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Description So there ya have it. My Naruto doujinshi, PAGE ONE. Featuring my fave kage and kunoichi.

I had a poll asking how I should do this doujinshi after I finished the lineart and the majority voted for clean lineart with text. Phew, thank you guys! That makes things a lot easier for me.

But I figured I should give it a try and do some backgrounds and a little bit of tones and a little bit of color for the first page. Here on out, it'll be more simplistic and clean in style. A sorta imitation to Kishimoto's style (or in the shonen manga style tradition).

Surprisingly, the background didn't take me much time. Probably a 2-3 hours spread out thinly through the past week at the most. What helped me tremendously is my Rurouni Kenshin manga. LOL...XD; I also used a little bit of Hikaru no Go manga as well. Gave me ideas for little details. I'm still not completely happy, but its a little cooler than before when I was just going to submit it plain.

Oh yeah, drawing Gaara's sand is a bitch. THAT took me a while to do.

Anyways, for anyone whose confused, visiting Kazekage Gaara just "materialized" himself into Naruto's apartment building. Going up the stairs, he spots someone in front of Naruto's apartment door.


I don't know when the next page will come out, since I'll be busy with my other projects, but for now...I hope you guys like. ^^ Enjoy!


Naruto series Β© Masashi Kishimoto
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jbramx2 In reply to ??? [2007-09-08 19:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll try not to disappoint.

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Jayfairchild In reply to ??? [2007-09-05 00:33:22 +0000 UTC]

It looks really cool, for some reason I love Gaara's lip in the top right, it just looks so erm pretty, I like the way you drew hinatas outfit too, most of the time I think it makes her look kind of balky, but the way you made it makes it look smooth and lovely. Yay for Gaahina, (or that what I think its about, if not feel free to bonk me on the head)! And the lines are so wonderful,so perfect!

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jbramx2 In reply to Jayfairchild [2007-09-08 19:48:49 +0000 UTC]

hee hee, thank you. Expect more prettylips!Gaara. He's my fashon model in this series. yeah, I figured I'd slim down Hinata's outfit a bit. Squee! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! ^o^

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xBlackWindDragonx In reply to ??? [2007-09-01 14:52:11 +0000 UTC]

yaaaaaaay Gaara!!! Squee ! (and thus far I love the dialogue, sure you dont have much said, but whats said sounds lie Gaara)

And cn I just say the art is just .. wow ... yeah that about sums it up right about there

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jbramx2 In reply to xBlackWindDragonx [2007-09-20 04:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you! Still busy with work and school, but when I can I'll continue this. *second page needs to be cleaned up right now...*

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xBlackWindDragonx In reply to jbramx2 [2007-09-28 00:27:30 +0000 UTC]

very awesome! I'll be waiting!

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Mangabaka [2007-09-01 05:42:39 +0000 UTC]

This is so good *w* I'm loving the way you draw Gaara (i love him! T_T) and Narruto kun~
Keep the good work dear TwT
I hope you updated this doujin soon T_T

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jbramx2 In reply to Mangabaka [2007-09-08 20:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^o^ I'm happy you like it! Yes, I'm a little busy with school and work lately, but I will! Thank you!

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Mangabaka In reply to jbramx2 [2007-09-09 23:36:44 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome dear ^_^
I don't mind waiting *w* for you updating this awesome work, as well as you other arts ^_^ you really good, keep doing what you do best! And good luck at school >w< (i need too TwT)

P.D.: i love the way you draw lips and noses TwT~

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jbramx2 In reply to Mangabaka [2008-01-05 04:41:20 +0000 UTC]

yay! ^o^ (am out of school now...so... yeah, getting started on it again... X3

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Mangabaka In reply to jbramx2 [2008-01-05 07:12:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear that!! >w<

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Dwellin [2007-08-19 16:08:41 +0000 UTC]

I love the clean lines you have here, you have done an impressive job. I can't wait to see more!

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jbramx2 In reply to Dwellin [2007-08-20 19:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Squee! thank you! I'm happy to hear that.

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Firekitsune2z [2007-08-19 02:28:37 +0000 UTC]

You are so freakin' talented I NVU so bad!

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jbramx2 In reply to Firekitsune2z [2007-08-20 18:44:58 +0000 UTC]

waaagh! no, don't nv me! Thank you!

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Mic---Mic [2007-08-17 05:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Aieh it's wonderful it fills me with hope of another excellent GaaHina doujinshi^^

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jbramx2 In reply to Mic---Mic [2007-09-20 08:05:19 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you! Yes, I'll try continuing this when things slow down with school.

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HannahSakura [2007-08-11 07:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Luv! ^-^

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jbramx2 In reply to HannahSakura [2007-08-12 08:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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GiltLustre In reply to ??? [2007-08-06 01:19:04 +0000 UTC]

ZOMG...so pretty and cute XD I can't wait to see some GaaHina fluff XD

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Gettenshi [2007-08-03 22:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow you are good and I love the pairing GaaraHinata please continue, please *puppy eyes* ^.^

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jbramx2 In reply to Gettenshi [2007-08-15 19:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Yesh, I shall try to continue. Thank you! ^O^

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lady-hinata [2007-07-23 22:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Your artwork is realy good! Draw more! *hugs* ^^

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jbramx2 In reply to lady-hinata [2007-08-04 02:41:13 +0000 UTC]

I'll try! Thank you!

