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Published: 2016-04-10 14:01:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 3524; Favourites: 254; Downloads: 28
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Guess who bought a new ballpoint pen yesterday!that's right
*Gah*, I love the scapulas on this one... finally did an anatomically correct night fury back, yay Β°vΒ° The head might be a bit big for my taste though... What do you think?
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ugh yess i can clearly see you put a thorough attention to his anatomy especially on shoulder blades and the wing bones before I even see your description! Great job! totally luuuvvv the scapulas and your art style ugh Β .. i just knew what those are called LOL thanks for the knowledge xD
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God I loveΒ being anatomically correct. My favourite muscle is the trapezius, it's so awesome how it works with the neck and the shoulders. No problem x)
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Whoa ! cool Night Fury ! though I kinda agree with you on the 'head a little too big'Β but still cool though
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Thanks! Well I'd try to argue that it's a 'teen' if ya get what I mean... But he already has the little nubs on the chin from the 2nd movie when Toothless is already 19-21ys old, so that excuse doesn't really work xD
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Well Toothless is Hiccup's age in the 2nd movie, so about 20 something, technically he's kind of a young adult
but seriously, this is one cool Night Fury !
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Yeah, but his proportions are different from mine, that's my point C: Thanks nonetheless though!
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|| Oooow gawd damn, this is UNFRIGINBELIEVABLE! That NF isΒ SOO BADASS! The only thingie - you should draw the wings bigger or it's gonna be impossible for it to fly! xD Anyway, great job! ^^
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A few people pointed that out already, but I agree with all of you. Thanks for the critical feedback C:
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Really amazing! Love the expression and detail...
The Night Fury looks like an owl... Β 8)
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It does. I thought of a mix between a cat and a bird of prey when I did the pose :3
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Definitely; nice pose Β :3
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You're welcome!Β Β
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Ooo very nice! Β I think the head is fine, I think the neck might be a little to thick for the angle it's at. Β It also looks very stiff and straight, even though the head is turned around quite a bit, so there should be some contortion int he neck too.
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I thought so too! There should at least be a few wrinkles on the neck around the chin to indicate a 'twisting' motion. Thanks for the feedback
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I think the head is just fine! Love the expression on his face!
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good anatomy! 
left wing looks a little short though ^^
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I agree, mainly the webbing should be wider. Thanks a lot though!
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I like dragons with large/ long wings the most
it seems more realistic and is damn majestic/noble
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They do indeed. I don't think it would fit that well with a Night Fury though
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yeah nightfury is all about efficiency ^^
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Agreed! Took me long to actually get the headshape right :V
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you did well on that head
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Daaaaang, this is fiiiine!!!!!! I adore the back and wing anatomy, although I would agree with some that the fingers need to be longer
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Yup, the wing is a bit too short there, but I think it's mainly because of the webbing. Thank you!
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Not a problem, love your art!!
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Yay, new pen! 
I hate drawing backs XD
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Really? I love it. Drawing all the definition of the scapula and the trapezius is such fun to me xD
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The wings need to be wayyy bigger. It's hard to achieve, but the wing to body size is different. The head is fine!
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You're right, although sizes can be tricky while the wings are folded. You should also consider perspective. The right wing for example looks good to me, ifΒ you think of it as pointing slightly 'forward' (from the nightfury's pov)-Β but I'd definitely change the left one. That one also looks clumsy in the way he 'holds' the wing. Should be more stretched out.
Dunnow about the head. Might be the neck that's too thick, but something definitely looks odd to me. Thanks for your feedback, I really value honest critique C:
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Yes very true. Yea I can see what you mean. Naw I think the head just looks off with the wings being a bit weird. I always love to make the wings huge for some reason. No problem! I love to help out people.
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So you think solving the wing problem would've solved the head problem aswell?
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