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Description Okay now. I'd like to try something if any of you would be willing; I'd like you to try and tell me what you think the back story is behind the picture.....like, what you think is going on.....it doesn't have to be long or anything....I'll give you mine to start off:

My idea is that of corruption; this picture shows Spock and Kirk as angels. Kirk has already fallen (hence the black wings....) and has been for longer than he remembers. He and Spock meet and they become friends, but Kirk begins to rub off on Spock and he starts to loose his innocence and wants to be with Kirk and be able to explore.....he asks permission to leave, but is punished....for leaving heaven isn't something that people ASK to do. He is injured and dazed so falls. The reason Kirk is crying is because he's worried (obviously) but also that he feels guilty...

Luckily in my version Kirk catches Spock before he goes SPLAT upon the floor.

……I’m so obsessed with Kirk and Spock right now….tis silly really coz I’d have no motivation to do anything like this with my own characters. Fufufufufufu~

OTHER AWESOME IDEAS OF AWESOME:

~Spock has been really hurt (phsically and emotionally) and is in the Vulcan version of a coma. Kirk initiates a mind meld with Spock and Kirk finds that in his mind Spock is just falling, falling, falling, so kirk flies down after him and tries to stop him falling but when he reaches him he realises that now Spock is dragging him down and he is falling too and he doesn't know how to stop....

~ Kirk asks Spock to save him from corruption- surely someone as pure and strong as him should easily be able to save just one dark angel. However, there is somehow a mix up and Spock's weak side is shown- making Kirk realise that he's not as indistructable as he pretends to be and that it's quite possibly Spock that needs saving not him.......

~ The angel wings are metaphoric; the black is because Kirk's not as pure as Spock... He admits everything to Spock; including the fact he loves him, which is tinting his wings more than anything (guilt and fear) and Spock just takes his hand, and tells him everything through his mind.....but Spocks not sure if he could deal with a relationship with someone who purposely brings out his emotional side so much.....

~ Their ship has been destroyed and they're dying - but they're dying together...

~ Spock and Kurt are angels, and obviously, angels go to heaven. Spock sinned and is going to down to hell. Kirk thinks "If he's going, I'm going with him," so they're both going to hell. Spock is bleeding because he got in a fight and Kirk is crying because he doesn't want Spock to go.

~ Kirk had been a rebellious angel in the need of exploration, and as he disobeyed God, he'd been cast away. Jim Kirk has been wandering through limbo, earth, space, and hell for years upon years now, alone. That is, until he meets Spock. This angel has been an obedient and loyal servant of the heavens for many a generation. As he meets the fallen angel, new feelings develop. The both of them meet often, now, until the two of them realize what the feelings were. Love. When the Lord discovers such, He becomes outraged. Love between two of the male gender is forbidden and looked down upon with great ferocity. Spock logically defends his feelings to no avail, and is struck down from the Heavens mercilessly. Kirk sees him falling, crying out in horror at the injuries of his lover. He does not know how to save him, nor if he can.
End- Happy: Kirk begins to panic, seeing the end coming near for Spock. He takes a deep breath, hugging his love close, and flaps his wings hard, grunting at the weight of the both of them. Slowly, he lets them fall back to the ground (wherever the hell that is.) Jim tends to Spock's wounds, finding that the other's pure wings were completely gone now, replaced with small, bare black ones. He frowns in guilt and as Spock awakens, they live in eternity with only each other, wandering the plains of existence.
Angsty: the already fallen angel is stricken with terror and worry. What was he to do? They were heading towards death quickly and surely. He knew his strength was not great enough to save them both, but he knew he could not live without Spock. And so, he brings them closer, kissing gently onto Spock's lips as they spiral down to darkness, with only each other.

~ they're on the ship when like any other episode something strange happens or comes aboard. Somehow they end up in some sort of virutal reality/coma situation (whether they know it or not) with some sort of alternate situation. While time barely passes on the ship, in their "world" time goes by. In their alternate world something epic happens that may or may not be related to what happens on the Enterprise, but it ends up with something like Spock is dying (Or Kikr thinks he's dying) and so on.

