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jeremy3 — Everfree part 69en
Published: 2017-03-17 15:31:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 5347; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 26
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As usual, if you find english mistake, please tell my, I will make the change as soon as I can.Thousand Thanks to snoopystallion.deviantart.com/ mustlovefrogs.deviantart.com/ phoenixflambe.deviantart.com/ and firefanatic.deviantart.com/ for the help.
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now it's time to pay cloudy you are big and bad picking on foals now lets see how you do against derpy
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BLACK HAWK DOWN!!! I repeat, BLACK HAWK DOWN!!!!
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She's gonna kick his butt!
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: Yeah that's where the rains comes out of. (bum bum crash!)
(Sorry that was a crud and bad pun )
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In panel 4, one of her names doesn't have a capital 'D' where it should.
That cloud is getting on my nerves.
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In the moment I suddenly think that Cloudy did all this just to makes Scootaloo can fly...
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Oh, Cloudy for some reason just feel anger at this moment .
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yes, not anymore when I saw him dares to zap my Scootaloo! >
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"Where are your friends?"
Also,"come in my hooves" is a bit clumsy. How about "hold on to me" or "let me carry you"?
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We are about to watch Derpy open a whole can of woop-plot
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called it XD fast food XD
and isnt it " Where are your friends" ?
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correction done, thanks.
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