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l-Shader-l [2007-07-23 16:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Very impressive. ^^

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Mendokusee In reply to ??? [2007-07-14 23:28:50 +0000 UTC]

0__0 xD This is PERFECT @w@ I would die if you continued this ( were dying is ΓΌber happy ) I'm very excited were this story will go ^0^ Do you have it up at ff.net?

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jbramx2 In reply to Mendokusee [2008-02-02 05:30:02 +0000 UTC]

It will be continued, just give me a few more weeks, and I'll have the second page done at least.

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taixonay In reply to ??? [2007-07-11 17:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Gaara's hot and Hinata's hair is cool -don't ask where that came from; I just like long silken tresses- Anyway, like the dialogue, it made me laugh, and was Hinata running away? Hrmmm.....

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jbramx2 In reply to taixonay [2007-07-13 06:17:24 +0000 UTC]

hee hee! thank you! Yes, I hope to make Hinata's hair perfect in every shot! kk...thank you. Well, I think she had sensed someone and was rushing to leave.

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capriangel [2007-07-11 06:29:15 +0000 UTC]

aaahhhhhhh you're killing me D: come out with page two soon!!
lol. i really like how this looks so far can't wait to read more

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jbramx2 In reply to capriangel [2008-02-02 08:40:38 +0000 UTC]

hee hee, don't worry, I'll have page two in a few weeks (or sooner) I just got done with one of my colored works, so I can go back to working on the doujinshi too.

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IsisConstantine [2007-07-10 19:17:39 +0000 UTC]

very nice!

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Ti-tsiang In reply to ??? [2007-07-09 14:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Great job with Gaara!!! Take a look from here, to see Gaara if you want!

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jbramx2 In reply to Ti-tsiang [2007-07-09 17:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I got more Gaara in my scrapbooks too, in case you're curious.

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Ti-tsiang In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-12 14:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Realy!!! I want!!!

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jbramx2 In reply to Ti-tsiang [2007-07-13 08:56:48 +0000 UTC]

cools, just look at my scraps, which you can find the link on my main page at the top. ^^

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fluffy717 [2007-07-08 04:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Oooooooo.... this looks GOOD.... MUST FAV!

I... I want more...... i have this feeling that this st- doujinshi sorry will turn out to be a good one...

But it saddens fluffy to see from other comments that we wont be seeing your fav female nin for a while.... fluffy likes her ALOT tooz... and most of the female nin tooz.... cept i've always had a love/hate thing for Ino/Sakura...

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jbramx2 In reply to fluffy717 [2007-07-08 21:28:41 +0000 UTC]

ah, she'll show up! if you're thinking of HInata that is...Oo; but yeah, she'll be here. Thank you so much!

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fluffy717 In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-09 00:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Yah, i knew pretty much that she'd end up back in the story.... but you said in a comment on this that we wouldnt be seeing her for a bit... But knowing that she will end up back in the story, and your awesome work shall keep me happy till she does~

No problem, you deserve every word of praise you get~

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Ylenaj234 In reply to ??? [2007-07-08 01:33:28 +0000 UTC]

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

GAAHINA! GAAHINA! I LOVE YOU! GAAHINA!!! >W<

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jbramx2 In reply to Ylenaj234 [2007-07-08 04:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you! ^^

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Foxy-Sierra In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 23:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Is that Hinata-chan? O.O

And I can see why the sand would be a bitch! >_O

But it came out so awesome! Excellent work!

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jbramx2 In reply to Foxy-Sierra [2007-07-08 02:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Squee, yesh. ^o^ hee, it is. I'm kinda dreading future pages cuz of it...LOL. Squee, thank you! ^o^

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Warrior-of-Ruin In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 22:44:58 +0000 UTC]

oooh!!! is it gona be gaaraxhinata pairing?

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jbramx2 In reply to Warrior-of-Ruin [2007-07-08 01:53:26 +0000 UTC]

eventually, yeah.

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Warrior-of-Ruin In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-13 10:13:52 +0000 UTC]

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Hinata-Hyuuga-san [2007-07-07 21:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow~ It's here its here It looks amazing great job on the background and the sand and everything XDD I love it it look soo good I can't wait till the next page~ It looks very interesting ^_^

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jbramx2 In reply to Hinata-Hyuuga-san [2007-07-08 04:41:19 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you! I'm happy you like it.

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Hunter-Wolf In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 16:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Lovely ... i like the way you used tones here ... it looks very nice

( Nice job on drawing garaa's sand .. i know how floating sand can be tough to draw )

Will await for more pages

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jbramx2 In reply to Hunter-Wolf [2007-07-07 20:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww! thank you, they were kinda troublesome, and I'm still not too satisfied, but it made for an interesting experiment of sorts.

lol, yeah the sand was terrible. right now my biggest lament is that upper "strand" of sand. It was really cool, but then I had to add the lines from the background and it just ruined it. Kinda loses its focus. But it had looked nice...

Yes! I will try to churn out another page within a month. Right now I'm actually working to finish my colored works. I'm thinking if possible, I'll put out a comic page, then a colored page, and then a comic page again. I don't want my gallery to get full of too much b/w art. I like color.

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