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LtCommanderData β€” The Truth of Time
Published: 2007-05-23 00:12:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description At first a complex speck of dust,
Does lye so still in dark surround.
When mass becomes too much it must,
Ignite and vast it goes no longer bound.
From this comes our great life and place,
But most of all comes time and round.
Will we be lost when life be haste,
Because we know not time’s true lull?
Because we think that we may waste?
But what if we were always wrong,
And objects, not time, move along.
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Comments: 6

bberry06 [2007-05-24 00:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Very nice is all I can say since I myself am no writer but I do like it (from what I can understand of it..) But nice! Wow

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LtCommanderData In reply to bberry06 [2007-05-29 20:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Sauron.

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favonian [2007-05-23 21:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I love THIS poem too

I enjoy writing Terza Rima poems

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LtCommanderData In reply to favonian [2007-05-29 20:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I do enjoy writing them aswell.

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Datalore [2007-05-23 02:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow O_O i dont think i've ever liked a poem not written by Poe, but that was really cool ^__^ and it makes you wonder :fav:

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LtCommanderData In reply to Datalore [2007-05-29 20:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! And I do love that Poe...

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