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So there ya have it. My Naruto doujinshi, PAGE ONE. Featuring my fave kage and kunoichi.I had a poll asking how I should do this doujinshi after I finished the lineart and the majority voted for clean lineart with text.
But I figured I should give it a try and do some backgrounds and a little bit of tones and a little bit of color for the first page. Here on out, it'll be more simplistic and clean in style. A sorta imitation to Kishimoto's style (or in the shonen manga style tradition).
Surprisingly, the background didn't take me much time. Probably a 2-3 hours spread out thinly through the past week at the most. What helped me tremendously is my Rurouni Kenshin manga. LOL...XD; I also used a little bit of Hikaru no Go manga as well. Gave me ideas for little details. I'm still not completely happy, but its a little cooler than before when I was just going to submit it plain.
Oh yeah, drawing Gaara's sand is a bitch. THAT took me a while to do.
Anyways, for anyone whose confused, visiting Kazekage Gaara just "materialized" himself into Naruto's apartment building. Going up the stairs, he spots someone in front of Naruto's apartment door.
I don't know when the next page will come out, since I'll be busy with my other projects, but for now...I hope you guys like. ^^ Enjoy!
Naruto series © Masashi Kishimoto
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Comments: 185
SporkRuler In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 02:19:10 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... Gaara's face looks.... peaceful... in the first box.
I like it.
The time you took to draw him//his sand really shows. It turned out famazing! I love his expression and pose.
Hm...
What is ze girl doing in front of Naruto-kun's door....?
We must find out, ne?
NE.
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jbramx2 In reply to SporkRuler [2007-07-07 03:35:05 +0000 UTC]
He does, indeed. When he's not doing anything "ninja", in my story, he's grown to be pretty mellow.
Waii! thank you! When I sketched it out all I did was "WHOOSH" line here and "WHOOSH" line there, and when it came to inking I was like...shit! how am I going do this?? But yay, after looking at a few Gaara fanarts I got an idea, (twas sad, cuz I couldn't find any scenes of him "materializing" in any of my mangas. I'm pretty sure I have one somewhere, but I couldn't find it! XD;; So I improvised...) hee hee, thank you again!
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SporkRuler In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-07 13:54:21 +0000 UTC]
"Are you gellin'?" "Yea, I'm gellin'. Like Gaara of the Desert."
....
My brother said that while looking over my shoulder.
Haha! I see. Again, it turned out famazing! Yay, improvising!
Haha... anytime, lovely.
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jbramx2 In reply to SporkRuler [2007-07-07 20:24:33 +0000 UTC]
oh my god...
...your brother slays me, he SLAYS ME.
what a riot...
Yes, it actually looked a lot worse when I started out, he really looked like a run-way model. Very scary. LOL.
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SporkRuler In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-08 01:31:13 +0000 UTC]
He's still here. He says, "Haha. Well, that's an ego boost. Thanks."
Hmm.. Gaara as a runway model....
...
Evan has to say one more thing.
"Oh, yea, Gaara. Work it. Strut that stuff. Shake your boot-ay."
...
I apologize for my twin's behavior.
He just had pizza.
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jbramx2 In reply to SporkRuler [2007-07-08 01:52:39 +0000 UTC]
No prob!
lmao...well Gaara does have the uh...expression-less pale face and cool clothing going for him. He's not buff either, so yeah, he'd be like a model for industrial fashion.
aww! I WANT PIZZA!
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SporkRuler In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-10 03:36:37 +0000 UTC]
:]
Hmm... now there's an interessting thought...
Gaara as an Abercrombie model...
Or would he be Hot Topic....
Here. I internetically give you pizza.
-gives you pizza-
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jbramx2 In reply to SporkRuler [2007-07-10 04:05:38 +0000 UTC]
uh, yeah, he'd totally be hot topic.
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SporkRuler In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-12 02:19:25 +0000 UTC]
Totally.
And he would ROCK it.
Rock on, Gaara. Rock on.
...
And have about 923478932748 more fangirls.
And we all know that that is ALL that he needs.
x]
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Dranxis In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 02:05:31 +0000 UTC]
Awesome first page! I'm looking forward to reading it. I really like the way you drew Gaara, and Hinata's hair (I'm assuming that's Hinata?) looks purty.
Oh, dunno if you got it in your inbox or whatnot, but here's that Ergo Proxy fanart I promised: [link]
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jbramx2 In reply to Dranxis [2007-07-07 02:53:38 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Happy you like. ^^
You are so evil, but I love it! Thank you!
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Dranxis In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-07 19:36:58 +0000 UTC]
'Welcome! And whad'ya mean, evil? I'm not evil.... XD j/k
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Summoner-Lenne In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]
Yayyyyy! You posted it! For this being comedy it has a very serious name, lol.
And, ya, YAYYY!
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jbramx2 In reply to Summoner-Lenne [2007-07-07 02:07:15 +0000 UTC]
*cackling madly* Indeed, that's irony for ya. XD;; (took me an half an hour to decide on a title...) God, this word "catalyst" or "catalysis" is used in so many fanfic titles...lol, but I thought it fit the story.
