowing you will die in 3 seconds.
Axel 16
"I do not like Blood Lord."

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Griddles In reply to Axel16 [2010-04-24 22:12:18 +0000 UTC]

LOL What did Blood Lord do to you?

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Axel16 In reply to Griddles [2010-04-24 22:46:53 +0000 UTC]

I have nothing to say.
Axel 16
"I am a Super Llama! WOOT!"

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TheonknownKLAW [2010-04-23 10:13:40 +0000 UTC]

now thats just mean. hehe.

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amorsatanico [2010-04-23 02:52:44 +0000 UTC]

entonces aun le va a ir poer?

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Griddles In reply to amorsatanico [2010-04-23 02:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Maybe...

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Sola-san [2010-04-23 01:37:22 +0000 UTC]

PWEND! >

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Eldos [2010-04-23 00:22:49 +0000 UTC]

O_o awesome..although..I have no idea whats going on XD But the artwork looks awesome.

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Ninja46464 [2010-04-22 21:50:43 +0000 UTC]

love hurt

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RolandTemplar [2010-04-22 19:57:07 +0000 UTC]

ohh, good

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BlazingBarrager [2010-04-22 14:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, isn't this the part where Bree explodes or something?

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Griddles In reply to BlazingBarrager [2010-04-22 14:25:20 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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BlazingBarrager In reply to Griddles [2010-04-22 14:33:36 +0000 UTC]

What?

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KyonSylar [2010-04-22 14:13:38 +0000 UTC]

That's going to hurt >:3 Cool art, and story,I want to read the others

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Griddles In reply to KyonSylar [2010-04-22 14:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Please do!

And join my club!

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GodessOfFire [2010-04-22 13:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Saying COLD HEARTED things,throwing your sister in the sky...Thats what I call "LOVE"

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Griddles In reply to GodessOfFire [2010-04-22 13:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah... real family values!

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destinythehedcris18 [2010-04-22 13:07:48 +0000 UTC]

wooow amo tu arte x3

o3o

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Axel16 [2010-04-22 11:26:59 +0000 UTC]

"The train to Unhappy endings will leave in 3.. 2... 1...
Boom!"
Axel 16
Elves have the magic power to summon 7up from the fridge.

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arcon3 [2010-04-22 11:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Good job.

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Polkadot-Creeper [2010-04-22 11:22:42 +0000 UTC]

finally! i've been waiting for this page

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BB-K [2010-04-22 11:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Ouch, now that's gotta hurt.

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BlazingBarrager In reply to BB-K [2010-04-22 14:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately, gynoids don't feel pain...I think. Can't remember.

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J-Dude In reply to BlazingBarrager [2010-04-22 21:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes they do...

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BlazingBarrager In reply to J-Dude [2010-04-23 19:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay. It's been so long since I've read that part of Griddles' fic.

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