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hirurux — Blade Angel 1.0 by-nc-nd

Published: 2011-10-28 02:15:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1317; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 144
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Description A work in progress of my second professional portfolio piece. Its a one-winged battle cyborg-girl. :/
Feedback is greatly appreciated!

Painted in photoshop cs5
art belongs to me
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Comments: 17

LycanFangs1941 [2011-10-29 06:19:55 +0000 UTC]

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I have a few things to say about this piece. A few crits. I think her thigh needs to be wider, regardless of how thin you decide to keep the mechanical parts of her legs, also perhaps narrow her waist and/or widen her hips. Her hips I think are too norrow for the width of her shoulders, and her thigh is entirely too thin. But the mechanical bits look amazing. All I would suggest is some thin stark white highlights. The attention you've put into all the details is really impressive, though I don't lnow how I feel about the black shading for the skin. Good work overall!

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Orsonfoe [2011-10-28 02:52:23 +0000 UTC]

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I feel you did well with the shading. You broke away from you usual style of shading that would make things seem to be plastic. The sharp dark metal shadows to the smooth gradient of the skin.. Some of the design for your machines in my opinion are unique(chainsaw) all through some like the legs I question how there function. They seem to small to be able to support her, also She seem to to have her right side to be very heavy. The wing and Gun/cannon are good at drawing the eye from the top right to the bottom left but question their function to the character herself.

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Ray-Zarra [2011-11-01 05:43:23 +0000 UTC]

so this is Finally done I remember when you were still doing the saw blade

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hirurux In reply to Ray-Zarra [2011-11-01 06:43:09 +0000 UTC]

haha oh yeah!

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LightFang007 [2011-10-31 15:01:37 +0000 UTC]

OH WOW!

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unun357 [2011-10-29 17:29:10 +0000 UTC]

you know, i have always love that smooth, rounded style of yours. and this pic is no exception. i love it! great job!

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hirurux In reply to unun357 [2011-10-29 20:29:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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unun357 In reply to hirurux [2011-10-31 03:04:49 +0000 UTC]

no prob man! i love it!

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ckorsgren [2011-10-29 16:29:36 +0000 UTC]

If I were a critique, I would be confounded what to say. So I am neutral at these type of things.
XD all I can say it is very good work and looks time consuming. It is though a mysterious creation.

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LycanFangs1941 [2011-10-29 06:12:53 +0000 UTC]

I remember when you asked me to draw this character. Lol answer is still "Fucknoooooooo~" unless I could simplify her ultra

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hirurux In reply to LycanFangs1941 [2011-10-29 07:00:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL cmonnn

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LycanFangs1941 In reply to hirurux [2011-10-29 07:25:30 +0000 UTC]

Fucknooooooooo~ If you like. Commissioned me. I'd totally do it. WIllingly. But you'd have to be willing to pay for the time and effort that would go into THAT much detail.

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Kulcheck [2011-10-28 10:45:08 +0000 UTC]

remind me not to piss her off.... an chya, leg's a bit too thin.

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FeralCanine [2011-10-28 04:03:30 +0000 UTC]

this blew my mind.......(in a good way)
I dont know if I should feel sorry for her or amazed by the amount of tech crammed onto her

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spacezillazon [2011-10-28 02:47:50 +0000 UTC]

good details,colors

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PokaX [2011-10-28 02:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

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Snowfyre [2011-10-28 02:21:01 +0000 UTC]

very cool work with the colours. like this new style.
only thing? leg bit too thin...

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