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NaterRang β€” Core of the Apple -Part 1

Published: 2012-08-26 13:59:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 162016; Favourites: 2359; Downloads: 1735
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Finally it's up!

This has been the culmination of a project months in the making! (Though it's also a project that should've been finished a months ago. )

As is mentioned in the title this is part 1 of a 2 part story.

-I hesitate to mention this but, for those offering critique I must make a clarification; This has been a project months in the making. I'm not asking you to hold back or pull punches, rather just be aware that my art has improved since I originally sketched this thing out. Please take a look at one or two of my other recent pictures before you tailor your advice based on this picture alone.

-Anyway hope you guys enjoy!

Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again provided by !

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Comments: 550

Nazus-98 [2013-07-16 18:15:24 +0000 UTC]

You....

You made me cry..

And you have earned yourself a watch


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cottoncloudyfilly [2013-07-16 11:28:55 +0000 UTC]

this is sad

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weirdnwild91 [2013-07-16 04:21:40 +0000 UTC]

;;O;;

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zuko4444 [2013-07-16 03:21:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm in the same boat as Applebloom with this one in regards to my dad. I will never get the chance to know him, especially on a personal level.

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Energythehedgehog In reply to ??? [2013-07-16 03:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Fold out your hands
Give me a sign
Hold down your lies
Lay down next to me
Don't listen when I screamΒ 
Bury your thoughts(DOUBTS) and fall asleep
Find out....I was just a bad dream

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Energythehedgehog In reply to ??? [2013-07-16 03:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Fold out your hands
Give me a sign
Hold down your lies
Lay down next to me
Don't listen when I screamΒ 
Bury your thoughts(DOUBTS) and fall asleep
Find out....I was just a bad dream

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ElectricSky25 In reply to ??? [2013-07-16 02:34:33 +0000 UTC]

ya know a nice name for thier mom would be applefall may she rest in peace.

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BlazeHeartPanther In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 19:36:43 +0000 UTC]

oh, so sad T_T

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DarthWill3 [2013-07-13 18:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Aw... Poor A.B.

You know, Sweetie Belle and Pipsqueak make a cute couple!

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GeekWithClip-Ons In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 14:11:59 +0000 UTC]

I prefer Apple Bloom's name being two words (I think it flows better), but that's the only nitpick I have. This is a really good comic. ^_^

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Scarheart76 In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 14:10:27 +0000 UTC]

...I cried again....

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CamomiIe In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 10:45:25 +0000 UTC]

You made my cry.... Eeehh... Just liquid pride.

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WarriorCats098 In reply to ??? [2013-07-09 10:57:21 +0000 UTC]

My...feels ;A;

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Advent3546 In reply to ??? [2013-07-05 20:13:31 +0000 UTC]

I really like Pip and his mum. She looks so pretty.

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Light-Hoof In reply to ??? [2013-07-04 18:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Stop making me feel feelings about stuff.

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NaterRang In reply to Light-Hoof [2013-07-05 00:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah, but the feelz have only just begun!

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Light-Hoof In reply to NaterRang [2013-07-05 01:19:59 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* ya...ya....

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Leviarex [2013-06-18 07:29:02 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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ccontyanya [2013-06-11 03:46:05 +0000 UTC]

OMG I'M GOING TO CRY! :,(

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zWolffangz [2013-05-25 01:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Scootaloo?

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DragonBoy387 [2013-05-23 07:35:48 +0000 UTC]

ah, how i love these comi- URCK!
oh no...FEELS. NOT THE FEELS! HNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.

seriously, great comic. i'll go read part two.

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Wilson8787 [2013-05-20 02:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey look on the bright side: Bruce Wayne lost both his parents when he was young too, but that didn't stop him from becoming Batman.

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Eevee-Adopt-Mart [2013-05-20 00:38:24 +0000 UTC]

the last few frames made me cry. so sad

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ZlayerDK [2013-05-17 23:35:24 +0000 UTC]

it is sad and god nice work

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MisterKaos [2013-05-17 23:30:39 +0000 UTC]

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GamziMakr [2013-05-11 03:25:47 +0000 UTC]

SAD FACE!!!! D: D: D: D: D:

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XxWolfsongBlazexX [2013-05-09 00:12:39 +0000 UTC]

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Coltboy [2013-05-08 04:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Celestia WHYYYY!

