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joelashimself — MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' Chapter 2-10
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I'm so excited for the next one,Love the style of your work,beautiful~
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Thank you ver much!
That's very kind of you.
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That's it? But I wanted Luna to make them beg and cry for mercy...
I MEAN
I uh, really like... the story... good narrative...
(I'm not a fanboy...)
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Haha, it's all good. My computer went down with a case of death. Working on it.
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Computer is dead.
Working on it.
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Thank you very much. I try to do my best for you guys.
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I'm glad! I enjoy drawing them.
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Starstruck the bearded?(is that what his name is? Celestias old student?)
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Thank you very much.
They're fun to draw.
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I knew I was going to feel like this...=C...curses!..well to wait for the next page!...I'ts a great comic!...congratulations on such an awesome job!..^^
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Thanks a lot! I'll keep working.
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Ahhh! Not a cliffhanger! It was getting so good!
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I've got more pages drawn up, but my CPU went kaput. I might be a minute longer.
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So, is this what Celestia needed Discord's magic for?
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Are we going to see the teleportation conundrum, here? A pony must be disassembled atom by atom in order to be transported, as light and a blueprint, a continent away, and must then be reassembled, atom by atom, by an advanced computer program from the received blueprint. But is this reconstructed mass the original pony, or a fabrication?
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I was thinking the same thing
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LOL, I can onlly imagine what the Equestrian Prison processing center sounds like:
"What's your cutie mark?"
"Um, a four leaf clover..."
"Implying what?"
"I'm lucky..."
"Apparently not... any other marks or scars?"
"Um... cracked hoof..."
"Ever contract cutie-pox?"
"No."
"History of magic?"
"Um, I'm a Pegasus..."
(Angry stare) "Answer the question, sir!"
"... I pawned an Alicorn Amulet!"
"Book'em and delouse him!"
"WHAT?"
(Spray down!)
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1 excellent set up on plot devices and character development of Flutershy and hurricane, RD and the mysterious pegasus, ant Trixie and twilight. they are clear and deliberate and gripping, causing me to crave for me information
2. well done on giving Shining armor an impact on the story. showing him having prowess in combat is a small but significant not to his character and because of it i find myself enjoying him more
3. not to be redundant but your art style is superb and it expresses the emotions of the characters very well which compliments there dialog
4.the passing is good and engaging. but. i would be carful to not let it slow down unless you have to build interests and make the reader car about a new aspect you introduce or you need to develop another one of the existing plot lines
5you have introduced a lot of very intriguing and griping elements into the story, if you are sure to finish them all and not leave the reader with un answered questions it will bring a closure to your ending that will leave your readers satisfied.
6 take these observations and statements as they are, which is my opinion. i trust you judgment far more then my advice
P.S. your doing great, keep up the good work, cant wait for more
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7. Thank you for your input.
8. I like your shirt.
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so, do you use an under image on these or what, cause it looks like you don't but i haven't met an artist who doesn't use an under image yet, so i'm interested in knowing
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Well, I have no idea what an under image is.
So, I'm gonna go with...no.
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So Celestia knows what we're up against.
Let's see if she'll share the info.
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Not bloody likely: she probably planned the whole thing!
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so, that thing is a sort of a portable warp device?
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Loved that second to last pannel. I think my favourite thing in this comic series are the expressions.
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I love your art style. Wish I could draw that well.
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Don't be so hard on yourself!
With practice comes proficiency. You're gonna do just fine.
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What practice? I haven't done drawing since High School. At least 20 yrs ago.
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You should make a drawing guide o.o
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I did actually!
I made a "how to draw" book for my senior project. Let's see, that was back in 2002.....God I'm getting old.
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