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jeremy3 β Everfree part 29en
Published: 2016-01-22 15:40:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 8322; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 46
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As always, a big thanks for scootabyte.deviantart.com/ for the corrections and the rephrasing.first part:Β prevΒ part :Next part:
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You wrote "clood" instead of "cloud" in the last panel.
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Don't worry about Scootaloo. She knows to poke it with a stick, not her hoof.
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I don't know how to rephrase what she just said to beΒ grammaticallyΒ correct.
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Sweetie Belle never stops making good points. Too adorable!
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And she will surprise you, all the cutie mark crusaders will surprise you.
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Panel 6 all I can think about when AB opens her mouth is "ALAKU AKBAR"
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Screw Scootaloo. She's the one who got you into this mess to begin with. She deserves whatever karma punishment she gets.
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bloom is not scary. now don't mind her as she creeps behind you, everything will be fine yes very fine no issue HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAaaaaaa........ errr I mean keep looking forward ^^
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Sweetie's got no tact... but Bloomy had to see that coming
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Well, their voice actors are Canadian...
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Oups , I will fix that.
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She's behind them, so Sweetie is afraid that the cloud will encounter Scoot.
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Yep ya forgot about her you guys need to make sure she is alright.
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Exactly what do Sweetie mean.Β
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In the 5th panel, Bloom's mouth colors are inverted.
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Ho,thanks, I will fix that.
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All the stuff with the forest and Scootaloo are affecting AB.Β
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