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Published: 2012-09-02 17:43:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 52159; Favourites: 771; Downloads: 995
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Part 1: [link]Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Bonus comic! - [link]
Part 7: [link]
Part 8: [link]
Extra! - [link]
Part 9: [link]
Part 10 (END): (Here!)
I was originally planning more detail for this one, but it's taken so long already that it's going to be anti-climactic either way I'm sure we can agree that (given all the delays) it's nice it's completed.
Not sure at this point if I'll do Chrysalis' encounter too, but this is the end of this story arc.
A big thanks to all who've favourited and commented, it really helped with getting it all done!
I hope you've enjoyed the story!
Heart-shaped ring box based on one from here: [link]
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Comments: 472
tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 14:54:13 +0000 UTC]
That whiole comic was awesome I loved it and I also loved the extra about the crystal empire (Season 3 nudge) well done it is a shame it is over
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HareTrinity In reply to tigreanpony [2012-10-06 15:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
And season 3's confirmed for more Cadence, so there's a good chance I'll do more comics on her in the future!
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OleGrayMane In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 12:49:13 +0000 UTC]
You have don the impossible: I actually like these two now.
The (back) story developed here exceeds that of the show and I really enjoyed it.
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HareTrinity In reply to OleGrayMane [2012-10-06 14:42:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And what's a fanon for if not sharing character enthusiasm? I was hoping the comics would win some people over and I'm glad to know it succeeded in at least one case!
I'm hoping S3 builds on Shining/Cadence too; after all, their sudden introduction understandably rubbed many people the wrong way!
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nhsnork In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 11:40:03 +0000 UTC]
A totally heartwarming comic. Thanks for drawing it!
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HareTrinity In reply to nhsnork [2012-10-06 14:42:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading it! The comments make all the effort worth it!
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schneelocke In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 10:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, yes! That's so sweet.
Great comic!
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HareTrinity In reply to schneelocke [2012-10-06 14:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! All these nice comments really make the time/effort worth it!
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andersRaHu In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 10:06:10 +0000 UTC]
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
Oh, and listened to Love is in Bloom while reading, It fitted so good!!!
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HareTrinity In reply to andersRaHu [2012-10-06 14:51:46 +0000 UTC]
I listened to that song a bunch whilst getting the last two comics finished!
Glad you enjoyed the comic, thank you for commenting!
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riordian2 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 09:05:32 +0000 UTC]
Well, the whole story is really cute. I particularly liked whole language barier with Cadence, very imaginative. Still, that panel when Celestia talks to Shinig is not very clear, I had to read the description to get the purpouse of that panel, but that may as well be that I'm dumb Get it colored and it will make my way to top 10 long comics of mlp that I read so far. Good luck and great job
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HareTrinity In reply to riordian2 [2012-10-06 14:51:04 +0000 UTC]
It was just a related doodle, really, though maybe I did leave it a little too cryptic... Ah well!
Colouring these isn't on my list of priorities at the moment but given their popularity it's certainly a possibility.
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DemonicWolfGirl1 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 08:46:30 +0000 UTC]
I don't want to ask this but...when they look down in panel 5
What are they looking down at?
Is it the ring's?
Because most people would hide something behind their back.
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HareTrinity In reply to DemonicWolfGirl1 [2012-10-06 14:48:04 +0000 UTC]
They were just about to present their rings and paused because they spotted each other's.
I could have made that clearer but I wanted them hidden until the last panel.
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DemonicWolfGirl1 In reply to HareTrinity [2012-10-06 15:03:39 +0000 UTC]
I know but they couldn't just hide it behind their backs?
Can ponies stretch that far? *thinks deeply*
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fuzzyhead12 In reply to DemonicWolfGirl1 [2012-10-06 10:08:06 +0000 UTC]
well i think we all known the answer, looking down, next pannel naughty look=Banana!
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DemonicWolfGirl1 In reply to fuzzyhead12 [2012-10-06 11:49:40 +0000 UTC]
0-0
Ah mental image!
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fuzzyhead12 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 08:29:06 +0000 UTC]
you sir have a great storry *aplousing like a gentleman* well done!
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Nevel7 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 07:35:23 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic story. i loved reading it Great work
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HareTrinity In reply to Nevel7 [2012-10-06 14:54:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! It was a pain to get it all finished but all these nice comments make it worth it!
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HareTrinity In reply to ShyGaladriel [2012-10-06 14:54:29 +0000 UTC]
Everyone loves Chrysalis.
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ShyGaladriel In reply to HareTrinity [2012-10-06 15:23:43 +0000 UTC]
She certainly is a character full of potential!
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Ophiel004 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 06:58:55 +0000 UTC]
It's sad to know that Chrysalis trapped her for some time
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HareTrinity In reply to Ophiel004 [2012-10-06 14:56:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... Ah well, it all worked out in the end.
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OliverLacota In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 06:55:19 +0000 UTC]
That explains why their rings looked rather different in the cartoon XD Very well-done, the arc you chose for this was quite believable! Well-deserved on EqD.
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HareTrinity In reply to OliverLacota [2012-10-06 15:01:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad so many people find it credible!
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fotland42 [2012-10-06 06:51:27 +0000 UTC]
I almost didn't check that you had gotten the rings right. I don't know what came over me.
I see that you did get them right, by the way. I just have no faith in other people to get details right.
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HareTrinity In reply to fotland42 [2012-10-06 14:58:43 +0000 UTC]
Ha! I may be terrible at things like foreign languages but I do like to get details right!
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timgil In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 06:28:15 +0000 UTC]
I love how their magic complements each others, with hers being blue, ans his fuchsia.
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HareTrinity In reply to timgil [2012-10-06 15:00:56 +0000 UTC]
Since S2 a pony's magic colour corresponds to their cutie marks, which certainly worked out very nicely with Shining and Cadence.
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Dogman15 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 05:46:25 +0000 UTC]
I do sometimes wonder exactly how Chrysalis replaced Cadence. Are there any fan fictions that cover that specific topic?
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HareTrinity In reply to Dogman15 [2012-10-06 15:07:07 +0000 UTC]
I assume they're out there, though I haven't seen any...
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cajobif In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 05:27:41 +0000 UTC]
You did a wonderful work on this comic.
I enjoyed the story. Thank you to have made it.
Congrats for the EQD feature. You earned it.
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HareTrinity In reply to cajobif [2012-10-06 15:08:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Mindrop In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 04:29:55 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed this! It was artfully done, and quite cannon! Thank you for the entertainment!
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HareTrinity In reply to Mindrop [2012-10-06 15:08:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad so many people found it credible, I was hoping they would!
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uncommentator In reply to Mindrop [2012-10-06 05:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Canon: Something involving the plot of a story/show.
Cannon: An explosive weapon classicly used by pirates... and Pinkie Pie.
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SurfPenguin In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 04:23:47 +0000 UTC]
There are few things in life better than a happy ending!
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BWOSandman In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 03:24:13 +0000 UTC]
That was pretty cute. This is now my headcanon for the most part.
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HareTrinity In reply to BWOSandman [2012-10-06 15:10:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you found it believable!
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Peasful8 In reply to ??? [2012-10-06 03:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Ca....can you do that? Can a woman propose to a man?
My eyes, they have OPENED! So many possibilities! Then...that means...
I CAN FLY!
.....or not.
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HareTrinity In reply to Peasful8 [2012-10-06 15:11:17 +0000 UTC]
Heehee
Though I believe Equestria's a matriarchy, so the real question is: Can a mere captain propose to a princess?
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