~Angels all have their emotions controlled, in order to resist the sins that go along with it. That is why Kirk left being an angel, Spock began to see the good in emotion, and for his punishment he was robbed of his emotions.

~Jim has just told Spock of his feelings when the ship's attacked. Much like his father did, Jim sends everyone off the ship on shuttles. But he, as a good Captain, goes down with the ship. A couple of years later rumors are going around in Hell (where Jim ended up in) that the Enterprise's captain has just died. Jim knows that Spock would have been Captain and that he's forbidden from going up to Heaven. He has a friend who got in for practicing magic to change his appearance. Once he's unreconisable he 'dies' and goes up to Heaven. Since no one has ever tried before nobody suspects anything. When he sees Spock he loses his concentration and everyone can see that he doesn't belong. When the Lord finds out he banishes Spock as well for loving Jim. Jim panics when they're falling because Fallen Angel's wings never work unless they're intentions are pure, but he tries anyway. They come back to the real world and hang out with the crew as ghosts until one day Jim masters the art of becoming real for periods of time, which he uses to be part of the crew again.

~ The wings can be seen as both metaphoric and real (so they would actually be angels). Kirk's are black because he has done a great sin by falling in love with Spock, therefore he had to be punished, was banned (from wherever) and not a real but an angel of a sin. With Kirk gone, Spock realized just how much his Captain meant to him and that he was, as well, in love with Kirk. Just as his love, the decision to punish and ban Spock was made and now he's on the verge of becoming an angel of a sin, the only thing keeping him from falling into this black pool of sin is Kirk, who has endured the pain of being an angel of a sin and can not let the same happen to his beloved Spock.


MOAR THANKYOUPLEASE.
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Comments: 144

jazzledoodle In reply to ??? [2010-01-06 19:55:42 +0000 UTC]

There there, there there. I know. I know.

*Cringe* Twas awful indeed.

......O_o Have you ever heard a real Scottish person? Coz whatever accent Scotty in TOS had it wasn't one. XD
Tis funneh.

Even Spock shouldn't have facial hair. Firstly because I just generally don't like it and secondly because it symbolises EVIIIIIIIIIIL.

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-07 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]

YusIhave. x3 I'm pretty sure his is a different dialect.
If not then, well, I still love whatever the hell accent he used.

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-08 16:13:55 +0000 UTC]

You just love bad Scottish accents. That's ok, I'm not one to judge.

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-08 19:08:32 +0000 UTC]

xD
Or, y'know, not.
James McAvoy and Gerard Butler's accents are beautiful.
And they're real accents.

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-08 23:08:02 +0000 UTC]

I would agree, however, have no idea who those people are and so cannot.

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-09 01:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Gerard Butler is the guy from 300.
James McAvoy is from Atonement and Wanted.
Lovely, lovely men. ;D

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-09 18:01:40 +0000 UTC]

I haven't seen either of those. *FAIL*

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-10 22:39:30 +0000 UTC]

OFF WITH YE.
GO WATCH THEM.
NAO.

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-11 14:59:32 +0000 UTC]

.....maybe not right this minute, but at some point!

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-11 18:30:55 +0000 UTC]

YUS.

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to ??? [2009-12-30 20:05:58 +0000 UTC]

I have no ending, WOOH. 8D
xD

Well, there could be an angsty ending or a happy one.

Happy: Kirk begins to panic, seeing the end coming near for Spock. He takes a deep breath, hugging his love close, and flaps his wings hard, grunting at the weight of the both of them. Slowly, he lets them fall back to the ground (wherever the hell that is.) Jim tends to Spock's wounds, finding that the other's pure wings were completely gone now, replaced with small, bare black ones. He frowns in guilt and as Spock awakens, they live in eternity with only each other, wandering the plains of existence.

Angsty: the already fallen angel is stricken with terror and worry. What was he to do? They were heading towards death quickly and surely. He knew his strength was not great enough to save them both, but he knew he could not live without Spock. And so, he brings them closer, kissing gently onto Spock's lips as they spiral down to darkness, with only each other.

