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joelashimself β MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 5 (end)
Published: 2012-05-31 18:14:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 24529; Favourites: 247; Downloads: 214
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Wheels are in motion, the stage is set.Now things can really begin.
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I've read the prologue and so far is seems quite interesting plus the expressions on the characters are excellent. Defiantly looking forward to more.
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Gonnna wait to see what going to hapend next
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Impressed. The colt protagonist reminds me of Hellsing's Alucard, just sayin' [link] Those eyes are straight up intense.
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Is it bad that the first voice I thought of when I was reading the stallion's lines was Dan Green's?
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Great, another comic to follow! Just one thing: You forgot Stranger-Stallion's horn in panel 3.
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Notice the dialogue in the panel? "Pulling your hoof-references to joking?" It's a little easter egg. Only about four people have caught it so far. I'll be hiding more in the background as the story progresses. Watch closely!
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when i first saw him i he had the look of Howl from howls moving castle.. so i have been reading his lines in christian bales voice.
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Right, so I guess I WILL have to watch you for the rest of this comic...
I love how you make even the simplistic style of My Little Pony look so rough and realistic, with all these little details around the eyes and Mouth that really lets you FEEL how worn out these Ponies are.
I also really like the design of that Stallion; not only is he enigmatic and mysterious, his mane and face also really look a bit like the previous pony generations, what with the puffy streaks and the profile. He's certainly the kind of good looking villian you really have to watch out for. Especially with the streaks covering his eyes more often than not.
So now that I've read the prologue, I'm really interested in what kind of plan he has in mind.
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Last panel: RAEP FAIC Trixie... She knows of ONE way to take Twi down a notch...
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On some points the art style looks a bit previous-gen-influenced, which is not a bad thing.
All in all I like your style and the wirtiting so far. Looking forward to more.
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The ponies are bit on a plump side but they seem well-drawn. I like the style.
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I don't like much the style of drwing but the way they talk is very immersive
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Ooh, this is quite interesting. I will look forward to more of this.
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Oooh my gosh, this is SO AWESOME /)^3^(\ I can't wait for the next installment!
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I love how you move right along with just enough pauses characterization, not dawdling around with a bunch of filler like a lot of other artists.
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Wow, you are a GREAT comic artist! I can't wait for the next part!
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Oh I'm liking this very much, love the way it looks, great story too, who doesn't love a mysterious character?
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I ... Love.. Your drawing-style! *w*
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Pride? Which pride heΒ΄s talking about? So far Twi is so modest/scared of being called prideful she rather runs home than facing Trixie in a competion. Ofc not that Trixie cares for that as long as she can 'pay her back'. Revenge and stuff ya know.
So when will there be the next part?
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OK, this is great so far! I'm really aching to see how it'll all turn out.
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Your faces and expressions are amazingly done. Definitely have to Watch you to see how this turns out.
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Damn good series of comics, I look forward to the next chapter for sure! Fine art and story, lets see where this takes Trixe...
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Very interesting, and nice drawing style you're sporting!
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This makes me want to hit the watch button.
Okay, it's very elaborate and has a distictive unique style to it. You manage to get emotion into the facial expression on an effective plane. Anatomy in relation to angles is beyond good, but I think you need to be more careful with the in-room depths. Page 2, first panel, the table in the rear looks outta place.
Nevertheless, panels vary widely in perspective and elements shown. Just don't get overboard (you didn't so far) and swap their places too much, meaning, if Trixie appears mostly on the left half of the page, don't have her on the right too suddenly again and back to left. Plus, I saw people make their characters look towards the edges of the pages, which was totally destroying the illusion of talking to each other. Though I must say, you knew that yourself I bet.
I don't think you need any more headsups form me, I get the feeling you've been very close with comics and know the basics (not that I am a pro).
I'm impressed and will patiently wait for it to continued.
Much thanks, have good day!
Regards,
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Oooh you just earned a watcher! this looks good
Also I love your expressions, very well done
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IΒ΄m sooooooo looking forward to the next parts!! This is awesome. 0.o
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...Spit take. Looking forward to the rest.
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your the best.. around.....no ones every gonna keep you down.
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I'm looking forward your comic! >wπ: 0 β©: 0
oh... not murder. still, props to mystery pony for making such a joke
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wow this was something different and im loving it. I would like to see more about it.
please keep the good work
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Called the spit-take! Also, I was a little surprised that he was joking... Oh well, nice to know he has a morbid sense of humour!
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Finally, a comic about Trixie that Trixie can actually get into... Good job, she was thoroughly impressed at the representation of her character.
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That male unicorn reminds me of Joshua from The World End With You...
Am I the only one getting that vibe? XD
I like that smug little sod, too.
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DON'T KILL HER NOOOO OH it was a joke. Hahahaha...hahaha..ahhh....
TRIXIE DON'T DO IT SOMEPONY WARN TWILIGHT AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I bet he will kill Twi and uses Trixie to cover his crime/make her the sacifical lamb. <.<
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Oh dear my dont trust him meter is goin completely bunkus
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Trixie "The Great and Powerful Trixie is not a fan of spelling mistakes, extra consonants where they shouldn't be. Trixie also hates anagrams - almost as much as people who blatantly spoil her act!"
"There's no e in my name," says Charli.
These two characters make an interesting duet. One's is real Magic, the other's is canon.
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