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joelashimself — MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 5 (end)
Published: 2012-05-31 18:14:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 24529; Favourites: 247; Downloads: 214
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Wheels are in motion, the stage is set.Now things can really begin.
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hmmm. this has my interest... and this mystery stallion has my "don't trust meter" going all over the place...
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Great Comic my friend!!!
Loved it and really like your drawing style.
Really hoping you continue it, or already have and i havnt checked yet.
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Haha, you got me there. Good stuff.
I do notice a mistake in the third panel, though. Our mysterious stallion appears to have lost his horn...
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Aha!
You're the first person to catch that so far.
Watch the background closely, I'm going to be hiding a lot more "easter eggs" in the coming chapters as an homage to the animators on the show it's self. Keep your eyes peeled!
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Not sure somepony who looks like a manga prettyboy villian should be trusted
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For some reason the newcomer's hair makes me want call him Charlie. It's kind of a girly cut.
*starts whistling a tune*
and honestly, OC ponies are not relevant at all. I mean, you need them to make new stories.
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Lastly, comrade, the comic being featured on ED is nice, but when you update with new pages or chapters, I doubt ED is gonna update (And people like me is gonna lose track), so will you take it to this club instead so that everyone will follow too when new pages are up.
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Good lookin' out, bud. Thanks.
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Not a problem, keep the new pages coming, we're looking forward to see what happens next.
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I think what creeps me out most about this character is his eyes...
o.o!
Moar plz!
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This comic has captured my interest. I'm not usually into OC ponies, but this guy just screams sketchy... Love it! 
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Thanks man.
I've always had a soft spot for pen and ink.
Glad you like it.
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To quote Andrew Hussie:
Who's this douchebag?
I don't like the looks of this fella. Looks like someone I'll really enjoy watching get taken down.
Is it just me, or is there a faint suggestion that this guy may be planning more than he claims?
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You got me hooked yo haha
cant wait to see what happens
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Really liking this!
I'm also liking that Trixie's been characterized well: she's not mindlessly evil, she just wants revenge for perceived wrongs.... which doesn't involve killin'.
Definitely looking forward to more of this!
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Despite her hate towards Twilight, I don't see Trixie as a truly heartless villain. An antagonist, yes, but a villain...not seeing it. However, this guy...His aura is speaking volumes on the Danger Scale. Whatever he's planning, I don't like it, and neither should she.
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You don't know how right you are.
More to come soon.
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I love how you draw faces! You show a lot of expressions! C:
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The poses in this series are excellent, but what i really love is the facial expressions, though i admit, trixie has strayed uncomfortably far from how you'd expect her head and face to contort. Mystery stallion i have no complaints with, however, you've got his facial movements down to a fault. Looking forward to seeing more of this series
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Sounds like you know your stuff man.
Thanks for the kind words. I'll try not to disappoint.
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A plot to kill Twilight would have been interesting to say the least.
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You're assuming there isn't one.
I wouldn't trust this guy.
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Damn I wanted him to kill her...
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...I've reached the end already? NOOOOOOOOO
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I KNEW SHE WOULD SPIT THAT DRINK OUT.
Also, "... You have ComradeDerpy's full attention".
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Very entertaining, great stuff. I can't wait for the rest!
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Whooo..had me scared for a moment..thought might have to slap someone.
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Are you thinking about coloring this? I'd love to see it in color!
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Nope. This one's in black white and shades.
Otherwise it'd take forever. I want to avoid tedium here, that way my passion for the project stays high. Thus insuring my best output.
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Honestly I think color would have just ruined the greatest thing your drawings have going for it- the facial expressions. Pretty damn amazing. I find they are different... but in a good way. Intriguing, to say the least. And I may be wrong about the whole color-ruining-thing... just my opinion. Keep up the good work!
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You have my full attention, as well. This is good stuff! Oh, and quiet about the dolphin thing, they think we don't know.
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normally i dont read multiparters, but this villain intrigues me
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