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Summoner-Lenne In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-07 03:19:18 +0000 UTC]
I remeber one fic... didn't have a name, so the author was all 'Hey people, gimme ideas!" and she combined them, and it became the most absolutely ridiculous horrible name in existence. Like. "Amber ice, the love of the killer" or something. Except a million times fruitier. It was horrible.
Was reminded, lol. And yesh, it works, .
Btw JB- you thought AX was unorganized LAST year? Everyone's complaining that last year was GREAT compared to this year. *Appanretly all the big events went to hell*
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jbramx2 In reply to Summoner-Lenne [2007-07-07 03:28:21 +0000 UTC]
LMAO...yeah, that does sound horrible...
lord, I heard! I'm SOOO thankful I didn't go this year, and hey, didn't someone say the convention center in Long Beach wasn't that good? There ya go! LA convention center is huge, I've heard, so it should be okay. If not. *shrugs* I'll stick to artist alley. XD;;
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Summoner-Lenne In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-07 20:35:41 +0000 UTC]
It was baddddd.
It was pretty, great for cosplay shots, but... it was set up horribly, you had to walk SO much once you got out of the fricken exhibit hall to even get BACK to the con, and... ya. But LA is TOO huge. TOO much walking, it's bigger than we'll need it for, apparnetly the closest restaurents are blocks away so yu're stuck to the TERRIBLY over priced con food, and all the restaurants are ages away- E3 was always ended before dark, and cons tend to go all night, and it's NOT a good neighborhood- AT ALL- to be walking around in costume at at 2 am.
*Wishes E3 was still there though- SO NOT FAIR*
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jbramx2 In reply to Summoner-Lenne [2007-07-08 02:23:30 +0000 UTC]
E3? ^^?
lol, yeah, so glad we didn't go. The only thing I'm dreading about the con being in LA is that it's a new location and new locations tend to bring a bit of confusion for long time staffers and guests cuz its unfamiliar. And yeah, it being uber huge will probably factor in as well. But then again, I'm kinda glad it'll be big. I was feeling kinda claustaphobic with how huge the crowds at AX are. I'm picky, I like my cons with big wide open spaces and small crowds.
Duuude, pack a lunch! That's what Kush and I did. ^^ Any time we've gone to a con, we always take lunch with us. Last con we went to, her dad made the yummiest noodles one day, and the next day twas turkey sandwiches. ^^ And of course I supplemented my meal with japanese goodies like red bean mochi and ramune.
But WHY would you be walking around at 2 AM? dude, that's too crazy for even me the night owl who wouldn't get home till 1 in the morning. O_o; Kush and I tend to be done with cons around 9 at the latest. we're a conservative pair...
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m3ru In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 01:33:35 +0000 UTC]
YESSSSSSS I was waiting for this XDXDXD
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jbramx2 In reply to m3ru [2007-07-07 02:54:27 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to have kept you waiting.
Thank you!
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neopuff In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 01:32:41 +0000 UTC]
I think it looks cool how you just colored Gaara's "Ai" scar ^^
Is that *cough*Hinata?
I smallified it in case I'm right and you want it to be a surprise XD
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jbramx2 In reply to neopuff [2007-07-07 02:55:54 +0000 UTC]
Squee! Thank you! I figured...oh what the heck, I tried different styles of tone and lineart, why not add color as well. XD; Ah, yesh, if you'd like, it is. Won't be seeing her for a while though...
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neopuff In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-07 03:02:09 +0000 UTC]
xD
So...it's not?
Aw...man.
Eh, I'm not big on GaaHina, but I'm big on NaruHina 8D
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jbramx2 In reply to neopuff [2007-07-07 04:17:58 +0000 UTC]
Then...you might still like this...might. ^_~ (tis a part of what will be a long series of one-shots)
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shadowcat-kitty In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 01:32:32 +0000 UTC]
Omg this is like the worlds best comic
And i can't even say how cool gaara looks
(HE LOOKS SO HOT)
i love how you did the word LOVE on his head 100/100
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jbramx2 In reply to shadowcat-kitty [2007-07-07 03:51:38 +0000 UTC]
awwww! ;o; You're so nice! thank you! lol, yay! I'm glad he turned out okay. eep! actually I made a stamp of his kanji that I found somewhere on the internet (a t-shirt company) and just shrunk it and pasted it on there. of course erasing the parts that are behind his hair. But yeah, thank you so much! ^^ I aim to please.
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shadowcat-kitty In reply to jbramx2 [2007-07-07 06:24:06 +0000 UTC]
well what ever gets the job done right
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amaya-chan666 In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 01:20:01 +0000 UTC]
I love Gaara-kun! You drew it really well. Great job!
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jbramx2 In reply to amaya-chan666 [2007-07-07 01:26:07 +0000 UTC]
*bows* Thank you so much! ^^
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