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MisterKaos In reply to Coltboy [2013-05-17 23:31:11 +0000 UTC]

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Coltboy In reply to MisterKaos [2013-05-18 06:00:23 +0000 UTC]

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MisterKaos In reply to Coltboy [2013-05-18 07:53:05 +0000 UTC]

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GT4tube In reply to MisterKaos [2013-09-15 15:46:00 +0000 UTC]

lol

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SlyTheWolf [2013-05-06 13:38:04 +0000 UTC]

Poor AppleBloom. ;~;

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KillerMuffin096 [2013-05-05 02:38:52 +0000 UTC]

AH MAN! Why did you have to go and make me all sad!

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ThatGuyOnTheInterweb [2013-05-04 22:14:28 +0000 UTC]

AGH! The FEELS! Now, I have to watch you to see how it ends!

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Karlo111 In reply to ??? [2013-05-04 21:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice it made a tear in my eye

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Emerald-Flash In reply to Karlo111 [2013-05-09 13:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha, your avatar fits so perfectly with the komment
RD ftw!

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care623 [2013-05-04 16:18:17 +0000 UTC]

I can't remember the last time something pony-related actually made me cry. well done

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Leviantha In reply to ??? [2013-05-04 04:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the Feels.

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Obabscribbler In reply to ??? [2013-04-19 01:30:00 +0000 UTC]

I hope you don't mind, but this comic played on my mind for literally months. So ... I have put together a motion comic for it on YouTube. [link] I hope this is okay.

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NaterRang In reply to Obabscribbler [2013-04-21 19:33:59 +0000 UTC]

I apologize for the late reply.

I am VERY impressed with your video. I've read this comic probably a hundred times while I was working on it, but your performance still made me misty-eyed even though I knew the material by heart. I'm going to post a journal entry about it very soon to encourage more people to watch your video. It also reignited my passion for this particular project, and if I don't hit any major snags, I should have the next part ready in the next two weeks.

Good work!

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Demorgorgon In reply to ??? [2013-03-26 22:06:02 +0000 UTC]

THE FEELZ THEY BURN

RIGHT IN THE CHILDHOOD

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ghostbusters2 [2013-03-22 23:04:08 +0000 UTC]

when will part 2 be done i want to know

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phforever [2013-03-08 00:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Dem feels ;_;

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GoldenPonyZ [2013-03-03 05:12:10 +0000 UTC]

D':

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GremlockF In reply to ??? [2013-03-03 02:38:09 +0000 UTC]

Just thought I'd ask... Is there a part 2 or did this just come out resently?

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NaterRang In reply to GremlockF [2013-03-03 04:10:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm still working on part 2. It's a very slow process, but I'm working on it.

Here's a secret sneak peek: [link]

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mibevan [2013-03-03 01:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Now heres the thing Applejacks parents
Lauren fausrt did a Q&A where soembody asked where her folks were. this was her exact answer

To put it bluntly, we just never figured it out. I just liked the feeling of them living with their Granny, but keeping the family dynamic tight and small. To be honest, I would like to simply say that they passed away somehow, but it's just it would have likely been deemed too sad for a kids' show and I don't think it would have ever been approved. There was brief discussion of them being traveling salesponies or explorers, but since we never needed the information in an episode, nothing was ever made official. So it will have to remain a mystery until someone decides to define it.

My personal thing is to keep that theory set

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parkourpete In reply to ??? [2013-03-03 01:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Dem feels

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HalflingPony In reply to ??? [2013-02-26 04:31:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if you've been in this position yourself, but you got it exactly right.
I've been where Apple Bloom is in this piece. Literally. My loss was a sibling I never had a chance to know. It's amazing the stupid little things that can bring the grief back, even decades later. Her grief over the lost possibilities of a relationship, her embarrassment at her own grief... it's all just spot on.

I'm crying again, now.

Well done. I salute you.

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