...Felt the need to add endings there. Hooray for mini fanfics.

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-02 10:35:53 +0000 UTC]

AND ALSO, yours is the longest one one there so far!! Hurray!~ I SHALL REWARD YOU WITH PIE.

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-02 23:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Wooh!

Pie? /Pie/?! PIE?! PIEEEE!!!!! PIIIIIEEEEEEE!
-shot-

>_>

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-03 13:37:48 +0000 UTC]

......O_o Did someone just shoot you with a pie?

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-03 21:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes.
It was deliciously painful.
xD

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-02 10:34:55 +0000 UTC]

WHHHHHHHHHHY do you write so beautifully?! Whhhhhhhhhhy? ^^

.....I think I like the happy ending best, but that is possibly only because I am a sap.

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DawnoftheDusk In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-02 23:39:05 +0000 UTC]

That's really not great writing, IMO. But thank you all the same.

I think that the angsty one is written better, though I am a bit of an angst-addict.

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jazzledoodle In reply to DawnoftheDusk [2010-01-03 13:36:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm a hurt/comfort addict all the way. ^^

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nnaj In reply to ??? [2009-12-30 12:15:34 +0000 UTC]

My thoughts: Their ship has been destroyed and they're dying - but they're dying together!

(lol, i always go for such depressing stuff xD nice picture)

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jazzledoodle In reply to nnaj [2010-01-02 10:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Whhhhhhy must people give me such tragically sad stories?!

.......oh wait. It's because I drew a sad picture and asked for them. XD

Short and sweet though, good job.

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nnaj In reply to jazzledoodle [2010-01-03 00:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha!! How does that saying go: "You reap what you sow"?

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jazzledoodle In reply to nnaj [2010-01-08 17:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Darn. That told me.

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JenniCanFly In reply to ??? [2009-10-24 23:40:10 +0000 UTC]

WOW i like this!!

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jazzledoodle In reply to JenniCanFly [2009-10-30 21:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you my dear. ^^

I have this thing about drawing people falling. It's kinda odd but I like it so meh.

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advidauthor [2009-09-17 10:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Uhhhh... I dunno. *shot*

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jazzledoodle In reply to advidauthor [2009-09-17 19:34:39 +0000 UTC]

That's ok, it is pretty hard to think of stories....(I bet most people just come up with something similar to mine).

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advidauthor In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-20 23:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, all of my possible ideas are taken. 'Sides, my mind can't really work with guy+guy outside of brotherly relationships. (seems like the pic might call for that judging by the other captions)

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jazzledoodle In reply to advidauthor [2009-09-21 18:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh! Okies, sorry.

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advidauthor In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-21 21:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Nah, no need to appologize!

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Insanityforever In reply to ??? [2009-09-11 16:10:42 +0000 UTC]

I just LOOOOOVE Kirk in this picture. Like MORE than any other picture of Kirk I've seen EVER. Just the desperate way he's hanging on to Spock.

Okay, say the angel wings are metaphoric, and the black is cause Kirk's not so pure as Spock, and he admits everything to Spock; including the fact he loves him, which is tinting his wings more than anything (guilt and ascaredness) and Spock just takes his hand, and tells him everything through his mind. But Kirk TOLD Spock he loved him cause Spock's dying. Which is partly why he's a sad.



Yuh, that's all I got.

Oh, one thing, the feet are kinda weird. but KUDOS AND BRAN FLAKES TO YOU!

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jazzledoodle In reply to Insanityforever [2009-09-11 16:13:28 +0000 UTC]

....I know the feet are weird.....the hands are a bit too. Stuuuupeeeeeed feet.
O_O Thankies but give me an ending to that where Spock isn't dying.

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Insanityforever In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-11 16:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Just cut that bit out. Kirk is crying acoz he's ascared that Spock won't love him back, but he does.

OR, Spock is deadly serious and says he can't love Jim, and THAT'S why he's crying.

