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A collaboration of sorts with another DeviantART user named . I befriended her recently and asked her to do two ENF stories, both of which I was satisfied with the end result.

She wanted me to do some comics based on the stories she wrote for me, so I decided to begin with this one, based on The Not-So-VIP Pass, starring the Undertale characters Bratty and Catty. Here is a link to the original story request if you're interested in reading: ENF: The Not-So-VIP Pass (Undertale)“And I hope you, my beautiful audience, all enjoyed the latest episode of ‘Cooking with a Handsome Robot’. And remember that next week, I, Mettaton, will do a concert in this very same town. It is my first concert in the surface, and I want to make it as fabulous as possible! Don’t forget to get your entries in time!”
The TV was then turned off, as both Catty and Bratty were gasping in hype. They had always been big fans of Mettaton, and hearing about a concert just made them so full of joy.
“Did you hear that Catty?” Bratty asked in excitement.
“Did you hear that Bratty?” Catty asked at the same time.
“Mettaton’s gonna do a conceeert!” Both cheered at the same time.
“Like, should we get the tickets for it? At the ticket shop or something?” Bratty kept asking, this time showing a little bit of concern.
“Nah sis, ya know pretty well Mettaton would let us in!” Catty responded, very confidently

Our tale begins with Bratty and Catty in their new home on the surface, where they hear of Mettaton having a new concert. The girls end up neglecting to buy tickets because they have this delusion of being married to Mettaton and think that this entitles them to enter the concert without needing tickets. The pair get stopped in their tracks by the guards 01 and 02 (now working as guards for Mettaton after the Royal Guard was disbanded), who make it clear that, fantasy of being married to your favorite celebrity or not, they still can't be let in unless they've paid for a ticket, which is too late to be done now because they've all sold out.

Catty is very disappointed by this development, but Bratty has an idea of how they can get into the Mettaton concert without having to pay for tickets and without getting caught by the guards.

If you've already read the original story, you may notice that I've made some slight changes to the dialogue. While I did ask for the original artist to come up with this story in the first place, I thought it would be better for me to be slightly more original in the comic version, as some might find it boring just to see me illustrate what someone else has already written out.

I advise you wait until I'm done with the entire tale before comparing this comic to the original written story.

No Mature Content warning here because there's no profanity or nudity. At least, not yet.

Next Page: The Not-So-VIP Pass: The Comic Page 2

Undertale (c) Toby Fox

Description

Made with DeviantArt muro

A collaboration of sorts with another DeviantART user named . I befriended her recently and asked her to do two ENF stories, both of which I was satisfied with the end result.

She wanted me to do some comics based on the stories she wrote for me, so I decided to begin with this one, based on The Not-So-VIP Pass, starring the Undertale characters Bratty and Catty. Here is a link to the original story request if you're interested in reading: ENF: The Not-So-VIP Pass (Undertale)“And I hope you, my beautiful audience, all enjoyed the latest episode of ‘Cooking with a Handsome Robot’. And remember that next week, I, Mettaton, will do a concert in this very same town. It is my first concert in the surface, and I want to make it as fabulous as possible! Don’t forget to get your entries in time!”
The TV was then turned off, as both Catty and Bratty were gasping in hype. They had always been big fans of Mettaton, and hearing about a concert just made them so full of joy.
“Did you hear that Catty?” Bratty asked in excitement.
“Did you hear that Bratty?” Catty asked at the same time.
“Mettaton’s gonna do a conceeert!” Both cheered at the same time.
“Like, should we get the tickets for it? At the ticket shop or something?” Bratty kept asking, this time showing a little bit of concern.
“Nah sis, ya know pretty well Mettaton would let us in!” Catty responded, very confidently

Our tale begins with Bratty and Catty in their new home on the surface, where they hear of Mettaton having a new concert. The girls end up neglecting to buy tickets because they have this delusion of being married to Mettaton and think that this entitles them to enter the concert without needing tickets. The pair get stopped in their tracks by the guards 01 and 02 (now working as guards for Mettaton after the Royal Guard was disbanded), who make it clear that, fantasy of being married to your favorite celebrity or not, they still can't be let in unless they've paid for a ticket, which is too late to be done now because they've all sold out.

Catty is very disappointed by this development, but Bratty has an idea of how they can get into the Mettaton concert without having to pay for tickets and without getting caught by the guards.

If you've already read the original story, you may notice that I've made some slight changes to the dialogue. While I did ask for the original artist to come up with this story in the first place, I thought it would be better for me to be slightly more original in the comic version, as some might find it boring just to see me illustrate what someone else has already written out.

I advise you wait until I'm done with the entire tale before comparing this comic to the original written story.

No Mature Content warning here because there's no profanity or nudity. At least, not yet.

Next Page: The Not-So-VIP Pass: The Comic Page 2

Undertale (c) Toby Fox