I haff a feeling you'll pick less angsty, but I think the more angsty works better. Anyway, it's up to you. That's my little present gift for you ^^

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jazzledoodle In reply to Insanityforever [2009-09-11 16:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Angsty doesn't have to mean DYING DAMMIT JIM.

Anywho~ I put it up.

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Insanityforever In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-11 16:44:15 +0000 UTC]

YEAH, it DIDN'T involve dying. Just Spock saying he couldnee love Kirk.

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drwhofreak [2009-09-08 21:00:41 +0000 UTC]

My backstory is...

well essentially spock has been really hurt (phsically and emotionally) and is in the Vulcan version of a coma. Kirkinitiates a mind meld with comatose Spock and this is their minds inside the mindmeld and Kirk finds that in his mind Spock is just falling, falling, falling, so kirk flies down (their minds have wings idk why) and tries to stop him falling but when he reaches him he realises that now Spock is dragging him down and he is falling too and he doesn't know how to stop....

Shit that may be the best idea i've had for years. YOU HAVE INSPIRED ME WITH YOUR AWESOME DRAWING.

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jazzledoodle In reply to drwhofreak [2009-09-10 19:52:19 +0000 UTC]

I AM INSPIRATION ON A STICK.
YUUUUMMMMMM~

That's really good...it's SAD *fake crys* but still am-ez-er-ing. SO good infact that it's going in the hall of fame otherwise known as the artist's comments. ^^

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drwhofreak In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-10 20:47:23 +0000 UTC]

MMMMM INSPIRATION

aww thank you! I didn't mean for it to be sad. I'm sure if i had gone further it would've somehow ended up with super hot mindmeld kissing
I just liked the suspense

The other ideas of awesomeness in the awesome hall of fame are also awesome

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jazzledoodle In reply to drwhofreak [2009-09-18 17:11:02 +0000 UTC]

ALWAYS GOOD WITH KETCHUP. YUH-HUH.

It WAS sad but that's to go with the picture I guess; falling and bleeding tends not to scream happiness.

YEAH. AWESOMENESS TENDS TO BE AWESOME. LIFE'LL JUST DO THAT TO YA.

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drwhofreak In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-19 13:08:55 +0000 UTC]

EVERYTHING'S GOOD WITH KETCHUP. Ice-cream, jam, shoes...

I guess...

OH YEAH!

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jazzledoodle In reply to drwhofreak [2009-09-19 15:45:13 +0000 UTC]

I've had ice cream with ketchup before.
...I am slightly disgusted by the idea of jam and ketchup though.

EEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. JAM.

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drwhofreak In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-20 13:40:28 +0000 UTC]

lol
it was my inner Izzard coming out there

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jazzledoodle In reply to drwhofreak [2009-09-20 14:29:59 +0000 UTC]

Sounds painful. O_O

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drwhofreak In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-20 15:06:33 +0000 UTC]

lol. that would be so funny if i budded Eddie Izzards

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jazzledoodle In reply to drwhofreak [2009-09-20 15:11:49 +0000 UTC]

I think I'd be a bit scared before I remembered to laugh. O_O

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drwhofreak In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-20 15:38:33 +0000 UTC]

YEAH BUT IT WOULD BE SO AWESOME.

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jazzledoodle In reply to drwhofreak [2009-09-20 16:00:49 +0000 UTC]

....IF YOU SAY SO. XD

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drwhofreak In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-20 16:22:30 +0000 UTC]

yeah cos i could just keep budding little Eddies who would all do stand up for me and sit on my shoulder and wear dresses and be awesome.

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Blackkolors In reply to ??? [2009-09-08 18:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Love the movement in this! Because of the bg, it really looks like they're falling. Great!

Took me a while until I realized the green stuff was spocks blood. xD

I also like the expressions!

Good work!

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jazzledoodle In reply to Blackkolors [2009-09-08 18:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!~

I was so tempted to do really dark red blood......it would have looked so cool. >.< Stupeeeed Spock.

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Blackkolors In reply to jazzledoodle [2009-09-08 19:15:16 +0000 UTC]

yeah! I'm kinda fascinated by blood. And I kinda like its taste. Don't be scared, I'm no vampire, lol

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